典型例题
假如你是七年级学生李华，今天是你第一次给你的英国笔友 Tony 写信。请你根据提示内容，用英语向你的笔友 Tony 介绍你自己。
内容要点:1. 你的年龄、外貌、性格特征；2. 你的爱好；3. 你为什么喜欢这个爱好？
注意:1. 内容必须包含所有信息；2. 文中不得透露个人信息；3. 词数 80 左右(短文首句已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Tony,
This is my first time writing a letter to you. Here is some information about me.
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
1. 审体裁——应用文(英文书信)。
2. 审内容——① 年龄十外貌十性格；② 爱好(具体名称)；③ 为什么喜欢。不得出现真实校名、地址、电话。
3. 审时态——以一般现在时为主。
4. 审篇幅——80 词左右。
范文欣赏
Dear Tony,
This is my first time writing a letter to you. Here is some information about me.
I'm 13 years old and I'm a 7th grade student. I'm quite tall with short hair, and I wear glasses. I'm kind and helpful to my classmates. When they have problems, I'm always ready to help.
My favourite hobby is reading. I spend a lot of time reading all kinds of books. I love reading so much because reading brings me so much joy
假如你是七年级学生李华，今天是你第一次给你的英国笔友 Tony 写信。请你根据提示内容，用英语向你的笔友 Tony 介绍你自己。
内容要点:1. 你的年龄、外貌、性格特征；2. 你的爱好；3. 你为什么喜欢这个爱好？
注意:1. 内容必须包含所有信息；2. 文中不得透露个人信息；3. 词数 80 左右(短文首句已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Tony,
This is my first time writing a letter to you. Here is some information about me.
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
1. 审体裁——应用文(英文书信)。
2. 审内容——① 年龄十外貌十性格；② 爱好(具体名称)；③ 为什么喜欢。不得出现真实校名、地址、电话。
3. 审时态——以一般现在时为主。
4. 审篇幅——80 词左右。
范文欣赏
Dear Tony,
This is my first time writing a letter to you. Here is some information about me.
I'm 13 years old and I'm a 7th grade student. I'm quite tall with short hair, and I wear glasses. I'm kind and helpful to my classmates. When they have problems, I'm always ready to help.
My favourite hobby is reading. I spend a lot of time reading all kinds of books. I love reading so much because reading brings me so much joy
答案：I'm 13 years old and I am a Grade 7 student. I'm tall with short black hair, and I wear a pair of glasses. I'm kind and outgoing, and I always help my classmates when they meet difficulties.
My favourite hobby is reading all kinds of books. I love reading so much because it brings me lots of fun and I can learn much knowledge about the world from books. I hope we can share more interesting things later.
My favourite hobby is reading all kinds of books. I love reading so much because it brings me lots of fun and I can learn much knowledge about the world from books. I hope we can share more interesting things later.
解析：
【分析】
首先拿到这道题先按照审题逻辑梳理全部要求：明确文体是写给英国笔友的自我介绍书信，时态以一般现在时为主，词数控制在80左右，不能透露任何真实个人隐私信息。接下来按照题干给出的三个内容要点依次填充内容：第一部分先介绍年龄、外貌和性格，说明自己13岁是七年级学生，搭配简单的外貌描述和友善热心的性格特点，覆盖第一个要点；第二部分明确点明自己的爱好，比如阅读各类书籍，覆盖第二个要点；第三部分解释喜欢这个爱好的原因，比如读书能获得乐趣、还能学到很多和世界相关的知识，最后补充一句符合书信场景的友好收尾，就能满足所有题目的规则要求。
【解析】
1. 承接题干已经给出的开篇句，首先完成第一个信息模块：用简单的并列句介绍自身年龄、外貌特征与性格特点，清晰传递基础个人信息，适配七年级学生的表达能力，避免复杂句式出错。
2. 接下来完成第二个信息模块，直接点明自己的爱好是阅读各类书籍，表述清晰直白，符合要点要求。
3. 最后完成第三个信息模块，说明喜爱阅读的两点原因，补充一句期待后续和笔友分享趣事的收尾，既符合书信的交际逻辑，也把总词数控制在题目要求的范围内，全程使用一般现在时，没有出现任何违规的个人隐私信息，完全符合所有题干规则。
【答案】
I'm 13 years old and I am a Grade 7 student. I'm tall with short black hair, and I wear a pair of glasses. I'm kind and outgoing, and I always help my classmates when they meet difficulties.
My favourite hobby is reading all kinds of books. I love reading so much because it brings me lots of fun and I can learn much knowledge about the world from books. I hope we can share more interesting things later.
