(2025·江苏盐城盐都区第一共同体调研)假设你是Amy,你的英国笔友Alice想要结交更多的朋友。你想把你最好的朋友Suzy介绍给她,请给她写一封信。下表是Suzy的信息。
【注意】1. 词数90左右。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 应包括表格中的所有信息,并可作适当发挥。
Dear Alice,
How are you? I'm writing to introduce my best friend Suzy to you.
Yours sincerely,
Amy
【注意】1. 词数90左右。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 应包括表格中的所有信息,并可作适当发挥。
Dear Alice,
How are you? I'm writing to introduce my best friend Suzy to you.
She is fourteen years old. She is tall and slim. She has a square face, long straight hair and bright smiling eyes. Suzy is humorous and funny. She often tells us funny jokes to make us laugh. She is very kind and helpful. She often goes to the nursing home to help the elderly.
Of all the subjects, she likes Science best because she thinks it is very interesting. Suzy is curious about DIY and she takes DIY classes after school every day.
Her dream is to become an English teacher, because she loves teaching children. I hope you can make friends with her. She is really a nice girl.
Yours sincerely,
Amy
答案：One possible version
Dear Alice,
How are you? I'm writing to introduce my best friend Suzy to you.
She is fourteen years old. She is tall and slim. She has a square face, long straight hair and bright smiling eyes. Suzy is humorous and funny. She often tells us funny jokes to make us laugh. She is very kind and helpful. She often goes to the nursing home to help the elderly. Of all the subjects, she likes Science best because she thinks it is very interesting. Suzy is curious about DIY and she takes DIY classes after school every day. Her dream is to become an English teacher, because she loves teaching children.
I hope you can make friends with her. She is really a nice girl.
Yours sincerely,
Amy
Dear Alice,
How are you? I'm writing to introduce my best friend Suzy to you.
She is fourteen years old. She is tall and slim. She has a square face, long straight hair and bright smiling eyes. Suzy is humorous and funny. She often tells us funny jokes to make us laugh. She is very kind and helpful. She often goes to the nursing home to help the elderly. Of all the subjects, she likes Science best because she thinks it is very interesting. Suzy is curious about DIY and she takes DIY classes after school every day. Her dream is to become an English teacher, because she loves teaching children.
I hope you can make friends with her. She is really a nice girl.
Yours sincerely,
Amy
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇人物介绍类的书信写作，解题时首先要明确核心要求：完整覆盖表格给出的全部信息点，逻辑通顺，符合书信语境。我们可以按照由外到内的顺序安排内容：第一步先介绍Suzy的外貌特征，对应表格里的tall、smiling eyes信息，可适当补充合理细节让形象更鲜活；第二步介绍她的性格特点，点明humorous的特质，再为helpful补充符合生活逻辑的具体事例；第三步介绍她的校园生活，说明最喜欢的科目并给出对应原因，再点明课后参加的课程；最后补充她的梦想，收尾表达希望对方和Suzy成为朋友的意愿，全程使用一般现在时，控制总词数在要求范围内即可。
【解析】
1. 承接书信开头，先补充Suzy的基础年龄信息，随后展开外貌描写，将表格给出的tall、smiling eyes两个核心外貌信息自然融入描述中，让人物形象更立体。
2. 接下来介绍性格：先点明Suzy幽默的特质，补充她常讲笑话逗大家开心的细节，再点明她乐于助人的特点，给出去养老院帮助老人的具体实例，满足题干要求的举例规则。
3. 随后介绍校园生活：说明她最喜欢的科目是科学，给出理由是觉得科学很有趣，再说明她课后会参加DIY课程，完整覆盖该部分的所有要点。
4. 最后介绍她的梦想是成为一名英语老师，补充她热爱教孩子的原因，最后收尾表达对两人成为朋友的期待，全文逻辑连贯，没有语法错误，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Dear Alice,
How are you? I'm writing to introduce my best friend Suzy to you.
She is fourteen years old. She is tall and slim. She has a square face, long straight hair and bright smiling eyes. Suzy is humorous and funny. She often tells us funny jokes to make us laugh. She is very kind and helpful. She often goes to the nursing home to help the elderly. Of all the subjects, she likes Science best because she thinks it is very interesting. Suzy is curious about DIY and she takes DIY classes after school every day. Her dream is to become an English teacher, because she loves teaching children.
I hope you can make friends with her. She is really a nice girl.
Yours sincerely,
Amy
【知识点】
英语书信写作，人物描写表达，一般现在时运用
【点评】
本篇范文严格贴合题干要求，所有表格给出的信息点全部覆盖，叙述顺序从外貌到性格、校园生活再到个人梦想，符合人物介绍的常规逻辑，补充的细节自然合理，语句流畅地道，没有语法错误，词数符合90左右的要求，是一篇非常规范的介绍类书信范文。学生写作时只要注意不要遗漏要点，按照合理顺序排布内容，就可以完成符合要求的作品。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇人物介绍类的书信写作，解题时首先要明确核心要求：完整覆盖表格给出的全部信息点，逻辑通顺，符合书信语境。我们可以按照由外到内的顺序安排内容：第一步先介绍Suzy的外貌特征，对应表格里的tall、smiling eyes信息，可适当补充合理细节让形象更鲜活；第二步介绍她的性格特点，点明humorous的特质，再为helpful补充符合生活逻辑的具体事例；第三步介绍她的校园生活，说明最喜欢的科目并给出对应原因，再点明课后参加的课程；最后补充她的梦想，收尾表达希望对方和Suzy成为朋友的意愿，全程使用一般现在时，控制总词数在要求范围内即可。
【解析】
1. 承接书信开头，先补充Suzy的基础年龄信息，随后展开外貌描写，将表格给出的tall、smiling eyes两个核心外貌信息自然融入描述中，让人物形象更立体。
2. 接下来介绍性格：先点明Suzy幽默的特质，补充她常讲笑话逗大家开心的细节，再点明她乐于助人的特点，给出去养老院帮助老人的具体实例，满足题干要求的举例规则。
3. 随后介绍校园生活：说明她最喜欢的科目是科学，给出理由是觉得科学很有趣，再说明她课后会参加DIY课程，完整覆盖该部分的所有要点。
4. 最后介绍她的梦想是成为一名英语老师，补充她热爱教孩子的原因，最后收尾表达对两人成为朋友的期待，全文逻辑连贯，没有语法错误，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Dear Alice,
How are you? I'm writing to introduce my best friend Suzy to you.
She is fourteen years old. She is tall and slim. She has a square face, long straight hair and bright smiling eyes. Suzy is humorous and funny. She often tells us funny jokes to make us laugh. She is very kind and helpful. She often goes to the nursing home to help the elderly. Of all the subjects, she likes Science best because she thinks it is very interesting. Suzy is curious about DIY and she takes DIY classes after school every day. Her dream is to become an English teacher, because she loves teaching children.
I hope you can make friends with her. She is really a nice girl.
Yours sincerely,
Amy
【知识点】
英语书信写作，人物描写表达，一般现在时运用
【点评】
本篇范文严格贴合题干要求，所有表格给出的信息点全部覆盖，叙述顺序从外貌到性格、校园生活再到个人梦想，符合人物介绍的常规逻辑，补充的细节自然合理，语句流畅地道，没有语法错误，词数符合90左右的要求，是一篇非常规范的介绍类书信范文。学生写作时只要注意不要遗漏要点，按照合理顺序排布内容，就可以完成符合要求的作品。
【难度系数】
0.7