素材积累＞＞
[开头句]
1. To my surprise, they could not understand my English.
（点明问题，下同）
2. Many people find English hard to learn.
3. It's very difficult for others to understand you if you get the pronunciation wrong.
[中间句]
1. Zhao thought it was important to spend as much time as possible reading, speaking and listening to the language. （解决方案，下同）
2. Zhao believed that it was best to focus on learning sentences rather than single words.
3. It is necessary for us to listen to native speakers as often/much as possible.
[结尾句]
1. Practice makes perfect.
（表达感受）
2. It is hard to learn a new language, but if we do it the right way, it will be a lot easier.
3. Find your interest and work hard, and you will have the chance to reach great success.
[名言警句]
1. Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量。
2. There is no end to learning. 学无止境。
写作演练＞＞
Teenage Life* 杂志正在举办“乘风破浪的我们”主题征文活动，请以“Break the wave”为题，向全校同学分享你的“破浪”故事。
内容包括:1. 请从下列图示中任选或自选
一种你曾遇到的难题;2. 你是通过何种努力与方法来克服它的;3. 你的收获与感受。
注意:1. 词数 90 左右;2. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第一人称为主;② 时态:以一般过去时为主;③ 写作时要注意顺序，先选贴近学生生活的具体困难，再用具体方法和坚持的行动体现“破浪”，最后谈收获。
[写作提纲]
|要点描述|第一段|The biggest problem I once met was that ...|
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
||第二段|I used to be a ... person
At first ... With her help ...|
||第三段|I feel lucky to ... I hope ...|
[妙笔生花]
Break the wave
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
[开头句]
1. To my surprise, they could not understand my English.
（点明问题，下同）
2. Many people find English hard to learn.
3. It's very difficult for others to understand you if you get the pronunciation wrong.
[中间句]
1. Zhao thought it was important to spend as much time as possible reading, speaking and listening to the language. （解决方案，下同）
2. Zhao believed that it was best to focus on learning sentences rather than single words.
3. It is necessary for us to listen to native speakers as often/much as possible.
[结尾句]
1. Practice makes perfect.
（表达感受）
2. It is hard to learn a new language, but if we do it the right way, it will be a lot easier.
3. Find your interest and work hard, and you will have the chance to reach great success.
[名言警句]
1. Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量。
2. There is no end to learning. 学无止境。
写作演练＞＞
Teenage Life* 杂志正在举办“乘风破浪的我们”主题征文活动，请以“Break the wave”为题，向全校同学分享你的“破浪”故事。
内容包括:1. 请从下列图示中任选或自选
一种你曾遇到的难题;2. 你是通过何种努力与方法来克服它的;3. 你的收获与感受。
注意:1. 词数 90 左右;2. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第一人称为主;② 时态:以一般过去时为主;③ 写作时要注意顺序，先选贴近学生生活的具体困难，再用具体方法和坚持的行动体现“破浪”，最后谈收获。
[写作提纲]
|要点描述|第一段|The biggest problem I once met was that ...|
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
||第二段|I used to be a ... person
At first ... With her help ...|
||第三段|I feel lucky to ... I hope ...|
[妙笔生花]
Break the wave
Life is full of problems and challenges. The biggest problem I once met was that I didn't know how to make friends in a new place.
I used to be a shy person, so when I moved to a new school, I found it difficult to make friends.
At first, I felt upset. One day, a girl called Linda in my class came to chat with me.
She even told me some funny stories to make me laugh. Her warmth moved me deeply. With her help, I became more and more outgoing.
I feel lucky to have a friend like Linda. It's she that has changed my life. I hope to help people in need like her in the future.
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
答案：One possible version:
Break the wave
Life is full of problems and challenges. The biggest problem I once met was that I didn't know how to make friends in a new place.
I used to be a shy person, so when I moved to a new school, I found it difficult to make friends. At first, I felt upset. One day, a girl called Linda in my class came to chat with me. She even told me some funny stories to make me laugh. Her warmth moved me deeply. With her help, I became more and more outgoing.
