Ⅹ. (2025·盐城东台期中)书面表达(15分)
为了促进东台旅游业的发展,让更多人了解东台的风土人情,东台市实验中学开展以"My Hometown"为题的英语征文活动,请你根据下列提示写一篇介绍东台的文章。
1. Where is Dongtai? (in the east of Jiangsu Province. . . )
2. Which places of interest can you visit? (Huanghai Forest Park, Anfeng Ancient Town. . . )
3. What are the local food and handicraft? (Dongtai Fish Soup Noodles, Dongtai Hair Embroidery 东台发绣)
注意事项:
1. 要点齐全,适当发挥,文章连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3. 词数80左右,文章给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数。
My Hometown
I would like to tell you something about my hometown Dongtai.
People here are kind and friendly. Welcome to Dongtai. I'm sure you'll have a fantastic time here.
为了促进东台旅游业的发展,让更多人了解东台的风土人情,东台市实验中学开展以"My Hometown"为题的英语征文活动,请你根据下列提示写一篇介绍东台的文章。
1. Where is Dongtai? (in the east of Jiangsu Province. . . )
2. Which places of interest can you visit? (Huanghai Forest Park, Anfeng Ancient Town. . . )
3. What are the local food and handicraft? (Dongtai Fish Soup Noodles, Dongtai Hair Embroidery 东台发绣)
注意事项:
1. 要点齐全,适当发挥,文章连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3. 词数80左右,文章给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数。
My Hometown
I would like to tell you something about my hometown Dongtai.
My hometown Dongtai is a beautiful seaside city in the east of Jiangsu Province. It takes about 2 hours by train to get to Dongtai from Nanjing. There are many interesting places in Dongtai. If you want to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can visit Huanghai Forest Park. If you are interested in the local people's traditional way of life, you can walk around Anfeng Ancient Town. If you come to Dongtai, don't miss delicious Dongtai Fish Soup Noodles. Dongtai is also famous for Dongtai Hair Embroidery. It has great cultural value.
People here are kind and friendly. Welcome to Dongtai. I'm sure you'll have a fantastic time here.
答案：One possible version:
My Hometown
I would like to tell you something about my hometown Dongtai.
My hometown Dongtai is a beautiful seaside city in the east of Jiangsu Province. It takes about 2 hours by train to get to Dongtai from Nanjing. There are many interesting places in Dongtai. If you want to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can visit Huanghai Forest Park. If you are interested in the local people's traditional way of life, you can walk around Anfeng Ancient Town. If you come to Dongtai, don't miss delicious Dongtai Fish Soup Noodles. Dongtai is also famous for Dongtai Hair Embroidery. It has great cultural value.
People here are kind and friendly. Welcome to Dongtai. I'm sure you'll have a fantastic time here.
思路引导
[总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇说明文;②时态:一般现在时;③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题,介绍东台的基本概况;第二步,从地理位置、名胜古迹、当地食物及手工艺品等方面具体介绍东台;第三步,书写结语,欢迎大家来到东台。
[亮点短语]
①be interested in 对……感兴趣 ②be famous for 因……著名 ③kind and friendly 善良而友好
[高分句型]
①It takes about 2 hours by train to get to Dongtai from Nanjing. (it 固定句型)
②If you want to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can visit Huanghai Forest Park. (if 引导条件状语从句)
My Hometown
I would like to tell you something about my hometown Dongtai.
My hometown Dongtai is a beautiful seaside city in the east of Jiangsu Province. It takes about 2 hours by train to get to Dongtai from Nanjing. There are many interesting places in Dongtai. If you want to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can visit Huanghai Forest Park. If you are interested in the local people's traditional way of life, you can walk around Anfeng Ancient Town. If you come to Dongtai, don't miss delicious Dongtai Fish Soup Noodles. Dongtai is also famous for Dongtai Hair Embroidery. It has great cultural value.
