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在学校,有的学生喜欢独自学习,有的学生则喜欢和大家一起学习。你更喜欢哪一种学习方式?校刊英语专栏正在以“Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?”为题开展征文活动,请你根据写作要求,结合自身实际,从以下两种学习方式中任选其一,用英语写一篇短文,陈述你的理由,向专栏投稿。
【要求】1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
2.词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group.
在学校,有的学生喜欢独自学习,有的学生则喜欢和大家一起学习。你更喜欢哪一种学习方式?校刊英语专栏正在以“Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?”为题开展征文活动,请你根据写作要求,结合自身实际,从以下两种学习方式中任选其一,用英语写一篇短文,陈述你的理由,向专栏投稿。
【要求】1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
2.词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group.
As for me, I like studying alone better.
Firstly, studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. Most of the time, I need to think hard about them all by myself. So my thinking ability is improved at the same time. Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I'm doing. With a clear head, I am able to finish my homework quickly. In this way, I will gradually develop a good learning habit.
I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life.
答案：Possible version Ⅰ
Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I like studying alone better.
Firstly, studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. Most of the time, I need to think hard about them all by myself. So my thinking ability is improved at the same time. Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I'm doing. With a clear head, I am able to finish my homework quickly. In this way, I will gradually develop a good learning habit.
I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life.
Possible version Ⅱ
Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I prefer to study with a group.
As the saying goes, "Two heads are better than one." With a group, I can learn a lot from others. Whenever I have some questions, they are always ready to help me. With their help, I become more and more confident in my study. Also, when I study with my classmates, we can discuss whatever puzzles me face to face. Through discussion, we can share different ideas and get to know more about each other.
All in all, I think studying with a group provides me with many chances to improve myself and helps me to be a better person.
Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I like studying alone better.
Firstly, studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. Most of the time, I need to think hard about them all by myself. So my thinking ability is improved at the same time. Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I'm doing. With a clear head, I am able to finish my homework quickly. In this way, I will gradually develop a good learning habit.
I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life.
Possible version Ⅱ
Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I prefer to study with a group.
As the saying goes, "Two heads are better than one." With a group, I can learn a lot from others. Whenever I have some questions, they are always ready to help me. With their help, I become more and more confident in my study. Also, when I study with my classmates, we can discuss whatever puzzles me face to face. Through discussion, we can share different ideas and get to know more about each other.
All in all, I think studying with a group provides me with many chances to improve myself and helps me to be a better person.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先先明确审题思路：第一，这是观点类校园英语征文，要求二选一选定自己偏好的学习方式，不需要两种方式都展开论述；第二，题目给出的表格已经明确对应两种学习方式的2个核心论据，直接围绕提示短语拓展就不会跑题，不需要凭空编造理由；第三，题干已经给出开头段，后续内容要自然承接，先亮明自身立场，再分点把两个论据补充细节说清好处，最后收尾总结，控制总词数在100左右，全程规避真实姓名、校名等敏感信息即可完成写作。
【解析】
写作可按三步完成：
步骤1：承接给定开头，直接亮明自身立场，比如选独自学习就写"As for me, I like studying alone better"，选小组学习就写"As for me, I prefer to study with a group"，开门见山明确观点。
步骤2：围绕表格给出的2个核心提示点展开论述：
· 若选独自学习：① 围绕"独立解决问题"拓展，说明自主思考能锻炼思维能力，摆脱对他人的依赖；② 围绕"专注手头事务"拓展，说明没有外界干扰可以提升学习效率，逐步养成良好的自主学习习惯。
· 若选小组学习：① 围绕"获得他人帮助"拓展，说明遇到疑难问题可以及时得到同伴解答，逐步提升学习信心；② 围绕"和组员分享观点"拓展，说明通过讨论交流可以碰撞出不同思路，拓宽自身认知。
步骤3：用firstly、secondly、all in all这类衔接词串联内容，最后收尾点明所选学习方式给自己带来的长期益处，调整语句让表达通顺，把总词数控制在要求范围内即可。
【答案】
Possible version Ⅰ
Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I like studying alone better.
