小试身手
健康的饮食和良好的生活习惯能让我们保持健康。请根据下面的思维导图,以“How to keep healthy”为题写一篇英语小短文,介绍一下 Tom 的习惯。注意用第三人称。不少于 50 词。

How to keep healthy
健康的饮食和良好的生活习惯能让我们保持健康。请根据下面的思维导图,以“How to keep healthy”为题写一篇英语小短文,介绍一下 Tom 的习惯。注意用第三人称。不少于 50 词。
How to keep healthy
Good living and eating habits are very important to people's health. To keep healthy, Tom gets up early every day. And he often does exercise like swimming. He doesn't go to bed late at night. And he doesn't watch TV, play computer games or play with his parent's mobile phone for a long time.
Tom has a healthy diet (日常饮食). He often eats fruit, vegetables and some meat every day. He never eats too much sweet food. It's bad for his teeth and it may make him fat.
答案:Good living and eating habits are very important to people's health. To keep healthy, Tom gets up early every day. And he often does exercise like swimming. He doesn't go to bed late at night. And he doesn't watch TV, play computer games or play with his parent's mobile phone for a long time. Tom has a healthy diet (日常饮食). He often eats fruit, vegetables and some meat every day. He never eats too much sweet food. It's bad for his teeth and it may make him fat.
解析:
【分析】
首先明确题目要求:以“How to keep healthy”为题,用第三人称介绍Tom的健康习惯,不少于50词,需结合思维导图的“living habits(生活习惯)”和“eating habits(饮食习惯)”,其中对勾为良好习惯,叉号为需避免的不良习惯。解题思路:1. 开篇总述健康习惯对健康的重要性;2. 分述生活习惯:如游泳(对应对勾)、不熬夜、不长时间玩电子设备等;3. 分述饮食习惯:如吃果蔬肉(对应对勾)、不吃过多甜食(对应叉号的蛋糕类);4. 全程用第三人称Tom,确保语句通顺、符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头点明主题:Good living and eating habits are very important to people's health.
2. 介绍Tom的生活习惯:Tom gets up early every day. And he often does exercise like swimming. He doesn't go to bed late at night. And he doesn't watch TV, play computer games or play with his parent's mobile phone for a long time.
3. 介绍Tom的饮食习惯:Tom has a healthy diet. He often eats fruit, vegetables and some meat every day. He never eats too much sweet food. It's bad for his teeth and it may make him fat.
【答案】
Good living and eating habits are very important to people's health. To keep healthy, Tom gets up early every day. And he often does exercise like swimming. He doesn't go to bed late at night. And he doesn't watch TV, play computer games or play with his parent's mobile phone for a long time. Tom has a healthy diet (日常饮食). He often eats fruit, vegetables and some meat every day. He never eats too much sweet food. It's bad for his teeth and it may make him fat.
【知识点】
英语话题写作;健康类词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,结合思维导图的生活习惯和饮食习惯两方面展开,用第三人称介绍Tom的习惯,结构清晰,内容完整,符合字数要求,语言通顺自然。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确题目要求:以“How to keep healthy”为题,用第三人称介绍Tom的健康习惯,不少于50词,需结合思维导图的“living habits(生活习惯)”和“eating habits(饮食习惯)”,其中对勾为良好习惯,叉号为需避免的不良习惯。解题思路:1. 开篇总述健康习惯对健康的重要性;2. 分述生活习惯:如游泳(对应对勾)、不熬夜、不长时间玩电子设备等;3. 分述饮食习惯:如吃果蔬肉(对应对勾)、不吃过多甜食(对应叉号的蛋糕类);4. 全程用第三人称Tom,确保语句通顺、符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头点明主题:Good living and eating habits are very important to people's health.
2. 介绍Tom的生活习惯:Tom gets up early every day. And he often does exercise like swimming. He doesn't go to bed late at night. And he doesn't watch TV, play computer games or play with his parent's mobile phone for a long time.
3. 介绍Tom的饮食习惯:Tom has a healthy diet. He often eats fruit, vegetables and some meat every day. He never eats too much sweet food. It's bad for his teeth and it may make him fat.
【答案】
Good living and eating habits are very important to people's health. To keep healthy, Tom gets up early every day. And he often does exercise like swimming. He doesn't go to bed late at night. And he doesn't watch TV, play computer games or play with his parent's mobile phone for a long time. Tom has a healthy diet (日常饮食). He often eats fruit, vegetables and some meat every day. He never eats too much sweet food. It's bad for his teeth and it may make him fat.
【知识点】
英语话题写作;健康类词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,结合思维导图的生活习惯和饮食习惯两方面展开,用第三人称介绍Tom的习惯,结构清晰,内容完整,符合字数要求,语言通顺自然。
【难度系数】
0.5