Ⅷ. (2025·无锡长泾片区期中)书面表达(15 分)
假如你是阳光中学七年级学生李华,学校即将迎来一批来自英国的交换生,学校国际处发布了一条招募寄宿家庭(host family)的公告,你很感兴趣。请你根据招募要求写一份申请信(application letter)。
Notice
A group of exchange students from the UK are coming for a one-month study in our school. They need 20 host families.
Do you want to offer(提供) a host family? If so, please write an application letter to introduce(介绍) your home:
How far is your home from our school?
How does your house or flat look?
How many people are there in your family?
What are they like?
What about your neighbourhood there?
注意事项:1. 所写内容必须包括以上所提供的信息,可适当发挥;2. 词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a Grade 7 student. My family would like to apply to become one of the host families for the exchange students.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是阳光中学七年级学生李华,学校即将迎来一批来自英国的交换生,学校国际处发布了一条招募寄宿家庭(host family)的公告,你很感兴趣。请你根据招募要求写一份申请信(application letter)。
Notice
A group of exchange students from the UK are coming for a one-month study in our school. They need 20 host families.
Do you want to offer(提供) a host family? If so, please write an application letter to introduce(介绍) your home:
How far is your home from our school?
How does your house or flat look?
How many people are there in your family?
What are they like?
What about your neighbourhood there?
注意事项:1. 所写内容必须包括以上所提供的信息,可适当发挥;2. 词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a Grade 7 student. My family would like to apply to become one of the host families for the exchange students.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案：Ⅷ. One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a Grade 7 student. My family would like to apply to become one of the host families for the exchange students. I live with my parents in a house near our school. And it is not far from school, only ten minutes by underground. Our house is not big, but has a beautiful garden full of flowers. Sometimes we enjoy the sunshine and chat there.
My family is made up of three members, my parents and me. My mother is very kind and she often teaches me some ways to get along with others. My father is creative. He often makes wonderful kites in different shapes.
Around my home, you can find some Western restaurants. So you can pick whatever food you like. Moreover, the people in my neighbourhood are quite friendly. They are ready to help you with all kinds of problems at any time. It's comfortable to live in our neighbourhood.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①体裁:本文要求学生写一封申请信,介绍自己的家庭及社区环境,应是一篇说明文。②时态:一般现在时。③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍家的位置及家是什么样的;第二步,介绍自己的家庭成员;第三步,介绍自己的邻居和周边情况。
[亮点短语]
①be far from 离……远 ②by underground 乘地铁 ③be made up of 由……组成
[高分句型]
①It's comfortable to live in our neighbourhood.(动词不定式作主语,it 为形式主语。)
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a Grade 7 student. My family would like to apply to become one of the host families for the exchange students. I live with my parents in a house near our school. And it is not far from school, only ten minutes by underground. Our house is not big, but has a beautiful garden full of flowers. Sometimes we enjoy the sunshine and chat there.
My family is made up of three members, my parents and me. My mother is very kind and she often teaches me some ways to get along with others. My father is creative. He often makes wonderful kites in different shapes.
Around my home, you can find some Western restaurants. So you can pick whatever food you like. Moreover, the people in my neighbourhood are quite friendly. They are ready to help you with all kinds of problems at any time. It's comfortable to live in our neighbourhood.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①体裁:本文要求学生写一封申请信,介绍自己的家庭及社区环境,应是一篇说明文。②时态:一般现在时。③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍家的位置及家是什么样的;第二步,介绍自己的家庭成员;第三步,介绍自己的邻居和周边情况。
[亮点短语]
①be far from 离……远 ②by underground 乘地铁 ③be made up of 由……组成
[高分句型]
①It's comfortable to live in our neighbourhood.(动词不定式作主语,it 为形式主语。)
解析：
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求写一封申请寄宿家庭的申请信。解题思路：1. 明确体裁为申请信，时态统一用一般现在时；2. 紧扣题目给出的5个核心要点（家到学校的距离、房屋情况、家庭成员数量、家人性格、社区环境），不得遗漏；3. 结合已给出的开头结尾，适当补充细节（如花园活动、父母特长等），确保词数达标，不出现真实人名和校名；4. 分段落对应不同要点，使文章结构清晰、条理分明。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 第一段介绍家的位置与房屋情况：说明家离学校不远，乘地铁仅10分钟，房屋不大但有带花的漂亮花园，可补充在花园休闲的细节；
2. 第二段介绍家庭成员：说明家庭共3人，分别介绍父母的性格特点（妈妈友善、爸爸有创造力）；
3. 第三段介绍社区情况：说明周边有西餐厅，邻居友好，居住舒适；
全程用一般现在时，语言贴合七年级词汇量，确保覆盖所有要求要点，词数不少于80。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a Grade 7 student. My family would like to apply to become one of the host families for the exchange students. I live with my parents in a house near our school. And it is not far from school, only ten minutes by underground. Our house is not big, but has a beautiful garden full of flowers. Sometimes we enjoy the sunshine and chat there.
My family is made up of three members, my parents and me. My mother is very kind and she often teaches me some ways to get along with others. My father is creative. He often makes wonderful kites in different shapes.
Around my home, you can find some Western restaurants. So you can pick whatever food you like. Moreover, the people in my neighbourhood are quite friendly. They are ready to help you with all kinds of problems at any time. It's comfortable to live in our neighbourhood.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达、申请信写作、一般现在时
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有写作要点，时态运用准确，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，适当添加细节丰富内容，符合七年级学生的写作水平，是一篇优秀的申请信范文。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题为英语书面表达题，要求写一封申请寄宿家庭的申请信。解题思路：1. 明确体裁为申请信，时态统一用一般现在时；2. 紧扣题目给出的5个核心要点（家到学校的距离、房屋情况、家庭成员数量、家人性格、社区环境），不得遗漏；3. 结合已给出的开头结尾，适当补充细节（如花园活动、父母特长等），确保词数达标，不出现真实人名和校名；4. 分段落对应不同要点，使文章结构清晰、条理分明。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 第一段介绍家的位置与房屋情况：说明家离学校不远，乘地铁仅10分钟，房屋不大但有带花的漂亮花园，可补充在花园休闲的细节；
2. 第二段介绍家庭成员：说明家庭共3人，分别介绍父母的性格特点（妈妈友善、爸爸有创造力）；
3. 第三段介绍社区情况：说明周边有西餐厅，邻居友好，居住舒适；
全程用一般现在时，语言贴合七年级词汇量，确保覆盖所有要求要点，词数不少于80。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a Grade 7 student. My family would like to apply to become one of the host families for the exchange students. I live with my parents in a house near our school. And it is not far from school, only ten minutes by underground. Our house is not big, but has a beautiful garden full of flowers. Sometimes we enjoy the sunshine and chat there.
My family is made up of three members, my parents and me. My mother is very kind and she often teaches me some ways to get along with others. My father is creative. He often makes wonderful kites in different shapes.
Around my home, you can find some Western restaurants. So you can pick whatever food you like. Moreover, the people in my neighbourhood are quite friendly. They are ready to help you with all kinds of problems at any time. It's comfortable to live in our neighbourhood.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达、申请信写作、一般现在时
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有写作要点，时态运用准确，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，适当添加细节丰富内容，符合七年级学生的写作水平，是一篇优秀的申请信范文。
【难度系数】
0.4