地球上没有了动物,就如同蓝天中没有了白云。某英文报正在举办以"保护野生动物"为主题的征文活动,你打算以"Save Wild Animals"为题写一篇短文投稿,请从野生动物所面临的危险、为什么要保护野生动物以及如何保护野生动物三个方面进行阐述。
| What danger do they face? | have no food to eat... |
| Why do we have to protect them? |
...(至少两点) |
| How do we protect them? | not buy coats made of wild animals' fur, make laws...(至少三点) |
【要求】1. 必须包括提示中的所有信息,并适当发挥。
2. 90词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名、地名等。
Save Wild Animals
Humans and wild animals share the same planet, but many of the wild animals are in danger.
| What danger do they face? | have no food to eat... |
| Why do we have to protect them? |
...(至少两点) || How do we protect them? | not buy coats made of wild animals' fur, make laws...(至少三点) |
【要求】1. 必须包括提示中的所有信息,并适当发挥。
2. 90词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名、地名等。
Save Wild Animals
Humans and wild animals share the same planet, but many of the wild animals are in danger.
For example, giant pandas may not have a place to live or food to eat because the bamboo forests are becoming fewer and fewer. Wolves have fewer and fewer living areas. Tigers and bears are in danger because humans hunt them for their fur, bones and other parts of their body.
We protect wild animals not only because wild animals are our friends, but also because wild animals help keep a balance between humans and nature. If there are no wild animals, there will be no humans.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy coats made of wild animals' fur any more.
Second, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife. Last but not least, the government should make laws to protect animals.
答案：One possible version
Save Wild Animals
Humans and wild animals share the same planet, but many of the wild animals are in danger. For example, giant pandas may not have a place to live or food to eat because the bamboo forests are becoming fewer and fewer. Wolves have fewer and fewer living areas. Tigers and bears are in danger because humans hunt them for their fur, bones and other parts of their body.
We protect wild animals not only because wild animals are our friends, but also because wild animals help keep a balance between humans and nature. If there are no wild animals, there will be no humans.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy coats made of wild animals' fur any more. Second, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife. Last but not least, the government should make laws to protect animals.
Save Wild Animals
Humans and wild animals share the same planet, but many of the wild animals are in danger. For example, giant pandas may not have a place to live or food to eat because the bamboo forests are becoming fewer and fewer. Wolves have fewer and fewer living areas. Tigers and bears are in danger because humans hunt them for their fur, bones and other parts of their body.
We protect wild animals not only because wild animals are our friends, but also because wild animals help keep a balance between humans and nature. If there are no wild animals, there will be no humans.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy coats made of wild animals' fur any more. Second, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife. Last but not least, the government should make laws to protect animals.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道写作题后，首先明确核心要求：主题为保护野生动物，需要覆盖三个指定模块的所有提示信息，总词数90左右（给定开头不计入）。第一步先承接给出的开头，先阐述野生动物面临的危险，把提示里的“没有食物吃”自然融入，还可以补充栖息地缩减、人类非法捕猎的常见生存危机，让内容更具体；第二步写保护野生动物的原因，满足至少两点的要求，比如野生动物是人类的伙伴、野生动物可以维持生态平衡，野生动物消失后人类也无法存续，逻辑通顺；第三步写保护措施，满足至少三点的要求，必须包含提示给出的“不买野生动物皮毛制作的外套、制定相关保护法律”，再补充宣传保护野生动物重要性这类合理内容，最后调整语句让行文流畅，规避真实个人信息即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 结构搭建：全文分三个逻辑段，分别对应题目要求的三个阐述维度，承接给定开头自然展开，逻辑清晰。
2. 第一部分（野生动物面临的危险）：结合提示信息，列举不同野生动物的生存困境：部分动物因栖息地缩减没有食物可吃，生存区域不断缩小，还有人类为获取皮毛、器官捕猎野生动物，把提示的have no food to eat自然融入内容。
3. 第二部分（保护野生动物的原因）：满足至少两点的要求：第一，野生动物是人类的朋友，和人类共享地球家园；第二，野生动物能维持人与自然的生态平衡，野生动物消失后人类也无法生存，表述合理通顺。
4. 第三部分（保护野生动物的措施）：满足至少三点的要求，覆盖提示给出的“不买野生动物皮毛制作的外套、制定保护法律”两个要点，补充“向大众科普野生动物保护的重要性”这一点，凑够三点，最后调整语句通顺度，控制总词数符合要求，不出现真实个人信息即可。
【答案】
Save Wild Animals
Humans and wild animals share the same planet, but many of the wild animals are in danger. For example, giant pandas may not have a place to live or food to eat because the bamboo forests are becoming fewer and fewer. Wolves have fewer and fewer living areas. Tigers and bears are in danger because humans hunt them for their fur, bones and other parts of their body.
