单元主题
本单元我们学习了日期的表达方式，学会了如何描述在某个特殊日子里为长辈所做的事情，并能够表达对长辈的爱与关怀。请运用本单元所学知识，写一篇英文短文，记录你为妈妈庆祝生日的经过。
思路点拨
范文欣赏
Last Sunday was May 10th. It was my mother’s 40th birthday. I got up early that day. First, I made a beautiful handmade thank-you card for her. Then I went to the flower shop and bought some roses. In the evening, our family had a big birthday party. Dad and I cooked her favourite dishes together. He also bought a big birthday cake. I gave Mum the card and flowers. She was very surprised. We sang the birthday song and she made a wish before blowing out the candles.
It was a really wonderful day. My mother was very happy, and so was I. I love my mother and I hope she can be happy every day.
本单元我们学习了日期的表达方式，学会了如何描述在某个特殊日子里为长辈所做的事情，并能够表达对长辈的爱与关怀。请运用本单元所学知识，写一篇英文短文，记录你为妈妈庆祝生日的经过。
思路点拨
范文欣赏
Last Sunday was May 10th. It was my mother’s 40th birthday. I got up early that day. First, I made a beautiful handmade thank-you card for her. Then I went to the flower shop and bought some roses. In the evening, our family had a big birthday party. Dad and I cooked her favourite dishes together. He also bought a big birthday cake. I gave Mum the card and flowers. She was very surprised. We sang the birthday song and she made a wish before blowing out the candles.
It was a really wonderful day. My mother was very happy, and so was I. I love my mother and I hope she can be happy every day.
答案：参考范文：
My mother's birthday
My mother's birthday is on October 12th. Last year, we had a warm birthday party for her.
I got up very early that day. First, I helped my father clean the whole house, and we put many pretty pink balloons in the living room. Then I made a hand-drawn thank-you card for my mother as my special gift. My father and I also cooked a lot of her favourite dishes, like sweet and sour fish and tomato egg soup. When my mother came back home from work, she was so surprised. We sang the birthday song for her, and she made a wish before blowing out the candles on the cream cake.
It was a really wonderful day. My mother said it was the sweetest birthday she had ever had. I love my mother and I hope she can be happy every day.
My mother's birthday
My mother's birthday is on October 12th. Last year, we had a warm birthday party for her.
I got up very early that day. First, I helped my father clean the whole house, and we put many pretty pink balloons in the living room. Then I made a hand-drawn thank-you card for my mother as my special gift. My father and I also cooked a lot of her favourite dishes, like sweet and sour fish and tomato egg soup. When my mother came back home from work, she was so surprised. We sang the birthday song for her, and she made a wish before blowing out the candles on the cream cake.
It was a really wonderful day. My mother said it was the sweetest birthday she had ever had. I love my mother and I hope she can be happy every day.
解析：
【分析】
首先明确写作主题是记录为妈妈庆祝生日的经过，需结合思维导图的三部分展开：1. 用“My mother's birthday is on...”介绍妈妈的生日日期；2. 用First、Then等顺序词，结合一般过去式详细描述当天的活动，如和爸爸一起准备礼物、打扫房间、做妈妈爱吃的菜等；3. 用“It was a really wonderful day.”总结当天感受，最后表达对妈妈的爱。写作时要注意时态正确、内容具体、情感真实。
【解析】
按照思维导图结构分三部分写作：
1. 开篇介绍妈妈生日日期：My mother's birthday is on October 12th.
2. 详细描述活动：先写早起和爸爸打扫房间、布置气球，再写制作手工贺卡，接着写和爸爸做妈妈爱吃的菜，最后写妈妈回家后的反应，以及唱生日歌、许愿吹蜡烛的过程，全程用一般过去式。
3. 结尾总结感受并表达爱意：It was a really wonderful day. My mother said it was the sweetest birthday she had ever had. I love my mother and I hope she can be happy every day.
【答案】
参考范文：
My mother's birthday
My mother's birthday is on October 12th. Last year, we had a warm birthday party for her.
I got up very early that day. First, I helped my father clean the whole house, and we put many pretty pink balloons in the living room. Then I made a hand-drawn thank-you card for my mother as my special gift. My father and I also cooked a lot of her favourite dishes, like sweet and sour fish and tomato egg soup. When my mother came back home from work, she was so surprised. We sang the birthday song for her, and she made a wish before blowing out the candles on the cream cake.
