当今社会,人们的环保意识越来越越强,DIY也越来越受欢迎。请你根据下表内容,用英语向你的朋友介绍一下DIY并提出你对做DIY的建议。
Meaning
an active lifestyle
Advantages(优点)
1. interesting, get fun... 2. ...(自拟一条)
Disadvantages(缺点)
1. dangerous
hurt oneself... 2. take more time
Ways to learn
1. learn from parents... 2. ...(自拟一条)
Advice
...(自拟一至两条)
【要求】1.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3.90词左右。
I would like to tell you something about DIY.
Meaning
an active lifestyle
Advantages(优点)
1. interesting, get fun... 2. ...(自拟一条)
Disadvantages(缺点)
1. dangerous
hurt oneself... 2. take more timeWays to learn
1. learn from parents... 2. ...(自拟一条)
Advice
...(自拟一至两条)
【要求】1.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3.90词左右。
I would like to tell you something about DIY.
It represents an active lifestyle.
Many people like doing things themselves because it is interesting and they can get fun from it. Also, DIY can help people save money. They don't need to spend much money paying others to do the things they can do themselves.
DIY also has some problems. It can be dangerous. Sometimes, people may hurt themselves if they are careless. Besides, it usually takes more time.
People can learn DIY from their parents or friends. They can also buy books about DIY and learn by themselves. They can take a course in DIY too.
I think people should be careful when they do DIY. Using the brain and hands more often is also a good way to help us be more creative.
答案：One possible version
I would like to tell you something about DIY. It represents an active lifestyle.
Many people like doing things themselves because it is interesting and they can get fun from it. Also, DIY can help people save money. They don't need to spend much money paying others to do the things they can do themselves.
DIY also has some problems. It can be dangerous. Sometimes, people may hurt themselves if they are careless. Besides, it usually takes more time.
People can learn DIY from their parents or friends. They can also buy books about DIY and learn by themselves. They can take a course in DIY too.
I think people should be careful when they do DIY. Using the brain and hands more often is also a good way to help us be more creative.
I would like to tell you something about DIY. It represents an active lifestyle.
Many people like doing things themselves because it is interesting and they can get fun from it. Also, DIY can help people save money. They don't need to spend much money paying others to do the things they can do themselves.
DIY also has some problems. It can be dangerous. Sometimes, people may hurt themselves if they are careless. Besides, it usually takes more time.
People can learn DIY from their parents or friends. They can also buy books about DIY and learn by themselves. They can take a course in DIY too.
I think people should be careful when they do DIY. Using the brain and hands more often is also a good way to help us be more creative.
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇要点提示类英语说明文写作，解题时首先要梳理所有给定的必填信息点，避免遗漏：首先承接给定的开篇句，先点明DIY的含义是一种积极的生活方式；接下来依次阐述DIY的优缺点，优点除了给定的“有趣、能获得乐趣”，可以自拟符合逻辑的内容比如“帮助省钱、锻炼动手能力”；缺点要完整覆盖给定的“操作危险容易受伤、耗费更多时间”两个点；之后介绍学习DIY的途径，除了给定的向父母学习，可自拟合理途径比如阅读相关书籍、上网看教程、参加DIY课程等；最后给出1-2条符合逻辑的DIY相关建议，比如操作时注意安全、提前做好准备等，最后将所有内容用通顺连贯的英语语句组织起来，控制总词数在要求范围内，注意不要出现真实人名校名即可。
【解析】
第一步：梳理所有必写核心要点，确保不遗漏表格给出的信息：
1. DIY的含义：代表一种积极的生活方式
2. 优点：① 很有趣，能从中获得乐趣 ② 自拟合理优点，比如可以帮人们省下不少请人代劳的费用
3. 缺点：① 有危险性，粗心时容易伤到自己 ② 会花费更多的时间
4. 学习途径：① 向父母学习 ② 自拟合理途径，比如阅读DIY相关书籍自学、参加DIY课程等
5. 建议：操作时要小心，多动手动脑可以提升创造力
第二步：用合适的衔接词（also, besides等）将所有要点串联成逻辑通顺的短文，保证语法正确，词数符合要求。
【答案】
I would like to tell you something about DIY. It represents an active lifestyle.
Many people like doing things themselves because it is interesting and they can get fun from it. Also, DIY can help people save money. They don't need to spend much money paying others to do the things they can do themselves.
DIY also has some problems. It can be dangerous. Sometimes, people may hurt themselves if they are careless. Besides, it usually takes more time.
People can learn DIY from their parents or friends. They can also buy books about DIY and learn by themselves. They can take a course in DIY too.
I think people should be careful when they do DIY. Using the brain and hands more often is also a good way to help us be more creative.
【知识点】
要点类英语写作，DIY主题表达
【点评】
本题属于半开放提示类写作，大部分核心信息都已经通过表格给出，仅需要学生补充少量符合逻辑的自拟内容，难度较低，写作时注意做好语句之间的衔接，不要生硬堆砌要点，同时注意控制词数，避免出现语法错误即可。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇要点提示类英语说明文写作，解题时首先要梳理所有给定的必填信息点，避免遗漏：首先承接给定的开篇句，先点明DIY的含义是一种积极的生活方式；接下来依次阐述DIY的优缺点，优点除了给定的“有趣、能获得乐趣”，可以自拟符合逻辑的内容比如“帮助省钱、锻炼动手能力”；缺点要完整覆盖给定的“操作危险容易受伤、耗费更多时间”两个点；之后介绍学习DIY的途径，除了给定的向父母学习，可自拟合理途径比如阅读相关书籍、上网看教程、参加DIY课程等；最后给出1-2条符合逻辑的DIY相关建议，比如操作时注意安全、提前做好准备等，最后将所有内容用通顺连贯的英语语句组织起来，控制总词数在要求范围内，注意不要出现真实人名校名即可。
【解析】
第一步：梳理所有必写核心要点，确保不遗漏表格给出的信息：
1. DIY的含义：代表一种积极的生活方式
2. 优点：① 很有趣，能从中获得乐趣 ② 自拟合理优点，比如可以帮人们省下不少请人代劳的费用
3. 缺点：① 有危险性，粗心时容易伤到自己 ② 会花费更多的时间
4. 学习途径：① 向父母学习 ② 自拟合理途径，比如阅读DIY相关书籍自学、参加DIY课程等
5. 建议：操作时要小心，多动手动脑可以提升创造力
第二步：用合适的衔接词（also, besides等）将所有要点串联成逻辑通顺的短文，保证语法正确，词数符合要求。
【答案】
I would like to tell you something about DIY. It represents an active lifestyle.
Many people like doing things themselves because it is interesting and they can get fun from it. Also, DIY can help people save money. They don't need to spend much money paying others to do the things they can do themselves.
DIY also has some problems. It can be dangerous. Sometimes, people may hurt themselves if they are careless. Besides, it usually takes more time.
People can learn DIY from their parents or friends. They can also buy books about DIY and learn by themselves. They can take a course in DIY too.
I think people should be careful when they do DIY. Using the brain and hands more often is also a good way to help us be more creative.
【知识点】
要点类英语写作，DIY主题表达
【点评】
本题属于半开放提示类写作，大部分核心信息都已经通过表格给出，仅需要学生补充少量符合逻辑的自拟内容，难度较低，写作时注意做好语句之间的衔接，不要生硬堆砌要点，同时注意控制词数，避免出现语法错误即可。
【难度系数】
0.7