十一、书面表达。
你喜欢 Cinderella 的故事吗？请你用自己的语言介绍一下这个故事的主要内容。
你喜欢 Cinderella 的故事吗？请你用自己的语言介绍一下这个故事的主要内容。
答案：I like the story of Cinderella very much. Cinderella lives with her evil stepmother and two ugly stepsisters. She has to do all the housework. One day, there is a big ball at the prince's palace. Cinderella's stepmother and stepsisters go to the ball, but she is left at home. Her fairy godmother appears and helps her. She turns a pumpkin into a carriage and Cinderella's rags into a beautiful dress. Cinderella goes to the ball and dances with the prince. But she has to leave before midnight. As she runs away, she loses one of her glass slippers. The prince searches everywhere for the owner of the slipper. Finally, he finds Cinderella and the slipper fits her. They get married and live happily ever after.
解析：
【解析】
首先表明对《灰姑娘》故事的喜爱，接着按时间顺序依次叙述灰姑娘的悲惨处境、王宫舞会的契机、仙女教母的帮助、与王子的舞会相遇、遗失水晶鞋以及最终与王子成婚的结局，条理清晰地还原故事核心情节，叙述过程中注意时态的正确运用。
【答案】
I like the story of Cinderella very much. Cinderella lives with her evil stepmother and two ugly stepsisters. She has to do all the housework. One day, there is a big ball at the prince's palace. Cinderella's stepmother and stepsisters go to the ball, but she is left at home. Her fairy godmother appears and helps her. She turns a pumpkin into a carriage and Cinderella's rags into a beautiful dress. Cinderella goes to the ball and dances with the prince. But she has to leave before midnight. As she runs away, she loses one of her glass slippers. The prince searches everywhere for the owner of the slipper. Finally, he finds Cinderella and the slipper fits her. They get married and live happily ever after.
【知识点】
英语故事写作、一般过去时运用、叙事类书面表达
【点评】
这篇范文情节完整，逻辑连贯，准确运用相关时态叙述故事，语言流畅自然，清晰呈现了《灰姑娘》的核心内容，是一篇优秀的叙事类书面表达范文，可为同类写作提供参考。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先表明对《灰姑娘》故事的喜爱，接着按时间顺序依次叙述灰姑娘的悲惨处境、王宫舞会的契机、仙女教母的帮助、与王子的舞会相遇、遗失水晶鞋以及最终与王子成婚的结局，条理清晰地还原故事核心情节，叙述过程中注意时态的正确运用。
【答案】
I like the story of Cinderella very much. Cinderella lives with her evil stepmother and two ugly stepsisters. She has to do all the housework. One day, there is a big ball at the prince's palace. Cinderella's stepmother and stepsisters go to the ball, but she is left at home. Her fairy godmother appears and helps her. She turns a pumpkin into a carriage and Cinderella's rags into a beautiful dress. Cinderella goes to the ball and dances with the prince. But she has to leave before midnight. As she runs away, she loses one of her glass slippers. The prince searches everywhere for the owner of the slipper. Finally, he finds Cinderella and the slipper fits her. They get married and live happily ever after.
【知识点】
英语故事写作、一般过去时运用、叙事类书面表达
【点评】
这篇范文情节完整，逻辑连贯，准确运用相关时态叙述故事，语言流畅自然，清晰呈现了《灰姑娘》的核心内容，是一篇优秀的叙事类书面表达范文，可为同类写作提供参考。
【难度系数】
0.6