Ⅷ.(2026·盐城鹿鸣路初级中学阶段检测)书面表达(19分)
新年即将到来,春节(the Spring Festival)是中国最重要的传统节日。请根据思维导图提示,用英文写一篇短文,分享你的春节计划,并谈谈你的感受。
要求:
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、班级等信息;
2. 词数80左右,已给出的部分不计入总词数;
3. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。

My Spring Festival Plan
The Spring Festival is coming soon! I am very excited about it and I would like to share my plan for this special holiday.
新年即将到来,春节(the Spring Festival)是中国最重要的传统节日。请根据思维导图提示,用英文写一篇短文,分享你的春节计划,并谈谈你的感受。
要求:
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、班级等信息;
2. 词数80左右,已给出的部分不计入总词数;
3. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
My Spring Festival Plan
The Spring Festival is coming soon! I am very excited about it and I would like to share my plan for this special holiday.
答案:Ⅷ.
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇材料作文。②时态:主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。③提示:文章的写作要点已给出,按照思维导图的提示介绍春节,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简要介绍如何庆祝春节;第二步,介绍穿什么衣服庆祝春节以及如何使用压岁钱;第三步,总结自己的感受。
[词句积累]
①put up 张贴 ②stand for 代表 ③plan to do 计划做……
④Then, I'll wear a new red coat, as red stands for good luck in Chinese culture.(as 引导的原因状语从句)
⑤For my lucky money, I plan to save most of it for my study and spend a little on gifts for my grandparents.(and 并列结构)
One possible version:
My Spring Festival Plan
The Spring Festival is coming soon! I am very excited about it and I would like to share my plan for this special holiday.
First, I'll celebrate it by helping my parents put up Spring Festival couplets and make dumplings. Then, I'll wear a new red coat, as red stands for good luck in Chinese culture.
For my lucky money, I plan to save most of it for my study and spend a little on gifts for my grandparents.
I feel the Spring Festival is the warmest time of the year. It lets family members get together and fill our days with joy. I can't wait for this wonderful holiday!
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇材料作文。②时态:主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。③提示:文章的写作要点已给出,按照思维导图的提示介绍春节,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简要介绍如何庆祝春节;第二步,介绍穿什么衣服庆祝春节以及如何使用压岁钱;第三步,总结自己的感受。
[词句积累]
①put up 张贴 ②stand for 代表 ③plan to do 计划做……
④Then, I'll wear a new red coat, as red stands for good luck in Chinese culture.(as 引导的原因状语从句)
⑤For my lucky money, I plan to save most of it for my study and spend a little on gifts for my grandparents.(and 并列结构)
One possible version:
My Spring Festival Plan
The Spring Festival is coming soon! I am very excited about it and I would like to share my plan for this special holiday.
First, I'll celebrate it by helping my parents put up Spring Festival couplets and make dumplings. Then, I'll wear a new red coat, as red stands for good luck in Chinese culture.
For my lucky money, I plan to save most of it for my study and spend a little on gifts for my grandparents.
I feel the Spring Festival is the warmest time of the year. It lets family members get together and fill our days with joy. I can't wait for this wonderful holiday!
解析:
【分析】本题为材料类英语书面表达题,需根据思维导图的四个核心要点(如何庆祝春节、如何合理使用压岁钱、春节穿着、对春节的感受)完成短文。解题思路:首先明确体裁为记叙文,时态以一般将来时和一般现在时为主;接着按思维导图要点依次展开内容,适当添加细节使文章连贯;同时注意词数要求,避免出现真实个人信息,最后检查是否覆盖所有要点、语句通顺。
【解析】写作时遵循以下步骤:1. 开篇点题,引出春节计划;2. 依次阐述思维导图要点:①庆祝方式:帮父母贴春联、包饺子;②穿着:穿新红外套,说明红色在中国文化中代表好运;③压岁钱使用:大部分存起来用于学习,小部分给祖父母买礼物;④感受:春节是一年中最温暖的时光,能让家人团聚,充满欢乐。运用积累的短语(如put up、stand for)和句型,确保语句正确、连贯自然,符合词数要求。
【答案】My Spring Festival Plan
The Spring Festival is coming soon! I am very excited about it and I would like to share my plan for this special holiday.
First, I'll celebrate it by helping my parents put up Spring Festival couplets and make dumplings. Then, I'll wear a new red coat, as red stands for good luck in Chinese culture.
For my lucky money, I plan to save most of it for my study and spend a little on gifts for my grandparents.
I feel the Spring Festival is the warmest time of the year. It lets family members get together and fill our days with joy. I can't wait for this wonderful holiday!
【知识点】英语书面表达、春节话题写作
【点评】本题考查学生结合给定思维导图要点完成英语短文写作的能力,既要求学生掌握春节相关的词汇、句型,又考查语篇组织与连贯表达能力,需覆盖所有要点并适当发挥,符合初中阶段英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时遵循以下步骤:1. 开篇点题,引出春节计划;2. 依次阐述思维导图要点:①庆祝方式:帮父母贴春联、包饺子;②穿着:穿新红外套,说明红色在中国文化中代表好运;③压岁钱使用:大部分存起来用于学习,小部分给祖父母买礼物;④感受:春节是一年中最温暖的时光,能让家人团聚,充满欢乐。运用积累的短语(如put up、stand for)和句型,确保语句正确、连贯自然,符合词数要求。
【答案】My Spring Festival Plan
The Spring Festival is coming soon! I am very excited about it and I would like to share my plan for this special holiday.
First, I'll celebrate it by helping my parents put up Spring Festival couplets and make dumplings. Then, I'll wear a new red coat, as red stands for good luck in Chinese culture.
For my lucky money, I plan to save most of it for my study and spend a little on gifts for my grandparents.
I feel the Spring Festival is the warmest time of the year. It lets family members get together and fill our days with joy. I can't wait for this wonderful holiday!
【知识点】英语书面表达、春节话题写作
【点评】本题考查学生结合给定思维导图要点完成英语短文写作的能力,既要求学生掌握春节相关的词汇、句型,又考查语篇组织与连贯表达能力,需覆盖所有要点并适当发挥,符合初中阶段英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.6