I feel lucky to have a friend like Linda. It's she that has changed my life. I hope to help people in need like her in the future.
Break the wave
Life is full of problems and challenges. The biggest problem I once met was that I didn't know how to make friends in a new place.
I used to be a shy person, so when I moved to a new school, I found it difficult to make friends. At first, I felt upset. One day, a girl called Linda in my class came to chat with me. She even told me some funny stories to make me laugh. Her warmth moved me deeply. With her help, I became more and more outgoing.
I feel lucky to have a friend like Linda. It's she that has changed my life. I hope to help people in need like her in the future.
解析：
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：以“Break the wave”为题，围绕“乘风破浪的我们”主题，需包含遇到的难题、克服的方法、收获与感受。写作时以第一人称为主，时态以一般过去时为主，结构分为三段：第一段点明具体难题；第二段描述克服难题的过程（可借助他人帮助或自身努力）；第三段表达收获与感悟。需紧扣要点，语言简洁流畅，词数约90词。
【解析】
1. 第一段：开篇点题，点明遇到的核心难题——在新学校不知如何交朋友，呼应主题“Break the wave”（突破困境）。
2. 第二段：结合自身性格（害羞），描述遇到困难后的状态，通过具体事例（同学Linda的帮助）展现克服过程，体现“破浪”的行动，说明自身的变化（变得外向）。
3. 第三段：表达对帮助者的感谢，分享收获，升华主题，传递积极的价值观。
写作时注意时态统一（一般过去时为主），语言贴合学生生活，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Break the wave
Life is full of problems and challenges. The biggest problem I once met was that I didn't know how to make friends in a new place.
I used to be a shy person, so when I moved to a new school, I found it difficult to make friends. At first, I felt upset. One day, a girl called Linda in my class came to chat with me. She even told me some funny stories to make me laugh. Her warmth moved me deeply. With her help, I became more and more outgoing.
I feel lucky to have a friend like Linda. It's she that has changed my life. I hope to help people in need like her in the future.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作；一般过去时运用；要点式英语写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“Break the wave”主题，结构清晰，要点齐全，通过具体事例展现克服交友困难的过程，语言流畅自然，情感真实，符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的学生习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确题目要求：以“Break the wave”为题，围绕“乘风破浪的我们”主题，需包含遇到的难题、克服的方法、收获与感受。写作时以第一人称为主，时态以一般过去时为主，结构分为三段：第一段点明具体难题；第二段描述克服难题的过程（可借助他人帮助或自身努力）；第三段表达收获与感悟。需紧扣要点，语言简洁流畅，词数约90词。
【解析】
1. 第一段：开篇点题，点明遇到的核心难题——在新学校不知如何交朋友，呼应主题“Break the wave”（突破困境）。
2. 第二段：结合自身性格（害羞），描述遇到困难后的状态，通过具体事例（同学Linda的帮助）展现克服过程，体现“破浪”的行动，说明自身的变化（变得外向）。
3. 第三段：表达对帮助者的感谢，分享收获，升华主题，传递积极的价值观。
写作时注意时态统一（一般过去时为主），语言贴合学生生活，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Break the wave
Life is full of problems and challenges. The biggest problem I once met was that I didn't know how to make friends in a new place.
I used to be a shy person, so when I moved to a new school, I found it difficult to make friends. At first, I felt upset. One day, a girl called Linda in my class came to chat with me. She even told me some funny stories to make me laugh. Her warmth moved me deeply. With her help, I became more and more outgoing.
I feel lucky to have a friend like Linda. It's she that has changed my life. I hope to help people in need like her in the future.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作；一般过去时运用；要点式英语写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“Break the wave”主题，结构清晰，要点齐全，通过具体事例展现克服交友困难的过程，语言流畅自然，情感真实，符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的学生习作。
【难度系数】
0.5