在生活中,我们可能会遇到一些危险或灾难,如果我们有良好的安全意识和自救常识,就可以保护自己,远离危险。为进一步提高广大师生的安全意识,阳光中学英语俱乐部正在举办主题为"保护自己,远离危险"的英文演讲比赛。假如你是八年级的学生李威,请你以"Away from Danger"为题,根据以下思维导图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
【注意】1. 演讲稿要根据思维导图所提示的内容展开,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯。
2. 词数 80 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名及校名。
Away from Danger
Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Wei. It's a great honour for me to speak here.
【注意】1. 演讲稿要根据思维导图所提示的内容展开,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯。
2. 词数 80 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名及校名。
Away from Danger
Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Wei. It's a great honour for me to speak here.
Lots of danger is around us, like a fire. When a building catches fire, there will be thick smoke. It makes people hard to see things clearly. People may run in all directions because they are afraid to get hurt.
If we are in a fire, we should cover our mouth and nose with a wet towel.
To protect ourselves from thick smoke, we must stay low to the ground and try to get out as soon as possible.
That's all for my speech. Thank you.
答案：One possible version
Away from Danger
Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Wei. It's a great honour for me to speak here.
Lots of danger is around us, like a fire. When a building catches fire, there will be thick smoke. It makes people hard to see things clearly. People may run in all directions because they are afraid to get hurt.
If we are in a fire, we should cover our mouth and nose with a wet towel. To protect ourselves from thick smoke, we must stay low to the ground and try to get out as soon as possible.
That's all for my speech. Thank you.
Away from Danger
Good afternoon, everyone. I'm Li Wei. It's a great honour for me to speak here.
Lots of danger is around us, like a fire. When a building catches fire, there will be thick smoke. It makes people hard to see things clearly. People may run in all directions because they are afraid to get hurt.
If we are in a fire, we should cover our mouth and nose with a wet towel. To protect ourselves from thick smoke, we must stay low to the ground and try to get out as soon as possible.
That's all for my speech. Thank you.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道演讲稿写作题，首先要理清思维导图给出的三个明确写作方向：第一步先回答“身边有什么危险”，选择学生熟悉的火灾作为典型场景，贴合校园、居家的日常实际，容易引发听众共鸣；第二步对应“危险来临时会发生什么”的要求，具象描述火灾发生后的实际危害，比如浓烟遮挡视线、人们慌乱易受伤等内容，把危险的影响讲清楚；第三步对应“如何自我保护”的要求，给出可落地的实用自救方法，贴合安全科普的主题；最后补充演讲稿常规的收尾致谢，全程控制总词数在80左右，保证语句通顺，不出现真实人名校名，满足所有题目要求。
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开头内容，首先引入身边的危险场景：点明我们身边存在不少危险，以火灾作为典型案例展开介绍。
2. 完成第二个要点的写作：描述火灾发生后的实际状况，建筑起火后会产生大量浓烟，遮挡视线，人们因为害怕受伤慌乱乱跑，很容易遭遇危险。
3. 完成第三个要点的写作：给出火灾场景下的正确自救措施，比如用湿毛巾捂住口鼻，压低身体避开浓烟，尽快有序撤离到安全区域。
4. 最后加上演讲稿的标准收尾，向听众致谢，整体内容逻辑连贯，完全覆盖思维导图的全部要点，词数符合题干要求。
【答案】
Lots of danger is around us, like a fire. When a building catches fire, there will be thick smoke. It makes people hard to see things clearly. People may run in all directions because they are afraid to get hurt.
If we are in a fire, we should cover our mouth and nose with a wet towel. To protect ourselves from thick smoke, we must stay low to the ground and try to get out as soon as possible.
That's all for my speech. Thank you.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作
安全自救英文表达
情景作文写作
【点评】
本题是结合安全教育主题的应用类英语写作题，既考查八年级学生的英语语句组织、书面表达能力，也向学生渗透了实用的火灾自救常识。写作时要注意严格紧扣思维导图给出的三个核心要点，不要遗漏核心内容，语言风格贴合演讲稿的口语化特点，表意清晰简洁即可，不需要堆砌过难的复杂句式。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道演讲稿写作题，首先要理清思维导图给出的三个明确写作方向：第一步先回答“身边有什么危险”，选择学生熟悉的火灾作为典型场景，贴合校园、居家的日常实际，容易引发听众共鸣；第二步对应“危险来临时会发生什么”的要求，具象描述火灾发生后的实际危害，比如浓烟遮挡视线、人们慌乱易受伤等内容，把危险的影响讲清楚；第三步对应“如何自我保护”的要求，给出可落地的实用自救方法，贴合安全科普的主题；最后补充演讲稿常规的收尾致谢，全程控制总词数在80左右，保证语句通顺，不出现真实人名校名，满足所有题目要求。
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开头内容，首先引入身边的危险场景：点明我们身边存在不少危险，以火灾作为典型案例展开介绍。
2. 完成第二个要点的写作：描述火灾发生后的实际状况，建筑起火后会产生大量浓烟，遮挡视线，人们因为害怕受伤慌乱乱跑，很容易遭遇危险。
3. 完成第三个要点的写作：给出火灾场景下的正确自救措施，比如用湿毛巾捂住口鼻，压低身体避开浓烟，尽快有序撤离到安全区域。
4. 最后加上演讲稿的标准收尾，向听众致谢，整体内容逻辑连贯，完全覆盖思维导图的全部要点，词数符合题干要求。
【答案】
Lots of danger is around us, like a fire. When a building catches fire, there will be thick smoke. It makes people hard to see things clearly. People may run in all directions because they are afraid to get hurt.
If we are in a fire, we should cover our mouth and nose with a wet towel. To protect ourselves from thick smoke, we must stay low to the ground and try to get out as soon as possible.
That's all for my speech. Thank you.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作
安全自救英文表达
情景作文写作
【点评】
本题是结合安全教育主题的应用类英语写作题，既考查八年级学生的英语语句组织、书面表达能力，也向学生渗透了实用的火灾自救常识。写作时要注意严格紧扣思维导图给出的三个核心要点，不要遗漏核心内容，语言风格贴合演讲稿的口语化特点，表意清晰简洁即可，不需要堆砌过难的复杂句式。
【难度系数】
0.6