Ⅶ. (2025·南京玄武区调研)书面表达(25 分)
East or West, home is best. Home is a place where we find love, warmth, and a sense of belonging. Each home has its own story. Please write a passage on the topic "Home is more than a place".
In your writing, the following points should be included:
1. What makes a house a home?
2. Share your own experience that shows the importance of home.
注意:1. 标题自拟,词数 80 左右;2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;3. 语言通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚、书写规范。
East or West, home is best. Home is a place where we find love, warmth, and a sense of belonging. Each home has its own story. Please write a passage on the topic "Home is more than a place".
In your writing, the following points should be included:
1. What makes a house a home?
2. Share your own experience that shows the importance of home.
注意:1. 标题自拟,词数 80 左右;2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;3. 语言通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚、书写规范。
答案：One possible version:
Home: More Than Just a Building
A house becomes a home when it's filled with love and care. Family members' laughter, shared meals, and mutual support turn a mere building into a warm haven.
Once, I failed an important exam and felt extremely down. When I got home, my parents didn't scold me. Instead, they comforted me and helped me analyze my mistakes. That moment, I truly realized home is where I'm always understood and supported.
Home is not just a place; it's the source of my strength and happiness.
思路引导
［总体分析］
①体裁:本题要求学生就“家不仅仅是一个住处”这一话题展开讨论并分享自己的经历,应是一篇夹叙夹议文。②时态:一般现在时和一般过去时。③提示:根据提示内容,可适当发挥,注意语句通顺,条理清晰。
［写作步骤］
第一步,开篇点明让房子成为家的关键因素是爱与关怀,为下文做铺垫;第二步,讲述自己考试失利后在家得到父母安慰与帮助的经历,以此体现家的重要性;第三步,结尾总结升华,再次强调家不只是一个地方,更是力量与幸福的源泉。
［亮点短语］
①be filled with 充满 ②feel down 感到沮丧 ③mutual support 相互扶持
［高分句型］
①Once, I failed an important exam and felt extremely down.(and 连接两个并列谓语)
② When I got home, my parents didn't scold me. Instead, they comforted me and helped me analyze my mistakes.(when 引导时间状语从句)
Home: More Than Just a Building
A house becomes a home when it's filled with love and care. Family members' laughter, shared meals, and mutual support turn a mere building into a warm haven.
Once, I failed an important exam and felt extremely down. When I got home, my parents didn't scold me. Instead, they comforted me and helped me analyze my mistakes. That moment, I truly realized home is where I'm always understood and supported.
Home is not just a place; it's the source of my strength and happiness.
思路引导
［总体分析］
①体裁:本题要求学生就“家不仅仅是一个住处”这一话题展开讨论并分享自己的经历,应是一篇夹叙夹议文。②时态:一般现在时和一般过去时。③提示:根据提示内容,可适当发挥,注意语句通顺,条理清晰。
［写作步骤］
第一步,开篇点明让房子成为家的关键因素是爱与关怀,为下文做铺垫;第二步,讲述自己考试失利后在家得到父母安慰与帮助的经历,以此体现家的重要性;第三步,结尾总结升华,再次强调家不只是一个地方,更是力量与幸福的源泉。
［亮点短语］
①be filled with 充满 ②feel down 感到沮丧 ③mutual support 相互扶持
［高分句型］
①Once, I failed an important exam and felt extremely down.(and 连接两个并列谓语)
② When I got home, my parents didn't scold me. Instead, they comforted me and helped me analyze my mistakes.(when 引导时间状语从句)
解析：
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“家不仅仅是一个地方”的主题，完成一篇80词左右的夹叙夹议文，需包含两个核心要点：一是阐述让房子成为家的关键因素，二是分享体现家重要性的个人经历。解题思路为：先拟定标题，开篇点明家的本质（爱与关怀而非建筑），中间通过具体个人经历（如考试失利获家人支持）论证家的意义，结尾总结升华，同时注意时态（一般现在时用于阐述观点，一般过去时用于叙述经历）、词数要求及隐私规范。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 拟定标题，开篇直接点出“家不仅仅是建筑”的核心观点，说明房子因充满爱、家人的陪伴与支持成为家；2. 叙述个人经历：选取考试失利后情绪低落，回家后父母未责备反而安慰帮助的事例，体现家的温暖与支持；3. 结尾总结，再次强调家是力量与幸福的源泉，呼应主题。写作时运用亮点短语（如be filled with、feel down）和高分句型（如并列谓语结构、when引导的时间状语从句），确保语言通顺、条理清晰，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Home: More Than Just a Building
A house becomes a home when it's filled with love and care. Family members' laughter, shared meals, and mutual support turn a mere building into a warm haven.
Once, I failed an important exam and felt extremely down. When I got home, my parents didn't scold me. Instead, they comforted me and helped me analyze my mistakes. That moment, I truly realized home is where I'm always understood and supported.
Home is not just a place; it's the source of my strength and happiness.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；夹叙夹议文写作；英语时态运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，开篇点题、中间叙事、结尾升华，完整覆盖题目要求的两个要点；语言通顺自然，运用了恰当的短语和句型，情感真挚，准确传达了家的意义，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“家不仅仅是一个地方”的主题，完成一篇80词左右的夹叙夹议文，需包含两个核心要点：一是阐述让房子成为家的关键因素，二是分享体现家重要性的个人经历。解题思路为：先拟定标题，开篇点明家的本质（爱与关怀而非建筑），中间通过具体个人经历（如考试失利获家人支持）论证家的意义，结尾总结升华，同时注意时态（一般现在时用于阐述观点，一般过去时用于叙述经历）、词数要求及隐私规范。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 拟定标题，开篇直接点出“家不仅仅是建筑”的核心观点，说明房子因充满爱、家人的陪伴与支持成为家；2. 叙述个人经历：选取考试失利后情绪低落，回家后父母未责备反而安慰帮助的事例，体现家的温暖与支持；3. 结尾总结，再次强调家是力量与幸福的源泉，呼应主题。写作时运用亮点短语（如be filled with、feel down）和高分句型（如并列谓语结构、when引导的时间状语从句），确保语言通顺、条理清晰，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Home: More Than Just a Building
A house becomes a home when it's filled with love and care. Family members' laughter, shared meals, and mutual support turn a mere building into a warm haven.
Once, I failed an important exam and felt extremely down. When I got home, my parents didn't scold me. Instead, they comforted me and helped me analyze my mistakes. That moment, I truly realized home is where I'm always understood and supported.
Home is not just a place; it's the source of my strength and happiness.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；夹叙夹议文写作；英语时态运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，开篇点题、中间叙事、结尾升华，完整覆盖题目要求的两个要点；语言通顺自然，运用了恰当的短语和句型，情感真挚，准确传达了家的意义，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6