典型例题
你的英国笔友 Peter 对中国传统节日很感兴趣,想要了解元宵节(The Lantern Festival)。请根据所给信息,写一篇短文介绍元宵节。短文必须包括所有提示内容,并适当发挥。词数不少于70。
提示:1. 元宵节是中国一个重要的传统节日,可以追溯到汉代;2. 这个节日通常会在二月或三月;3. 节日前几天,人们会制作兔子灯或者花灯;节日当天,家庭成员共聚吃汤圆;晚饭后,出门赏月、赏灯、猜灯谜;4. 家人团聚,很开心。
提示词:灯谜 lantern riddles; 追溯到 date back to
思路点拨
1. 审体裁——说明文。
2. 审时态——一般现在时。
3. 审主题——向外国笔友介绍元宵节的历史渊源、时间、习俗及意义。
4. 审篇幅——内容需完整覆盖所有提示要点(地位、时间、习俗、意义);词数不少于70,行文流畅,无语法错误。
范文欣赏
The Lantern Festival
I'd like to tell you something about the Lantern Festival.
As one of the most significant traditional festivals in China, the Lantern Festival usually falls in February or March. It can date back to the Han Dynasty.
There are quite a wealth of traditions for this day. A few days before the festival, we Chinese often make rabbit or flower lanterns.
你的英国笔友 Peter 对中国传统节日很感兴趣,想要了解元宵节(The Lantern Festival)。请根据所给信息,写一篇短文介绍元宵节。短文必须包括所有提示内容,并适当发挥。词数不少于70。
提示:1. 元宵节是中国一个重要的传统节日,可以追溯到汉代;2. 这个节日通常会在二月或三月;3. 节日前几天,人们会制作兔子灯或者花灯;节日当天,家庭成员共聚吃汤圆;晚饭后,出门赏月、赏灯、猜灯谜;4. 家人团聚,很开心。
提示词:灯谜 lantern riddles; 追溯到 date back to
思路点拨
1. 审体裁——说明文。
2. 审时态——一般现在时。
3. 审主题——向外国笔友介绍元宵节的历史渊源、时间、习俗及意义。
4. 审篇幅——内容需完整覆盖所有提示要点(地位、时间、习俗、意义);词数不少于70,行文流畅,无语法错误。
范文欣赏
The Lantern Festival
I'd like to tell you something about the Lantern Festival.
As one of the most significant traditional festivals in China, the Lantern Festival usually falls in February or March. It can date back to the Han Dynasty.
There are quite a wealth of traditions for this day. A few days before the festival, we Chinese often make rabbit or flower lanterns.
答案：The Lantern Festival
I'd like to tell you something about the Lantern Festival.
As one of the most important traditional festivals in China, the Lantern Festival usually comes in February or March. It can date back to the Han Dynasty.
There are many interesting traditions for this festival. A few days before the festival, we Chinese people often make rabbit lanterns or flower lanterns by hand. On the festival day, all family members get together to have tasty sweet rice dumplings. After dinner, people go out to enjoy the bright full moon, watch different kinds of beautiful lanterns and guess fun lantern riddles on the streets.
We have a great time with our family on that day, and all of us love this warm and lovely festival so much.
I'd like to tell you something about the Lantern Festival.
As one of the most important traditional festivals in China, the Lantern Festival usually comes in February or March. It can date back to the Han Dynasty.
There are many interesting traditions for this festival. A few days before the festival, we Chinese people often make rabbit lanterns or flower lanterns by hand. On the festival day, all family members get together to have tasty sweet rice dumplings. After dinner, people go out to enjoy the bright full moon, watch different kinds of beautiful lanterns and guess fun lantern riddles on the streets.
We have a great time with our family on that day, and all of us love this warm and lovely festival so much.
解析：
【分析】
首先拿到这道写作题，第一步先完成审题：明确体裁是介绍中国传统节日的说明文，面向的受众是对中国文化感兴趣的外国笔友，时态统一用描述常规节日习俗的一般现在时。接下来先把题干给出的所有提示要点逐一列出来，避免遗漏：①元宵节的地位是中国重要传统节日，历史可追溯到汉代；②节日时间通常在二月或三月；③节前人们制作兔子灯、花灯，节日当天全家共聚吃汤圆，饭后出门赏月、赏灯、猜灯谜；④节日的氛围是家人团聚十分欢乐。之后梳理行文逻辑：开篇先点明写作目的，接着按从基础信息到具体习俗再到情感意义的顺序排布内容，合理使用题干给出的提示词date back to、lantern riddles，适当补充修饰词让语句更生动，保证总词数不少于70，避免出现中式英语和语法错误即可完成写作。
【解析】
步骤1：开篇引入，直接点明写作意图，向笔友说明自己要介绍元宵节，快速切入主题。
步骤2：介绍节日基础信息，先点明元宵节是中国最重要的传统节日之一，说明它的举办时间通常在二月或三月，再补充其历史可以追溯到汉代，完整覆盖前两个提示要点。
步骤3：按时间先后顺序介绍节日习俗：先说明节日前几天中国人会手工制作兔子灯或者花灯，再介绍节日当天的安排：所有家庭成员团聚在一起享用美味的汤圆，晚饭后大家走上街头欣赏圆月、观赏各式各样的精美花灯、猜趣味灯谜，完整覆盖所有习俗相关的提示内容。
步骤4：收尾升华，点明节日的情感意义：全家人都能在这一天享受团聚的欢乐，大家都十分喜爱这个温暖美好的节日，覆盖最后一个提示要点，整体行文连贯流畅，符合英语表达规范。
【答案】
The Lantern Festival
I'd like to tell you something about the Lantern Festival.
