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一年四季,景色不同,特点各异。在每个季节里,我们心中都有一份对自然的赞美与感悟。大自然如此美丽,哪一个抓住了你的心呢?请以“I love
提示:1. 你最喜欢哪个季节?2. 这个季节的气候和环境有什么特点?3. 你在这个季节会做些什么活动?
要求:1. 先补全标题,再根据要点适当发挥,不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2. 词数 90左右。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第一人称为主;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先点明你自己最喜欢的季节并描述这个季节的气候和环境特点,再介绍在这个季节你会做哪些活动,最后回归主题。
[写作提纲]

[妙笔生花]
I love
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一年四季,景色不同,特点各异。在每个季节里,我们心中都有一份对自然的赞美与感悟。大自然如此美丽,哪一个抓住了你的心呢?请以“I love
autumn
best”为题,根据以下提示和要求,用英语写一篇短文,描述你最喜欢的季节。提示:1. 你最喜欢哪个季节?2. 这个季节的气候和环境有什么特点?3. 你在这个季节会做些什么活动?
要求:1. 先补全标题,再根据要点适当发挥,不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2. 词数 90左右。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第一人称为主;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先点明你自己最喜欢的季节并描述这个季节的气候和环境特点,再介绍在这个季节你会做哪些活动,最后回归主题。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
I love
autumn
bestMy favourite season is autumn. The weather is cool and comfortable.
The sky is blue and the clouds are white. The leaves on the trees turn into different colours like red, yellow and orange. It looks like a beautiful painting.
I like to go for a walk in the park in autumn. I can enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.
I also like to pick up fallen leaves and make bookmarks with them.
Sometimes I go hiking with my family and have a picnic in the mountains.
Autumn is really a wonderful season.
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案:One possible version:
I love autumn best
My favourite season is autumn. The weather is cool and comfortable. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. The leaves on the trees turn into different colours like red, yellow and orange. It looks like a beautiful painting.
I like to go for a walk in the park in autumn. I can enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. I also like to pick up fallen leaves and make bookmarks with them. Sometimes I go hiking with my family and have a picnic in the mountains.
Autumn is really a wonderful season.
I love autumn best
My favourite season is autumn. The weather is cool and comfortable. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. The leaves on the trees turn into different colours like red, yellow and orange. It looks like a beautiful painting.
I like to go for a walk in the park in autumn. I can enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. I also like to pick up fallen leaves and make bookmarks with them. Sometimes I go hiking with my family and have a picnic in the mountains.
Autumn is really a wonderful season.
解析:
【分析】
本题要求补全标题,以第一人称、一般现在时,分三段写最喜欢的季节,词数90左右。解题思路:1. 补全标题,确定最喜欢的季节(如秋季);2. 第一段点明季节,描述气候、天空、树叶的特点,用比喻丰富内容;3. 第二段围绕季节写具体活动,结合提示句型展开;4. 第三段总结赞美季节,呼应主题,确保不出现真实信息,符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照写作要求分三段完成:
第一段:补全标题为“I love autumn best”,点明最喜欢的季节,依次描述天气(凉爽舒适)、天空(湛蓝)、树叶(变色像画),对应提示要点;
第二段:围绕季节写活动,用提示句型表达散步、捡树叶做书签、和家人远足野餐等内容;
第三段:总结赞美季节,呼应主题,完成全文。
【答案】
One possible version:
I love autumn best
My favourite season is autumn. The weather is cool and comfortable. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. The leaves on the trees turn into different colours like red, yellow and orange. It looks like a beautiful painting.
I like to go for a walk in the park in autumn. I can enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. I also like to pick up fallen leaves and make bookmarks with them. Sometimes I go hiking with my family and have a picnic in the mountains.
Autumn is really a wonderful season.
【知识点】
英语写作、季节话题表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】
这篇作文结构清晰,要点齐全,语言流畅自然,准确描述了最喜欢的季节的特点和相关活动,呼应主题,符合题目所有要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求补全标题,以第一人称、一般现在时,分三段写最喜欢的季节,词数90左右。解题思路:1. 补全标题,确定最喜欢的季节(如秋季);2. 第一段点明季节,描述气候、天空、树叶的特点,用比喻丰富内容;3. 第二段围绕季节写具体活动,结合提示句型展开;4. 第三段总结赞美季节,呼应主题,确保不出现真实信息,符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照写作要求分三段完成:
第一段:补全标题为“I love autumn best”,点明最喜欢的季节,依次描述天气(凉爽舒适)、天空(湛蓝)、树叶(变色像画),对应提示要点;
第二段:围绕季节写活动,用提示句型表达散步、捡树叶做书签、和家人远足野餐等内容;
第三段:总结赞美季节,呼应主题,完成全文。
【答案】
One possible version:
I love autumn best
My favourite season is autumn. The weather is cool and comfortable. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. The leaves on the trees turn into different colours like red, yellow and orange. It looks like a beautiful painting.
I like to go for a walk in the park in autumn. I can enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. I also like to pick up fallen leaves and make bookmarks with them. Sometimes I go hiking with my family and have a picnic in the mountains.
Autumn is really a wonderful season.
【知识点】
英语写作、季节话题表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】
这篇作文结构清晰,要点齐全,语言流畅自然,准确描述了最喜欢的季节的特点和相关活动,呼应主题,符合题目所有要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6