Firstly, studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. Most of the time, I need to think hard about them all by myself. So my thinking ability is improved at the same time. Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I'm doing. With a clear head, I am able to finish my homework quickly. In this way, I will gradually develop a good learning habit.
I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life.
Possible version Ⅱ
Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I prefer to study with a group.
As the saying goes, "Two heads are better than one." With a group, I can learn a lot from others. Whenever I have some questions, they are always ready to help me. With their help, I become more and more confident in my study. Also, when I study with my classmates, we can discuss whatever puzzles me face to face. Through discussion, we can share different ideas and get to know more about each other.
All in all, I think studying with a group provides me with many chances to improve myself and helps me to be a better person.
【知识点】
英语议论文写作，要点整合，衔接词运用
【点评】
本题属于贴近学生日常学习场景的观点类写作题，表格已经给出核心写作提示，降低了学生构思论据的门槛，既考察了学生基础的英语语句组织能力，也引导学生结合自身学习实际思考不同学习方式的优势，大部分学生只要把提示要点合理拓展、做好逻辑衔接就能完成合格的短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题首先先明确审题思路：第一，这是观点类校园英语征文，要求二选一选定自己偏好的学习方式，不需要两种方式都展开论述；第二，题目给出的表格已经明确对应两种学习方式的2个核心论据，直接围绕提示短语拓展就不会跑题，不需要凭空编造理由；第三，题干已经给出开头段，后续内容要自然承接，先亮明自身立场，再分点把两个论据补充细节说清好处，最后收尾总结，控制总词数在100左右，全程规避真实姓名、校名等敏感信息即可完成写作。
【解析】
写作可按三步完成：
步骤1：承接给定开头，直接亮明自身立场，比如选独自学习就写"As for me, I like studying alone better"，选小组学习就写"As for me, I prefer to study with a group"，开门见山明确观点。
步骤2：围绕表格给出的2个核心提示点展开论述：
· 若选独自学习：① 围绕"独立解决问题"拓展，说明自主思考能锻炼思维能力，摆脱对他人的依赖；② 围绕"专注手头事务"拓展，说明没有外界干扰可以提升学习效率，逐步养成良好的自主学习习惯。
· 若选小组学习：① 围绕"获得他人帮助"拓展，说明遇到疑难问题可以及时得到同伴解答，逐步提升学习信心；② 围绕"和组员分享观点"拓展，说明通过讨论交流可以碰撞出不同思路，拓宽自身认知。
步骤3：用firstly、secondly、all in all这类衔接词串联内容，最后收尾点明所选学习方式给自己带来的长期益处，调整语句让表达通顺，把总词数控制在要求范围内即可。
【答案】
Possible version Ⅰ
Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I like studying alone better.
Firstly, studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. Most of the time, I need to think hard about them all by myself. So my thinking ability is improved at the same time. Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I'm doing. With a clear head, I am able to finish my homework quickly. In this way, I will gradually develop a good learning habit.
I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life.
Possible version Ⅱ
Studying Alone or Studying with a Group?
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I prefer to study with a group.
As the saying goes, "Two heads are better than one." With a group, I can learn a lot from others. Whenever I have some questions, they are always ready to help me. With their help, I become more and more confident in my study. Also, when I study with my classmates, we can discuss whatever puzzles me face to face. Through discussion, we can share different ideas and get to know more about each other.
All in all, I think studying with a group provides me with many chances to improve myself and helps me to be a better person.
【知识点】
英语议论文写作，要点整合，衔接词运用
【点评】
本题属于贴近学生日常学习场景的观点类写作题，表格已经给出核心写作提示，降低了学生构思论据的门槛，既考察了学生基础的英语语句组织能力，也引导学生结合自身学习实际思考不同学习方式的优势，大部分学生只要把提示要点合理拓展、做好逻辑衔接就能完成合格的短文。
【难度系数】
0.6