As one of the most important traditional festivals in China, the Lantern Festival usually comes in February or March. It can date back to the Han Dynasty.
There are many interesting traditions for this festival. A few days before the festival, we Chinese people often make rabbit lanterns or flower lanterns by hand. On the festival day, all family members get together to have tasty sweet rice dumplings. After dinner, people go out to enjoy the bright full moon, watch different kinds of beautiful lanterns and guess fun lantern riddles on the streets.
We have a great time with our family on that day, and all of us love this warm and lovely festival so much.
【知识点】
传统节日英文表达，说明文写作，一般现在时应用
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部提示要点，没有信息遗漏，行文逻辑清晰，按照「引入-基础信息介绍-习俗细节展开-节日意义收尾」的顺序排布内容，符合外国读者的认知习惯，全部用到了题干给出的提示词汇，语句通顺自然，没有语法错误，补充的少量修饰词让内容更生动饱满，词数符合要求，是一篇非常规范的节日介绍类英语写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先拿到这道写作题，第一步先完成审题：明确体裁是介绍中国传统节日的说明文，面向的受众是对中国文化感兴趣的外国笔友，时态统一用描述常规节日习俗的一般现在时。接下来先把题干给出的所有提示要点逐一列出来，避免遗漏：①元宵节的地位是中国重要传统节日，历史可追溯到汉代；②节日时间通常在二月或三月；③节前人们制作兔子灯、花灯，节日当天全家共聚吃汤圆，饭后出门赏月、赏灯、猜灯谜；④节日的氛围是家人团聚十分欢乐。之后梳理行文逻辑：开篇先点明写作目的，接着按从基础信息到具体习俗再到情感意义的顺序排布内容，合理使用题干给出的提示词date back to、lantern riddles，适当补充修饰词让语句更生动，保证总词数不少于70，避免出现中式英语和语法错误即可完成写作。
【解析】
步骤1：开篇引入，直接点明写作意图，向笔友说明自己要介绍元宵节，快速切入主题。
步骤2：介绍节日基础信息，先点明元宵节是中国最重要的传统节日之一，说明它的举办时间通常在二月或三月，再补充其历史可以追溯到汉代，完整覆盖前两个提示要点。
步骤3：按时间先后顺序介绍节日习俗：先说明节日前几天中国人会手工制作兔子灯或者花灯，再介绍节日当天的安排：所有家庭成员团聚在一起享用美味的汤圆，晚饭后大家走上街头欣赏圆月、观赏各式各样的精美花灯、猜趣味灯谜，完整覆盖所有习俗相关的提示内容。
步骤4：收尾升华，点明节日的情感意义：全家人都能在这一天享受团聚的欢乐，大家都十分喜爱这个温暖美好的节日，覆盖最后一个提示要点，整体行文连贯流畅，符合英语表达规范。
【答案】
The Lantern Festival
I'd like to tell you something about the Lantern Festival.
As one of the most important traditional festivals in China, the Lantern Festival usually comes in February or March. It can date back to the Han Dynasty.
There are many interesting traditions for this festival. A few days before the festival, we Chinese people often make rabbit lanterns or flower lanterns by hand. On the festival day, all family members get together to have tasty sweet rice dumplings. After dinner, people go out to enjoy the bright full moon, watch different kinds of beautiful lanterns and guess fun lantern riddles on the streets.
We have a great time with our family on that day, and all of us love this warm and lovely festival so much.
【知识点】
传统节日英文表达，说明文写作，一般现在时应用
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部提示要点，没有信息遗漏，行文逻辑清晰，按照「引入-基础信息介绍-习俗细节展开-节日意义收尾」的顺序排布内容，符合外国读者的认知习惯，全部用到了题干给出的提示词汇，语句通顺自然，没有语法错误，补充的少量修饰词让内容更生动饱满，词数符合要求，是一篇非常规范的节日介绍类英语写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
根据下面提示，以“My Favourite Festival”为题，写一篇英语短文。
- Which is your favourite festival?
- When is your favourite festival?
- What do people do at the festival?
- Why do you like it best?
要求:1. 条理清楚，语句通顺；2. 词数80左右。
My Favourite Festival
- Which is your favourite festival?
- When is your favourite festival?
- What do people do at the festival?
- Why do you like it best?
要求:1. 条理清楚，语句通顺；2. 词数80左右。
My Favourite Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is my favourite festival. It usually comes in September or October.
On that day, all the family members come back home from different places. They get together and have a big dinner. In the evening, people eat nice mooncakes and enjoy the full moon. Children can listen to the story of Chang'e.