We protect wild animals not only because wild animals are our friends, but also because wild animals help keep a balance between humans and nature. If there are no wild animals, there will be no humans.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy coats made of wild animals' fur any more. Second, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife. Last but not least, the government should make laws to protect animals.
【知识点】
主题英语写作，生态话题表达，要点整合写作
【点评】
本题属于提纲类话题写作，给出了明确的写作框架和核心提示要点，既考查学生的英语语句组织、信息整合能力，也向学生传递了保护野生动物的正确生态价值观，写作时只要不遗漏给定提示信息，按要求凑够对应数量的原因和措施，保证行文逻辑连贯，很容易拿到合格以上的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题后，首先明确核心要求：主题为保护野生动物，需要覆盖三个指定模块的所有提示信息，总词数90左右（给定开头不计入）。第一步先承接给出的开头，先阐述野生动物面临的危险，把提示里的“没有食物吃”自然融入，还可以补充栖息地缩减、人类非法捕猎的常见生存危机，让内容更具体；第二步写保护野生动物的原因，满足至少两点的要求，比如野生动物是人类的伙伴、野生动物可以维持生态平衡，野生动物消失后人类也无法存续，逻辑通顺；第三步写保护措施，满足至少三点的要求，必须包含提示给出的“不买野生动物皮毛制作的外套、制定相关保护法律”，再补充宣传保护野生动物重要性这类合理内容，最后调整语句让行文流畅，规避真实个人信息即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 结构搭建：全文分三个逻辑段，分别对应题目要求的三个阐述维度，承接给定开头自然展开，逻辑清晰。
2. 第一部分（野生动物面临的危险）：结合提示信息，列举不同野生动物的生存困境：部分动物因栖息地缩减没有食物可吃，生存区域不断缩小，还有人类为获取皮毛、器官捕猎野生动物，把提示的have no food to eat自然融入内容。
3. 第二部分（保护野生动物的原因）：满足至少两点的要求：第一，野生动物是人类的朋友，和人类共享地球家园；第二，野生动物能维持人与自然的生态平衡，野生动物消失后人类也无法生存，表述合理通顺。
4. 第三部分（保护野生动物的措施）：满足至少三点的要求，覆盖提示给出的“不买野生动物皮毛制作的外套、制定保护法律”两个要点，补充“向大众科普野生动物保护的重要性”这一点，凑够三点，最后调整语句通顺度，控制总词数符合要求，不出现真实个人信息即可。
【答案】
Save Wild Animals
Humans and wild animals share the same planet, but many of the wild animals are in danger. For example, giant pandas may not have a place to live or food to eat because the bamboo forests are becoming fewer and fewer. Wolves have fewer and fewer living areas. Tigers and bears are in danger because humans hunt them for their fur, bones and other parts of their body.
We protect wild animals not only because wild animals are our friends, but also because wild animals help keep a balance between humans and nature. If there are no wild animals, there will be no humans.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy coats made of wild animals' fur any more. Second, we should call on everybody to know the importance of wildlife. Last but not least, the government should make laws to protect animals.
【知识点】
主题英语写作，生态话题表达，要点整合写作
【点评】
本题属于提纲类话题写作，给出了明确的写作框架和核心提示要点，既考查学生的英语语句组织、信息整合能力，也向学生传递了保护野生动物的正确生态价值观，写作时只要不遗漏给定提示信息，按要求凑够对应数量的原因和措施，保证行文逻辑连贯，很容易拿到合格以上的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6