【话题分析】
本单元的话题是"此时此地发生的事情"。此话题的写作要求学生会运用简洁的语言介绍此时此刻一些人正在从事的活动或者发生的事情,有效提高学生的英语表达能力。
【典例研析】
假如你是李华,你校正在举办艺体节the Art and Sports Festival,同学们正在积极参加丰富多彩的活动。请你根据表格提示信息描述一下你的同学参加的活动。

写作要求:
1. 包含表格中至少三项活动;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,意思连贯;
3. 词数70左右短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Our school is having the Art and Sports Festival now.
【思路点拨】
第一步 审题
人称:第一、第三人称
时态:现在进行时
中心:李华的同学正在参加的活动。
第二步 谋篇

【范文欣赏】
Our school is having the Art and Sports Festival now.① There are so many activities, so we are all having a great time.
Look! Mary and Amy are playing badminton. They love it. Jack is playing football with some other students. They are running. Oliver is skating in the playground. Kate is playing the guitar. She plays very well. David is singing his favourite English songs and Peter is playing the drums. The music is beautiful. Everyone is enjoying the festival a lot.②
I am looking forward to your taking part in the festival.③
点评
①文章首句开门见山,直奔主题。
②重点介绍同学们正在进行的活动,思路清晰,目的明确,语言简洁。
续表
③尾句"I am looking forward to your taking part in the festival."表达了作者期望更多同学加入的迫切心情。
本单元的话题是"此时此地发生的事情"。此话题的写作要求学生会运用简洁的语言介绍此时此刻一些人正在从事的活动或者发生的事情,有效提高学生的英语表达能力。
【典例研析】
假如你是李华,你校正在举办艺体节the Art and Sports Festival,同学们正在积极参加丰富多彩的活动。请你根据表格提示信息描述一下你的同学参加的活动。
写作要求:
1. 包含表格中至少三项活动;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,意思连贯;
3. 词数70左右短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Our school is having the Art and Sports Festival now.
【思路点拨】
第一步 审题
人称:第一、第三人称
时态:现在进行时
中心:李华的同学正在参加的活动。
第二步 谋篇
【范文欣赏】
Our school is having the Art and Sports Festival now.① There are so many activities, so we are all having a great time.
Look! Mary and Amy are playing badminton. They love it. Jack is playing football with some other students. They are running. Oliver is skating in the playground. Kate is playing the guitar. She plays very well. David is singing his favourite English songs and Peter is playing the drums. The music is beautiful. Everyone is enjoying the festival a lot.②
I am looking forward to your taking part in the festival.③
点评
①文章首句开门见山,直奔主题。
②重点介绍同学们正在进行的活动,思路清晰,目的明确,语言简洁。
续表
③尾句"I am looking forward to your taking part in the festival."表达了作者期望更多同学加入的迫切心情。
答案:There are many interesting activities here. Look! Mary and Amy are playing badminton happily. Jack is playing football with his classmates, running fast on the playground. Kate is playing the guitar beautifully while David is singing his favorite songs. We are all having a great time at the festival.
解析:
本题属于情景写作,需以李华的身份,运用现在进行时,采用第一、第三人称,选取表格中至少三项活动,条理清晰地描述同学们在艺体节参与的活动,要保证语句通顺连贯,词数控制在70左右。