假设你叫卫华,上周你从报纸上看到了鸟类卫士俱乐部(Bird Guard Club)的招新广告,你想加入该俱乐部来保护鸟类。请根据下面表格中的内容,给俱乐部的李先生写一封 80 词左右的申请信。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Personal information
eighth-grader, 15 years old...
Hobby
love nature, be interested in birds...
Experience
last year...
Contact information
...
Dear Mr Lee,
I read your ad in the newspaper last week. I'm writing to tell you I'd like to join the Bird Guard Club.
Yours sincerely,
Wei Hua
Personal information
eighth-grader, 15 years old...
Hobby
love nature, be interested in birds...
Experience
last year...
Contact information
...
Dear Mr Lee,
I read your ad in the newspaper last week. I'm writing to tell you I'd like to join the Bird Guard Club.
I'm a Grade 8 student. I'm 15 years old and in good health. My favourite subject is Science. I love nature and I am interested in birds. I go to the wetlands to go birdwatching every year.
Last year, I wrote a report on rare birds and I also saw a bird show. I'll be glad if I can join the club.
You can call me on 0510-6787×××× or email me at 8767×××××@qq.com.
Yours sincerely,
Wei Hua
答案：One possible version
Dear Mr Lee,
I read your ad in the newspaper last week. I'm writing to tell you I'd like to join the Bird Guard Club.
I'm a Grade 8 student. I'm 15 years old and in good health. My favourite subject is Science. I love nature and I am interested in birds. I go to the wetlands to go birdwatching every year. Last year, I wrote a report on rare birds and I also saw a bird show. I'll be glad if I can join the club. You can call me on 0510-6787×××× or email me at 8767×××××@qq.com.
Yours sincerely,
Wei Hua
Dear Mr Lee,
I read your ad in the newspaper last week. I'm writing to tell you I'd like to join the Bird Guard Club.
I'm a Grade 8 student. I'm 15 years old and in good health. My favourite subject is Science. I love nature and I am interested in birds. I go to the wetlands to go birdwatching every year. Last year, I wrote a report on rare birds and I also saw a bird show. I'll be glad if I can join the club. You can call me on 0510-6787×××× or email me at 8767×××××@qq.com.
Yours sincerely,
Wei Hua
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道题首先明确写作目标是撰写加入鸟类卫士俱乐部的申请信，第一步先梳理表格给出的所有必写要点：个人身份信息、爱好相关内容、去年的相关经历、联系方式。接下来按照申请信的行文逻辑排布内容：先做自我介绍说明自身基本情况，再介绍自己对自然和鸟类的喜爱来体现入会意愿，接着描述去年的相关经历证明自己有相关基础，最后留下联系方式表达期待加入的想法。写作时可以适当补充少量贴合护鸟主题的合理细节让内容更自然，注意语句通顺，控制词数符合80词左右的要求。
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开篇内容，首先介绍个人基本信息：说明自己是15岁的八年级学生，补充和鸟类保护相关的细节，比如自己最喜欢科学课，让人物设定更贴合入会需求。
2. 接下来介绍爱好部分：点明自己热爱自然、对鸟类很感兴趣，补充日常会去湿地观鸟的小细节，进一步体现自己对鸟类相关内容的热情。
3. 然后对应表格的经历项，描述去年的相关经历：说明去年自己完成了一份关于珍稀鸟类的报告，还参观了鸟类展，证明自己有相关的经验积累。
4. 最后留下自己的电话和邮箱作为联系方式，礼貌表达自己希望成功入会的期待，调整语句让行文流畅自然，符合书信格式要求。
【答案】
One possible version
Dear Mr Lee,
I read your ad in the newspaper last week. I'm writing to tell you I'd like to join the Bird Guard Club.
I'm a Grade 8 student. I'm 15 years old and in good health. My favourite subject is Science. I love nature and I am interested in birds. I go to the wetlands to go birdwatching every year. Last year, I wrote a report on rare birds and I also saw a bird show. I'll be glad if I can join the club. You can call me on 0510-6787×××× or email me at 8767×××××@qq.com.
Yours sincerely,
Wei Hua
【知识点】
英语申请信写作，要点信息整合
【点评】
本题属于初中阶段基础的提纲类应用文写作，难度较低，核心要求是学生能够将表格给出的零散要点串联成逻辑通顺的完整书信，写作时不需要使用过于复杂的句式，保证要点全覆盖、语法正确、语气礼貌符合申请场景即可，适当补充的合理细节还能让作文内容更饱满拿到更高分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先明确写作目标是撰写加入鸟类卫士俱乐部的申请信，第一步先梳理表格给出的所有必写要点：个人身份信息、爱好相关内容、去年的相关经历、联系方式。接下来按照申请信的行文逻辑排布内容：先做自我介绍说明自身基本情况，再介绍自己对自然和鸟类的喜爱来体现入会意愿，接着描述去年的相关经历证明自己有相关基础，最后留下联系方式表达期待加入的想法。写作时可以适当补充少量贴合护鸟主题的合理细节让内容更自然，注意语句通顺，控制词数符合80词左右的要求。
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开篇内容，首先介绍个人基本信息：说明自己是15岁的八年级学生，补充和鸟类保护相关的细节，比如自己最喜欢科学课，让人物设定更贴合入会需求。
2. 接下来介绍爱好部分：点明自己热爱自然、对鸟类很感兴趣，补充日常会去湿地观鸟的小细节，进一步体现自己对鸟类相关内容的热情。
3. 然后对应表格的经历项，描述去年的相关经历：说明去年自己完成了一份关于珍稀鸟类的报告，还参观了鸟类展，证明自己有相关的经验积累。
4. 最后留下自己的电话和邮箱作为联系方式，礼貌表达自己希望成功入会的期待，调整语句让行文流畅自然，符合书信格式要求。
【答案】
One possible version
Dear Mr Lee,
I read your ad in the newspaper last week. I'm writing to tell you I'd like to join the Bird Guard Club.
I'm a Grade 8 student. I'm 15 years old and in good health. My favourite subject is Science. I love nature and I am interested in birds. I go to the wetlands to go birdwatching every year. Last year, I wrote a report on rare birds and I also saw a bird show. I'll be glad if I can join the club. You can call me on 0510-6787×××× or email me at 8767×××××@qq.com.
Yours sincerely,
Wei Hua
【知识点】
英语申请信写作，要点信息整合
【点评】
本题属于初中阶段基础的提纲类应用文写作，难度较低，核心要求是学生能够将表格给出的零散要点串联成逻辑通顺的完整书信，写作时不需要使用过于复杂的句式，保证要点全覆盖、语法正确、语气礼貌符合申请场景即可，适当补充的合理细节还能让作文内容更饱满拿到更高分数。
【难度系数】
0.7