B. 写作。(计20分)
某地遭遇了洪水(flood),为了帮助受灾的人们,某国际学校打算发起一次捐赠活动。假设你是学校广播站的播音员,请你将这次活动的相关事项告知大家。
【要点】1. When and where will the activity be held?
2. What can you donate(捐赠) and what can't you donate?
【要求】1. 结构完整,表达通顺,语言标准,书写清晰。
2. 必须包含所有要点内容,可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
4. 词数80—100。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Boys and girls, may I have your attention, please?
Thank you for your attention and kindness!
某地遭遇了洪水(flood),为了帮助受灾的人们,某国际学校打算发起一次捐赠活动。假设你是学校广播站的播音员,请你将这次活动的相关事项告知大家。
【要点】1. When and where will the activity be held?
2. What can you donate(捐赠) and what can't you donate?
【要求】1. 结构完整,表达通顺,语言标准,书写清晰。
2. 必须包含所有要点内容,可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
4. 词数80—100。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Boys and girls, may I have your attention, please?
We've just got the news that there is a big flood in the area near our city. Many people have lost their homes and need our help. In order to help them, our school has decided to hold an activity on the school playground from 3:00 to 5:00 this Friday afternoon.
Please bring clothes and books there. Please don't donate food, because it is not easy to keep the food fresh.
Your support will greatly help them overcome their difficulties. Also, please ask your family members and friends to join us.
Thank you for your attention and kindness!
答案：B. One possible version
Boys and girls, may I have your attention, please? We've just got the news that there is a big flood in the area near our city. Many people have lost their homes and need our help. In order to help them, our school has decided to hold an activity on the school playground from 3:00 to 5:00 this Friday afternoon. Please bring clothes and books there. Please don't donate food, because it is not easy to keep the food fresh. Your support will greatly help them overcome their difficulties. Also, please ask your family members and friends to join us.
Thank you for your attention and kindness!
Boys and girls, may I have your attention, please? We've just got the news that there is a big flood in the area near our city. Many people have lost their homes and need our help. In order to help them, our school has decided to hold an activity on the school playground from 3:00 to 5:00 this Friday afternoon. Please bring clothes and books there. Please don't donate food, because it is not easy to keep the food fresh. Your support will greatly help them overcome their difficulties. Also, please ask your family members and friends to join us.
Thank you for your attention and kindness!
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇校园广播通知类的应用文写作，解题时首先要明确写作身份是学校广播站播音员，语气要亲切得体、符合通知的正式感。首先第一步，先承接给定的开头，简单交代洪水受灾的背景，自然引出学校要发起捐赠活动的事由；第二步，紧扣第一个必写要点，清晰准确地说明捐赠活动的具体举办时间和地点，信息要明确无歧义；第三步，紧扣第二个必写要点，分别说明允许捐赠的物品和不允许捐赠的物品，还可以给禁止捐赠的要求补充合理的现实原因，让内容更通顺；最后补充简短的呼吁内容，衔接给定的结尾，同时控制总词数在80-100之间，全程不要出现真实人名、校名等违规信息即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接给定开头，先点明周边区域遭遇洪水、很多灾民失去家园急需帮助的背景，顺理成章引出学校举办捐赠活动的决定，铺垫自然。
2. 明确回应第一个核心要点：清晰告知听众本次捐赠活动的举办地点是学校操场，举办时间是本周五下午3点到5点，信息清晰准确。
3. 明确回应第二个核心要点：说明大家可以捐赠衣物、书籍这类物品，同时明确告知不能捐赠食品，补充解释原因是食品难以保鲜，符合现实逻辑。
4. 最后补充简短的呼吁，号召大家也可以动员亲友参与，衔接题目给出的固定结尾，行文连贯，词数符合要求，没有出现任何违规的真实个人信息。
【答案】
One possible version
Boys and girls, may I have your attention, please? We've just got the news that there is a big flood in the area near our city. Many people have lost their homes and need our help. In order to help them, our school has decided to hold an activity on the school playground from 3:00 to 5:00 this Friday afternoon. Please bring clothes and books there. Please don't donate food, because it is not easy to keep the food fresh. Your support will greatly help them overcome their difficulties. Also, please ask your family members and friends to join us.
Thank you for your attention and kindness!
【知识点】
通知类应用文写作，短文要点整合
【点评】
本题属于校园场景的基础应用文写作，核心要求明确，只需要覆盖题干给出的两个核心信息点，补充合理的背景和呼吁内容，控制好词数，注意广播通知的得体语气，避免出现真实个人信息就可以完成合格的写作，考生可以在要点齐全的基础上适当用简单的复合句提升行文质量，拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇校园广播通知类的应用文写作，解题时首先要明确写作身份是学校广播站播音员，语气要亲切得体、符合通知的正式感。首先第一步，先承接给定的开头，简单交代洪水受灾的背景，自然引出学校要发起捐赠活动的事由；第二步，紧扣第一个必写要点，清晰准确地说明捐赠活动的具体举办时间和地点，信息要明确无歧义；第三步，紧扣第二个必写要点，分别说明允许捐赠的物品和不允许捐赠的物品，还可以给禁止捐赠的要求补充合理的现实原因，让内容更通顺；最后补充简短的呼吁内容，衔接给定的结尾，同时控制总词数在80-100之间，全程不要出现真实人名、校名等违规信息即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接给定开头，先点明周边区域遭遇洪水、很多灾民失去家园急需帮助的背景，顺理成章引出学校举办捐赠活动的决定，铺垫自然。
2. 明确回应第一个核心要点：清晰告知听众本次捐赠活动的举办地点是学校操场，举办时间是本周五下午3点到5点，信息清晰准确。
3. 明确回应第二个核心要点：说明大家可以捐赠衣物、书籍这类物品，同时明确告知不能捐赠食品，补充解释原因是食品难以保鲜，符合现实逻辑。
4. 最后补充简短的呼吁，号召大家也可以动员亲友参与，衔接题目给出的固定结尾，行文连贯，词数符合要求，没有出现任何违规的真实个人信息。
【答案】
One possible version
Boys and girls, may I have your attention, please? We've just got the news that there is a big flood in the area near our city. Many people have lost their homes and need our help. In order to help them, our school has decided to hold an activity on the school playground from 3:00 to 5:00 this Friday afternoon. Please bring clothes and books there. Please don't donate food, because it is not easy to keep the food fresh. Your support will greatly help them overcome their difficulties. Also, please ask your family members and friends to join us.
Thank you for your attention and kindness!
【知识点】
通知类应用文写作，短文要点整合
【点评】
本题属于校园场景的基础应用文写作，核心要求明确，只需要覆盖题干给出的两个核心信息点，补充合理的背景和呼吁内容，控制好词数，注意广播通知的得体语气，避免出现真实个人信息就可以完成合格的写作，考生可以在要点齐全的基础上适当用简单的复合句提升行文质量，拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.7