People here are kind and friendly. Welcome to Dongtai. I'm sure you'll have a fantastic time here.
思路引导
[总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇说明文;②时态:一般现在时;③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题,介绍东台的基本概况;第二步,从地理位置、名胜古迹、当地食物及手工艺品等方面具体介绍东台;第三步,书写结语,欢迎大家来到东台。
[亮点短语]
①be interested in 对……感兴趣 ②be famous for 因……著名 ③kind and friendly 善良而友好
[高分句型]
①It takes about 2 hours by train to get to Dongtai from Nanjing. (it 固定句型)
②If you want to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can visit Huanghai Forest Park. (if 引导条件状语从句)
解析：
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，体裁是说明文，时态采用一般现在时。需覆盖三个核心提示要点：东台的地理位置、名胜古迹、当地美食与手工艺品，同时适当添加细节（如交通方式）丰富内容，注意行文连贯，运用学过的常用短语和句式，避免真实信息，词数控制在80左右（开头结尾不计）。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头，介绍东台基本概况：点明其位于江苏省东部，补充从南京坐火车的行程时间，丰富内容；2. 用if条件句引出两处景点：黄海森林公园（自然美景）、安丰古镇（传统生活），使表达自然；3. 介绍当地美食（东台鱼汤面）和手工艺品（东台发绣），点明其特色；4. 衔接给定结尾，保持整体连贯。
【答案】
My Hometown
I would like to tell you something about my hometown Dongtai.
My hometown Dongtai is a beautiful seaside city in the east of Jiangsu Province. It takes about 2 hours by train to get to Dongtai from Nanjing. There are many interesting places in Dongtai. If you want to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can visit Huanghai Forest Park. If you are interested in the local people's traditional way of life, you can walk around Anfeng Ancient Town. If you come to Dongtai, don't miss delicious Dongtai Fish Soup Noodles. Dongtai is also famous for Dongtai Hair Embroidery. It has great cultural value.
People here are kind and friendly. Welcome to Dongtai. I'm sure you'll have a fantastic time here.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、要点整合写作、常用句式运用
【点评】
本文严格覆盖所有提示要点，适当添加合理细节，运用if条件句、It takes...to...等高分句型，语言连贯自然，准确介绍了东台的风土人情，符合书面表达要求，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语书面表达题，体裁是说明文，时态采用一般现在时。需覆盖三个核心提示要点：东台的地理位置、名胜古迹、当地美食与手工艺品，同时适当添加细节（如交通方式）丰富内容，注意行文连贯，运用学过的常用短语和句式，避免真实信息，词数控制在80左右（开头结尾不计）。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头，介绍东台基本概况：点明其位于江苏省东部，补充从南京坐火车的行程时间，丰富内容；2. 用if条件句引出两处景点：黄海森林公园（自然美景）、安丰古镇（传统生活），使表达自然；3. 介绍当地美食（东台鱼汤面）和手工艺品（东台发绣），点明其特色；4. 衔接给定结尾，保持整体连贯。
【答案】
My Hometown
I would like to tell you something about my hometown Dongtai.
My hometown Dongtai is a beautiful seaside city in the east of Jiangsu Province. It takes about 2 hours by train to get to Dongtai from Nanjing. There are many interesting places in Dongtai. If you want to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can visit Huanghai Forest Park. If you are interested in the local people's traditional way of life, you can walk around Anfeng Ancient Town. If you come to Dongtai, don't miss delicious Dongtai Fish Soup Noodles. Dongtai is also famous for Dongtai Hair Embroidery. It has great cultural value.
People here are kind and friendly. Welcome to Dongtai. I'm sure you'll have a fantastic time here.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、要点整合写作、常用句式运用
【点评】
本文严格覆盖所有提示要点，适当添加合理细节，运用if条件句、It takes...to...等高分句型，语言连贯自然，准确介绍了东台的风土人情，符合书面表达要求，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7