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B. 写作。(计20分)
由于父母照顾得过于周到,现在许多中学生缺乏自理能力。请你根据下面表格中的内容,按要求用英语写一篇短文,谈谈作为中学生,我们应该如何培养自己的独立性。

【要求】1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确。
2.内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥。
3.词数90左右(已给出的部分不计入总词数)。
As middle school students, it's very important for us to be independent. What should we do to make ourselves independent?








答案:One possible version
As middle school students, it's very important for us to be independent. What should we do to make ourselves independent?
First, we can begin with doing our own things. Why not start with cleaning our own bedroom? We can also wash and put away our own clothes. And we can help with housework. We can do the dishes after meals or we can learn to cook some dishes. It must be cool to let the whole family enjoy the food cooked by us.
It is also important to do things actively. For example, we can make plans for the next week at weekends.
Last but not least, we can learn from model students. They set good examples for us to follow.
I think if we keep on doing these, we'll become more and more independent.
解析:
【分析】
首先我们先明确这道写作题的核心要求:主题是阐述中学生培养独立性的具体做法,需要完整覆盖表格给出的全部4个要点,词数控制在90左右,语句通顺语法正确。解题时我们可以按照逻辑顺序梳理思路:第一步先用连接词First引出第一个要点“从自己的小事做起”,在表格给出的“打扫自己卧室”的基础上补充符合场景的细节,比如自己洗整理衣物;第二步用过渡词引出第二个要点“帮忙做家务”,在“洗碗”的基础上补充学做简单菜肴的细节;第三步引出第三个要点“主动做事”,补充合理的生活化例子,比如自主制定周计划、主动解决学习中的小问题;第四步引出第四个要点“向模范学生学习”,说明模范学生的榜样作用;最后用简短的句子收尾总结,点明坚持这些做法就能越来越独立,整个行文逻辑清晰,要点无遗漏,符合题目的全部要求。
【解析】
1. 承接题干给出的开头内容,用逻辑连接词First开启第一个要点的阐述:围绕“从自己的事做起”,先点明我们可以从打扫自己的卧室开始,补充自己清洗整理个人衣物的细节,贴合“自己的事自己做”的主题。
2. 用过渡句衔接第二个要点“帮忙做家务”:除了表格提到的饭后洗碗,还可以补充学习做简单的菜品,让家人品尝自己做的食物,内容更生动。
3. 接下来阐述第三个要点“主动做事”:补充合理的示例,比如周末主动制定下周的计划,契合“主动做事”的要求。
4. 之后阐述第四个要点“向模范学生学习”:点明模范学生为我们树立了值得跟随的好榜样,符合要点要求。
5. 最后添加收尾句,总结坚持践行这些做法,我们就会变得越来越独立,全文词数符合要求,逻辑连贯,没有语法错误。
【答案】
One possible version
As middle school students, it's very important for us to be independent. What should we do to make ourselves independent?
First, we can begin with doing our own things. Why not start with cleaning our own bedroom? We can also wash and put away our own clothes. And we can help with housework. We can do the dishes after meals or we can learn to cook some dishes. It must be cool to let the whole family enjoy the food cooked by us.
It is also important to do things actively. For example, we can make plans for the next week at weekends.
Last but not least, we can learn from model students. They set good examples for us to follow.
I think if we keep on doing these, we'll become more and more independent.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作,话题作文表达
【点评】
本题是贴近中学生日常生活的话题写作,所有核心要点都通过表格明确给出,学生不需要额外构思核心框架,只需要在给定要点的基础上补充合理的生活化细节,用好逻辑连接词理顺行文顺序,避免基础语法错误,就可以写出符合要求的短文,备考时可以多积累这类生活类话题的常用表达,提升写作流畅度。
【难度系数】
0.7
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