【知识点】
英文书信写作，一般现在时，个人介绍表达
【点评】
本篇作文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部三个内容要点，时态使用准确统一，句式通顺自然，完全符合七年级学生的英语写作水平，没有出现任何违规的个人隐私信息，词数符合80词左右的要求，收尾的友好表述也契合给笔友写信的交际场景，是一篇符合要求的优秀学生习作。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道题先按照审题逻辑梳理全部要求：明确文体是写给英国笔友的自我介绍书信，时态以一般现在时为主，词数控制在80左右，不能透露任何真实个人隐私信息。接下来按照题干给出的三个内容要点依次填充内容：第一部分先介绍年龄、外貌和性格，说明自己13岁是七年级学生，搭配简单的外貌描述和友善热心的性格特点，覆盖第一个要点；第二部分明确点明自己的爱好，比如阅读各类书籍，覆盖第二个要点；第三部分解释喜欢这个爱好的原因，比如读书能获得乐趣、还能学到很多和世界相关的知识，最后补充一句符合书信场景的友好收尾，就能满足所有题目的规则要求。
【解析】
1. 承接题干已经给出的开篇句，首先完成第一个信息模块：用简单的并列句介绍自身年龄、外貌特征与性格特点，清晰传递基础个人信息，适配七年级学生的表达能力，避免复杂句式出错。
2. 接下来完成第二个信息模块，直接点明自己的爱好是阅读各类书籍，表述清晰直白，符合要点要求。
3. 最后完成第三个信息模块，说明喜爱阅读的两点原因，补充一句期待后续和笔友分享趣事的收尾，既符合书信的交际逻辑，也把总词数控制在题目要求的范围内，全程使用一般现在时，没有出现任何违规的个人隐私信息，完全符合所有题干规则。
【答案】
I'm 13 years old and I am a Grade 7 student. I'm tall with short black hair, and I wear a pair of glasses. I'm kind and outgoing, and I always help my classmates when they meet difficulties.
My favourite hobby is reading all kinds of books. I love reading so much because it brings me lots of fun and I can learn much knowledge about the world from books. I hope we can share more interesting things later.
【知识点】
英文书信写作，一般现在时，个人介绍表达
【点评】
本篇作文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部三个内容要点，时态使用准确统一，句式通顺自然，完全符合七年级学生的英语写作水平，没有出现任何违规的个人隐私信息，词数符合80词左右的要求，收尾的友好表述也契合给笔友写信的交际场景，是一篇符合要求的优秀学生习作。
【难度系数】
0.7
and helps me relax.
These are all about me. Please tell me more about you, and I'm really looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
巩固练习
今天英语课上班里各小组分享了"My favourite hobby",以下是你们小组成员分享的内容。假设你是组长,请根据表中信息,写一篇英语短文,向老师和全班同学汇报一下。
要求:1. 词数70左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2. 不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息。
Dear teacher and classmates,
Our group members have their own favourite hobbies. Now I report them to you.
That's all the hobbies for our group members. What about yours? Please tell us.
Thank you!
These are all about me. Please tell me more about you, and I'm really looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
巩固练习
今天英语课上班里各小组分享了"My favourite hobby",以下是你们小组成员分享的内容。假设你是组长,请根据表中信息,写一篇英语短文,向老师和全班同学汇报一下。
要求:1. 词数70左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2. 不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息。
Dear teacher and classmates,
Our group members have their own favourite hobbies. Now I report them to you.
Jack enjoys playing football. He thinks it can make him strong and fit. He plays football at weekends. His dream is to become a football player.
Wendy loves painting very much. She thinks painting can make her happy. She paints on every Tuesday and Friday afternoon. She wants to be an artist.
Bob's favourite hobby is science. He says it is great fun. He goes to the Science Club after school every day. He wants to become a scientist one day.
I am a music fan. I think singing can make me relaxed. I go to the Music Club at weekends. My dream is to become a singer.
Wendy loves painting very much. She thinks painting can make her happy. She paints on every Tuesday and Friday afternoon. She wants to be an artist.
Bob's favourite hobby is science. He says it is great fun. He goes to the Science Club after school every day. He wants to become a scientist one day.
I am a music fan. I think singing can make me relaxed. I go to the Music Club at weekends. My dream is to become a singer.
That's all the hobbies for our group members. What about yours? Please tell us.
Thank you!
答案：One possible version:
Dear teacher and classmates,
Our group members have their own favourite hobbies. Now I report them to you.
Jack enjoys playing football. He thinks it can make him strong and fit. He plays football at weekends. His dream is to become a football player.
⇨ sb think(s)+从句 某人认为；make sb+adj. 使某人……
⇨ sb's dream is to... 某人的梦想是……
Wendy loves painting very much. She thinks painting can make her happy. She paints on every Tuesday and Friday afternoon. She wants to be an artist.
⇨ sb want(s) to do sth 某人想做某事
Bob's favourite hobby is science. He says it is great fun. He goes to the Science Club after school every day. He wants to become a scientist one day.
I am a music fan. I think singing can make me relaxed. I go to the Music Club at weekends. My dream is to become a singer.
That's all the hobbies for our group members. What about yours? Please tell us. Thank you!
Dear teacher and classmates,
Our group members have their own favourite hobbies. Now I report them to you.
Jack enjoys playing football. He thinks it can make him strong and fit. He plays football at weekends. His dream is to become a football player.
⇨ sb think(s)+从句 某人认为；make sb+adj. 使某人……
⇨ sb's dream is to... 某人的梦想是……
Wendy loves painting very much. She thinks painting can make her happy. She paints on every Tuesday and Friday afternoon. She wants to be an artist.
