Ⅶ. (2025·常州溧阳期末)书面表达(25 分)
同学们,户外活动能给我们带来很多快乐和收获! 请以"My Favourite Outdoor Activity"为题,写一篇英语短文。
要点:1. 介绍你最喜欢的户外活动;2. 分享一次参与该活动的经历;3. 谈谈你在这次经历中的收获。
要求:1. 短文应包含所有给出的提示信息,并适当发挥。2. 词数 70 左右。
My Favourite Outdoor Activity
同学们,户外活动能给我们带来很多快乐和收获! 请以"My Favourite Outdoor Activity"为题,写一篇英语短文。
要点:1. 介绍你最喜欢的户外活动;2. 分享一次参与该活动的经历;3. 谈谈你在这次经历中的收获。
要求:1. 短文应包含所有给出的提示信息,并适当发挥。2. 词数 70 左右。
My Favourite Outdoor Activity
答案：Ⅶ. One possible version:
My favourite outdoor activity
My favourite outdoor activity is cycling.
Last weekend, I rode my bike to a nearby park with my friends. The fresh air and beautiful scenery made me feel relaxed. We raced along the path and laughed together. Suddenly, I fell off my bike but my friends helped me immediately.
This experience taught me the importance of teamwork and friendship. I love cycling because it keeps me healthy and happy.
思路引导
[总体分析]
①体裁:本文要求学生介绍自己最喜欢的户外活动并分享相关经历,应是一篇记叙文;②时态:以一般过去时为主,穿插一般现在时;③提示:需包含活动介绍、经历描述和收获感悟。
[写作步骤]
第一步:点明最喜欢的户外活动;第二步:描述一次具体经历(时间、地点、人物、事件);第三步:总结收获并表达情感。
[亮点短语]
①outdoor activity 户外活动 ②beautiful scenery 美景
[高分句型]
①Suddenly, I fell off my bike but my friends helped me immediately. (but 表示转折)
②I love cycling because it keeps me healthy and happy. (because 引导原因状语从句)
My favourite outdoor activity
My favourite outdoor activity is cycling.
Last weekend, I rode my bike to a nearby park with my friends. The fresh air and beautiful scenery made me feel relaxed. We raced along the path and laughed together. Suddenly, I fell off my bike but my friends helped me immediately.
This experience taught me the importance of teamwork and friendship. I love cycling because it keeps me healthy and happy.
思路引导
[总体分析]
①体裁:本文要求学生介绍自己最喜欢的户外活动并分享相关经历,应是一篇记叙文;②时态:以一般过去时为主,穿插一般现在时;③提示:需包含活动介绍、经历描述和收获感悟。
[写作步骤]
第一步:点明最喜欢的户外活动;第二步:描述一次具体经历(时间、地点、人物、事件);第三步:总结收获并表达情感。
[亮点短语]
①outdoor activity 户外活动 ②beautiful scenery 美景
[高分句型]
①Suddenly, I fell off my bike but my friends helped me immediately. (but 表示转折)
②I love cycling because it keeps me healthy and happy. (because 引导原因状语从句)
解析：
【分析】
首先明确写作要求：以"My Favourite Outdoor Activity"为题，需包含介绍最喜欢的户外活动、分享参与经历、谈谈收获三个核心要点。写作思路为：第一步点明最喜欢的户外活动；第二步用一般过去时描述具体经历（明确时间、地点、人物、关键事件）；第三步总结经历带来的收获，表达对该活动的喜爱，同时控制词数在70左右，适当补充细节让内容更连贯。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明核心活动：直接说明最喜欢的户外活动是骑行，即My favourite outdoor activity is cycling。
2. 描述具体经历：用Last weekend引出时间，补充和朋友去公园骑行的场景，加入摔倒被帮助的细节让经历真实：Last weekend, I rode my bike to a nearby park with my friends. The fresh air and beautiful scenery made me feel relaxed. We raced along the path and laughed together. Suddenly, I fell off my bike but my friends helped me immediately。
3. 总结收获与情感：点明经历的收获（团队合作、友谊），以及骑行的好处（健康快乐）：This experience taught me the importance of teamwork and friendship. I love cycling because it keeps me healthy and happy。
【答案】
My favourite outdoor activity
My favourite outdoor activity is cycling.
Last weekend, I rode my bike to a nearby park with my friends. The fresh air and beautiful scenery made me feel relaxed. We raced along the path and laughed together. Suddenly, I fell off my bike but my friends helped me immediately.
This experience taught me the importance of teamwork and friendship. I love cycling because it keeps me healthy and happy.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作；一般过去时运用；要点式书面表达
【点评】
本文完全符合题目要求，涵盖所有提示要点，时态运用准确（以一般过去时为主），内容连贯且有具体细节支撑，语言流畅自然，是一篇符合初中期末水平的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作要求：以"My Favourite Outdoor Activity"为题，需包含介绍最喜欢的户外活动、分享参与经历、谈谈收获三个核心要点。写作思路为：第一步点明最喜欢的户外活动；第二步用一般过去时描述具体经历（明确时间、地点、人物、关键事件）；第三步总结经历带来的收获，表达对该活动的喜爱，同时控制词数在70左右，适当补充细节让内容更连贯。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明核心活动：直接说明最喜欢的户外活动是骑行，即My favourite outdoor activity is cycling。
2. 描述具体经历：用Last weekend引出时间，补充和朋友去公园骑行的场景，加入摔倒被帮助的细节让经历真实：Last weekend, I rode my bike to a nearby park with my friends. The fresh air and beautiful scenery made me feel relaxed. We raced along the path and laughed together. Suddenly, I fell off my bike but my friends helped me immediately。
3. 总结收获与情感：点明经历的收获（团队合作、友谊），以及骑行的好处（健康快乐）：This experience taught me the importance of teamwork and friendship. I love cycling because it keeps me healthy and happy。
【答案】
My favourite outdoor activity
My favourite outdoor activity is cycling.
Last weekend, I rode my bike to a nearby park with my friends. The fresh air and beautiful scenery made me feel relaxed. We raced along the path and laughed together. Suddenly, I fell off my bike but my friends helped me immediately.
This experience taught me the importance of teamwork and friendship. I love cycling because it keeps me healthy and happy.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作；一般过去时运用；要点式书面表达
【点评】
本文完全符合题目要求，涵盖所有提示要点，时态运用准确（以一般过去时为主），内容连贯且有具体细节支撑，语言流畅自然，是一篇符合初中期末水平的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6