【话题分析】
本单元的话题是"运动和健身",主要内容围绕着不同的运动项目、健身的重要性以及如何制订个人健身计划展开,旨在培养学生对健康和体育精神的追求。
【典例研析】
每年的8月8日是"全民健身日",为了让运动更加深入人心,某英文杂志的"运动与健康"栏目以"Let's Do Exercise Together"为题,向广大中学生征文。
写作要求:
1. 包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,意思连贯;
3. 词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Let's Do Exercise Together
It's very important for us to do exercise.
【思路点拨】
第一步 审题
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
中心:运动的重要性及运动的时间与方式。
第二步 谋篇
【范文欣赏】
Let's Do Exercise Together
It's very important for us to do exercise. Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit, but also help to train a person's character. What's more, doing exercise helps us to study better.①
We can do more exercise. It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike. In PE classes, we can do all kinds of exercise, such as running, jumping, playing basketball and so on.② At weekends, we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends. Also, we can go hiking during vacations.②
Let's do exercise and keep fit together!③
续表
点评
①开门见山,说明运动的重要性。
②分别介绍不同运动的时间与方式,介绍不同时间时使用了 In PE classes、At weekends、during vacations等,列举不同运动项目时使用了such as,叙述层次分明,衔接自然。
③发出倡议,号召大家锻炼身体,保持健康。
本单元的话题是"运动和健身",主要内容围绕着不同的运动项目、健身的重要性以及如何制订个人健身计划展开,旨在培养学生对健康和体育精神的追求。
【典例研析】
每年的8月8日是"全民健身日",为了让运动更加深入人心,某英文杂志的"运动与健康"栏目以"Let's Do Exercise Together"为题,向广大中学生征文。
写作要求:
1. 包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,意思连贯;
3. 词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Let's Do Exercise Together
It's very important for us to do exercise.
【思路点拨】
第一步 审题
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
中心:运动的重要性及运动的时间与方式。
第二步 谋篇
【范文欣赏】
Let's Do Exercise Together
It's very important for us to do exercise. Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit, but also help to train a person's character. What's more, doing exercise helps us to study better.①
We can do more exercise. It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike. In PE classes, we can do all kinds of exercise, such as running, jumping, playing basketball and so on.② At weekends, we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends. Also, we can go hiking during vacations.②
Let's do exercise and keep fit together!③
续表
点评
①开门见山,说明运动的重要性。
②分别介绍不同运动的时间与方式,介绍不同时间时使用了 In PE classes、At weekends、during vacations等,列举不同运动项目时使用了such as,叙述层次分明,衔接自然。
③发出倡议,号召大家锻炼身体,保持健康。
答案：Let's Do Exercise Together
It's very important for us to do exercise. Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit, but also help to train a person's character. What's more, doing exercise helps us to study better.
We can do more exercise. It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike. In PE classes, we can do all kinds of exercise, such as running, jumping, playing basketball and so on. At weekends, we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends. Also, we can go hiking during vacations.
Let's do exercise and keep fit together!
It's very important for us to do exercise. Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit, but also help to train a person's character. What's more, doing exercise helps us to study better.
We can do more exercise. It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike. In PE classes, we can do all kinds of exercise, such as running, jumping, playing basketball and so on. At weekends, we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends. Also, we can go hiking during vacations.
Let's do exercise and keep fit together!
解析：
本题要求以“Let's Do Exercise Together”为题写一篇英语短文，解题思路如下：
1. 审题：采用第一人称，使用一般现在时，围绕“运动的重要性”和“运动的时间与方式”展开写作。
2. 谋篇：先点明运动的重要性，可从保持健康、培养性格、助力学习等方面展开；接着介绍不同场景下的运动方式，如上学途中、体育课、周末及假期的运动；最后发出倡议，号召大家一起锻炼。
3. 写作需包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，保证条理清晰、语句连贯，词数符合要求。
1. 审题：采用第一人称，使用一般现在时，围绕“运动的重要性”和“运动的时间与方式”展开写作。
2. 谋篇：先点明运动的重要性，可从保持健康、培养性格、助力学习等方面展开；接着介绍不同场景下的运动方式，如上学途中、体育课、周末及假期的运动；最后发出倡议，号召大家一起锻炼。
3. 写作需包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，保证条理清晰、语句连贯，词数符合要求。