I like it best because I can enjoy mooncakes and see all my family members. I always have a good time on the Mid-Autumn Festival.
答案：One possible version:
My Favourite Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is my favourite festival. It usually comes in September or October.
On that day, all the family members come back home from different places. They get together and have a big dinner. In the evening, people eat nice mooncakes and enjoy the full moon. Children can listen to the story of Chang'e.
I like it best because I can enjoy mooncakes and see all my family members. I always have a good time on the Mid- Autumn Festival.
My Favourite Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is my favourite festival. It usually comes in September or October.
On that day, all the family members come back home from different places. They get together and have a big dinner. In the evening, people eat nice mooncakes and enjoy the full moon. Children can listen to the story of Chang'e.
I like it best because I can enjoy mooncakes and see all my family members. I always have a good time on the Mid- Autumn Festival.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先要对应题干给出的4个提示问题搭建写作框架，避免遗漏要点：第一步先直接回答第一个问题，点明自己最喜欢的节日，优先选自己熟悉的传统节日比如中秋节，不容易出现表达错误；第二步回答第二个问题，交代该节日的具体时间；第三步填充节日的相关习俗活动，对应第三个提示；最后说明自己喜爱这个节日的理由，覆盖第四个提示。写作过程中注意语句衔接自然，控制总词数在80左右，保证语法正确、条理通顺即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇段直接点题：明确指出自己最喜欢的节日是中秋节，同时说明它通常在每年的9月或者10月到来，完成前两个提示点的作答。
2. 主体段描述节日活动：依次写出节日当天人们的常见行为，比如各地的家人返乡团聚、共享丰盛的家宴，夜晚一同品尝月饼、观赏满月，孩子们还能听嫦娥的传说，把节日的热闹氛围体现出来，覆盖第三个提示要求。
3. 结尾段说明喜爱原因：点明自己最喜欢这个节日是因为既能吃到美味的月饼，还能和所有家人相聚，每次过节都十分开心，完成最后一个提示点的表述。最后通读全文，调整语句保证通顺，核对词数符合80左右的要求，修正语法错误。
【答案】
My Favourite Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is my favourite festival. It usually comes in September or October.
On that day, all the family members come back home from different places. They get together and have a big dinner. In the evening, people eat nice mooncakes and enjoy the full moon. Children can listen to the story of Chang'e.
I like it best because I can enjoy mooncakes and see all my family members. I always have a good time on the Mid- Autumn Festival.
【知识点】
节日话题写作，一般现在时运用，英语作文谋篇布局
【点评】
本篇参考范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部4个写作要点，行文逻辑层层递进，从点明节日、交代时间、描述节日习俗到阐述喜爱理由过渡自然，用词简单准确，没有复杂的超纲表达，完全符合词数80左右的要求，是非常典型的节日类话题优秀范文，学生后续写同类主题作文时可以参考该结构，按照要点顺序依次展开，能有效避免遗漏得分点。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先要对应题干给出的4个提示问题搭建写作框架，避免遗漏要点：第一步先直接回答第一个问题，点明自己最喜欢的节日，优先选自己熟悉的传统节日比如中秋节，不容易出现表达错误；第二步回答第二个问题，交代该节日的具体时间；第三步填充节日的相关习俗活动，对应第三个提示；最后说明自己喜爱这个节日的理由，覆盖第四个提示。写作过程中注意语句衔接自然，控制总词数在80左右，保证语法正确、条理通顺即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇段直接点题：明确指出自己最喜欢的节日是中秋节，同时说明它通常在每年的9月或者10月到来，完成前两个提示点的作答。
2. 主体段描述节日活动：依次写出节日当天人们的常见行为，比如各地的家人返乡团聚、共享丰盛的家宴，夜晚一同品尝月饼、观赏满月，孩子们还能听嫦娥的传说，把节日的热闹氛围体现出来，覆盖第三个提示要求。
3. 结尾段说明喜爱原因：点明自己最喜欢这个节日是因为既能吃到美味的月饼，还能和所有家人相聚，每次过节都十分开心，完成最后一个提示点的表述。最后通读全文，调整语句保证通顺，核对词数符合80左右的要求，修正语法错误。
【答案】
My Favourite Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is my favourite festival. It usually comes in September or October.
On that day, all the family members come back home from different places. They get together and have a big dinner. In the evening, people eat nice mooncakes and enjoy the full moon. Children can listen to the story of Chang'e.
I like it best because I can enjoy mooncakes and see all my family members. I always have a good time on the Mid- Autumn Festival.
【知识点】
节日话题写作，一般现在时运用，英语作文谋篇布局
【点评】
本篇参考范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部4个写作要点，行文逻辑层层递进，从点明节日、交代时间、描述节日习俗到阐述喜爱理由过渡自然，用词简单准确，没有复杂的超纲表达，完全符合词数80左右的要求，是非常典型的节日类话题优秀范文，学生后续写同类主题作文时可以参考该结构，按照要点顺序依次展开，能有效避免遗漏得分点。
【难度系数】
0.7