十三 书面表达。(10分)
你们学校将举办一场心理游园会,同学们在“解忧杂货铺”匿名写下了自己的烦恼。请你根据同学们写下的烦恼,写一篇英语演讲稿,谈谈你解决这些问题时的方法。
要求:语句通顺,意思连贯;不少于5句话,开头已给出,不计入总句数。

Good morning, everyone! Many of you share your worries at the “Worry-Free Shop”.
你们学校将举办一场心理游园会,同学们在“解忧杂货铺”匿名写下了自己的烦恼。请你根据同学们写下的烦恼,写一篇英语演讲稿,谈谈你解决这些问题时的方法。
要求:语句通顺,意思连贯;不少于5句话,开头已给出,不计入总句数。
Good morning, everyone! Many of you share your worries at the “Worry-Free Shop”.
Here are some of my ways to deal with the worries.
Before exams, I often feel nervous and cannot sleep well. I listen to some music before going to bed. It helps me relax and fall asleep more easily. When I sometimes don't do well in English, I ask my teachers for help and also watch English films with my friends. It's good for my listening and speaking. I used to be too shy to speak in public. I join the Speaking Club and try hard to speak in front of people. It makes me feel better.
Let's work together to be better. Thank you!
答案:示例:
Good morning, everyone! Many of you share your worries at the “Worry-Free Shop”. Here are some of my ways to deal with the worries.
Before exams, I often feel nervous and cannot sleep well. I listen to some music before going to bed. It helps me relax and fall asleep more easily. When I sometimes don't do well in English, I ask my teachers for help and also watch English films with my friends. It's good for my listening and speaking. I used to be too shy to speak in public. I join the Speaking Club and try hard to speak in front of people. It makes me feel better.
Let's work together to be better. Thank you!
Good morning, everyone! Many of you share your worries at the “Worry-Free Shop”. Here are some of my ways to deal with the worries.
Before exams, I often feel nervous and cannot sleep well. I listen to some music before going to bed. It helps me relax and fall asleep more easily. When I sometimes don't do well in English, I ask my teachers for help and also watch English films with my friends. It's good for my listening and speaking. I used to be too shy to speak in public. I join the Speaking Club and try hard to speak in front of people. It makes me feel better.
Let's work together to be better. Thank you!
解析:
【分析】首先明确题目要求:需针对同学们的三个烦恼(考试紧张失眠、英语成绩不佳、害羞不敢当众讲话),结合已给出的演讲稿开头,撰写一篇语句通顺、意思连贯且不少于5句话的英语演讲稿。解题思路为:先承接开头引出解决方法,再分别针对每个烦恼给出具体可行的解决措施,最后收尾呼应完成演讲稿。
【解析】1. 承接开头,引出解决方法;2. 针对考试紧张睡不好的问题,提出睡前听音乐放松;3. 针对英语不好的问题,提出向老师求助、和朋友看英语电影提升;4. 针对害羞不敢当众讲话的问题,提出加入演讲俱乐部练习;5. 收尾总结,表达鼓励。
【答案】Good morning, everyone! Many of you share your worries at the “Worry-Free Shop”. Here are some of my ways to deal with the worries. Before exams, I often feel nervous and cannot sleep well. I listen to some music before going to bed. It helps me relax and fall asleep more easily. When I sometimes don't do well in English, I ask my teachers for help and also watch English films with my friends. It's good for my listening and speaking. I used to be too shy to speak in public. I join the Speaking Club and try hard to speak in front of people. It makes me feel better. Let's work together to be better. Thank you!
【知识点】英语书面表达、英语应用文写作
【点评】本篇演讲稿针对三个烦恼给出了具体可操作的解决方法,语句通顺连贯,符合演讲稿格式,内容贴合主题,有效回应了同学们的烦恼。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 承接开头,引出解决方法;2. 针对考试紧张睡不好的问题,提出睡前听音乐放松;3. 针对英语不好的问题,提出向老师求助、和朋友看英语电影提升;4. 针对害羞不敢当众讲话的问题,提出加入演讲俱乐部练习;5. 收尾总结,表达鼓励。
【答案】Good morning, everyone! Many of you share your worries at the “Worry-Free Shop”. Here are some of my ways to deal with the worries. Before exams, I often feel nervous and cannot sleep well. I listen to some music before going to bed. It helps me relax and fall asleep more easily. When I sometimes don't do well in English, I ask my teachers for help and also watch English films with my friends. It's good for my listening and speaking. I used to be too shy to speak in public. I join the Speaking Club and try hard to speak in front of people. It makes me feel better. Let's work together to be better. Thank you!
【知识点】英语书面表达、英语应用文写作
【点评】本篇演讲稿针对三个烦恼给出了具体可操作的解决方法,语句通顺连贯,符合演讲稿格式,内容贴合主题,有效回应了同学们的烦恼。
【难度系数】0.6