⇨ sb want(s) to do sth 某人想做某事
Bob's favourite hobby is science. He says it is great fun. He goes to the Science Club after school every day. He wants to become a scientist one day.
I am a music fan. I think singing can make me relaxed. I go to the Music Club at weekends. My dream is to become a singer.
That's all the hobbies for our group members. What about yours? Please tell us. Thank you!
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇初中英语主题汇报类写作题，解题思路如下：
1. 先审题明确要求：身份是小组组长，面向全班和老师汇报组员的爱好，时态统一用一般现在时，词数控制合理，不能泄露隐私，给定首尾无需重写。
2. 梳理核心写作要点：需要依次覆盖所有小组成员的4类关键信息：各自的爱好、爱好带来的好处、参与该爱好的固定时间、对应的未来职业理想。
3. 搭建内容逻辑：按照组员顺序依次介绍，最后补充自己的相关情况，全部用课内学过的基础句型串联，避免复杂结构出错，写完后核对要点是否齐全、语句是否通顺，符合写作要求即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
步骤1：承接给定开头，首先介绍第一位组员Jack：点明他爱好踢足球，说明他认为踢足球能让自己强壮健康，固定在周末踢球，梦想成为一名足球运动员。
步骤2：接着介绍第二位组员Wendy：说明她非常喜欢画画，认为画画能让自己心情愉悦，固定在每周二和周五下午画画，未来想要成为一名画家。
步骤3：之后介绍第三位组员Bob：点明他最爱的爱好是科学，他觉得科学非常有意思，每天放学后都会去科学俱乐部，未来想成为一名科学家。
步骤4：最后介绍自己的情况：说明自己是音乐爱好者，认为唱歌能让人放松，周末会去音乐俱乐部，梦想成为一名歌手。
将以上内容用通顺的基础英语句型衔接，自然过渡到题目给定的结尾即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
Jack enjoys playing football. He thinks it can make him strong and fit. He plays football at weekends. His dream is to become a football player.
Wendy loves painting very much. She thinks painting can make her happy. She paints on every Tuesday and Friday afternoon. She wants to be an artist.
Bob's favourite hobby is science. He says it is great fun. He goes to the Science Club after school every day. He wants to become a scientist one day.
I am a music fan. I think singing can make me relaxed. I go to the Music Club at weekends. My dream is to become a singer.
【知识点】
1. 英语应用文写作
2. 一般现在时应用
3. 固定句型搭配
【点评】
本题属于初中阶段非常基础的主题写作题，话题贴近学生日常学习生活，只需要将给定的组员相关信息完整转述，用课内所学的简单句型串联即可，不需要复杂的创作，只要不遗漏核心要点、没有基础语法错误就能拿到不错的分数，适合用来巩固爱好相关主题的词汇和表达。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是一篇初中英语主题汇报类写作题，解题思路如下：
1. 先审题明确要求：身份是小组组长，面向全班和老师汇报组员的爱好，时态统一用一般现在时，词数控制合理，不能泄露隐私，给定首尾无需重写。
2. 梳理核心写作要点：需要依次覆盖所有小组成员的4类关键信息：各自的爱好、爱好带来的好处、参与该爱好的固定时间、对应的未来职业理想。
3. 搭建内容逻辑：按照组员顺序依次介绍，最后补充自己的相关情况，全部用课内学过的基础句型串联，避免复杂结构出错，写完后核对要点是否齐全、语句是否通顺，符合写作要求即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
步骤1：承接给定开头，首先介绍第一位组员Jack：点明他爱好踢足球，说明他认为踢足球能让自己强壮健康，固定在周末踢球，梦想成为一名足球运动员。
步骤2：接着介绍第二位组员Wendy：说明她非常喜欢画画，认为画画能让自己心情愉悦，固定在每周二和周五下午画画，未来想要成为一名画家。
步骤3：之后介绍第三位组员Bob：点明他最爱的爱好是科学，他觉得科学非常有意思，每天放学后都会去科学俱乐部，未来想成为一名科学家。
步骤4：最后介绍自己的情况：说明自己是音乐爱好者，认为唱歌能让人放松，周末会去音乐俱乐部，梦想成为一名歌手。
将以上内容用通顺的基础英语句型衔接，自然过渡到题目给定的结尾即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
Jack enjoys playing football. He thinks it can make him strong and fit. He plays football at weekends. His dream is to become a football player.
Wendy loves painting very much. She thinks painting can make her happy. She paints on every Tuesday and Friday afternoon. She wants to be an artist.
Bob's favourite hobby is science. He says it is great fun. He goes to the Science Club after school every day. He wants to become a scientist one day.
I am a music fan. I think singing can make me relaxed. I go to the Music Club at weekends. My dream is to become a singer.
【知识点】
1. 英语应用文写作
2. 一般现在时应用
3. 固定句型搭配
【点评】
本题属于初中阶段非常基础的主题写作题，话题贴近学生日常学习生活，只需要将给定的组员相关信息完整转述，用课内所学的简单句型串联即可，不需要复杂的创作，只要不遗漏核心要点、没有基础语法错误就能拿到不错的分数，适合用来巩固爱好相关主题的词汇和表达。
【难度系数】
0.8