It was a really wonderful day. My mother said it was the sweetest birthday she had ever had. I love my mother and I hope she can be happy every day.
【知识点】
英语写作、一般过去时、日期表达
【点评】
本文紧扣单元主题，结构清晰，按思维导图思路展开，内容具体生动，情感真挚，准确运用了一般过去式和日期表达，体现了对妈妈的爱与关怀，符合写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作主题是记录为妈妈庆祝生日的经过，需结合思维导图的三部分展开：1. 用“My mother's birthday is on...”介绍妈妈的生日日期；2. 用First、Then等顺序词，结合一般过去式详细描述当天的活动，如和爸爸一起准备礼物、打扫房间、做妈妈爱吃的菜等；3. 用“It was a really wonderful day.”总结当天感受，最后表达对妈妈的爱。写作时要注意时态正确、内容具体、情感真实。
【解析】
按照思维导图结构分三部分写作：
1. 开篇介绍妈妈生日日期：My mother's birthday is on October 12th.
2. 详细描述活动：先写早起和爸爸打扫房间、布置气球，再写制作手工贺卡，接着写和爸爸做妈妈爱吃的菜，最后写妈妈回家后的反应，以及唱生日歌、许愿吹蜡烛的过程，全程用一般过去式。
3. 结尾总结感受并表达爱意：It was a really wonderful day. My mother said it was the sweetest birthday she had ever had. I love my mother and I hope she can be happy every day.
【答案】
参考范文：
My mother's birthday
My mother's birthday is on October 12th. Last year, we had a warm birthday party for her.
I got up very early that day. First, I helped my father clean the whole house, and we put many pretty pink balloons in the living room. Then I made a hand-drawn thank-you card for my mother as my special gift. My father and I also cooked a lot of her favourite dishes, like sweet and sour fish and tomato egg soup. When my mother came back home from work, she was so surprised. We sang the birthday song for her, and she made a wish before blowing out the candles on the cream cake.
It was a really wonderful day. My mother said it was the sweetest birthday she had ever had. I love my mother and I hope she can be happy every day.
【知识点】
英语写作、一般过去时、日期表达
【点评】
本文紧扣单元主题，结构清晰，按思维导图思路展开，内容具体生动，情感真挚，准确运用了一般过去式和日期表达，体现了对妈妈的爱与关怀，符合写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
小试身手
下图是楠楠在祖父八十寿诞那天拍摄的照片。假设你是楠楠，请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于60词的英文短文记录下祖父寿诞那天的活动。
提示：上周六是祖父的80岁生日。楠楠与堂兄弟姐妹一起为祖父贺寿。堂哥Jack和他的父母为祖父买了新的智能手机与电视。楠楠则以传统寿桃献礼。寿宴上，堂妹Lucy演唱了《茉莉花》，堂姐Ruby弹钢琴伴奏。堂姐Cathy为祖父做了美味又健康的菜肴。大家都很开心。
下图是楠楠在祖父八十寿诞那天拍摄的照片。假设你是楠楠，请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于60词的英文短文记录下祖父寿诞那天的活动。
提示：上周六是祖父的80岁生日。楠楠与堂兄弟姐妹一起为祖父贺寿。堂哥Jack和他的父母为祖父买了新的智能手机与电视。楠楠则以传统寿桃献礼。寿宴上，堂妹Lucy演唱了《茉莉花》，堂姐Ruby弹钢琴伴奏。堂姐Cathy为祖父做了美味又健康的菜肴。大家都很开心。
Last Saturday was the thirteenth of June. It was my grandpa's eightieth birthday. We had a big party for Grandpa at home. All my family members came to the party. Before the party, we prepared a lot of gifts. Jack and his parents bought a new smartphone and a new TV for Grandpa. As for me, I chose the birthday peach for my grandpa. At the party, Ruby and Lucy gave a performance. Lucy sang the beautiful song Jasmine Flower and Ruby played the piano. Cathy was great too. She cared about Grandpa's health. She cooked delicious and healthy dishes for Grandpa.
Grandpa was happy on his birthday. And we all had a great time together.
答案：Last Saturday was the thirteenth of June. It was my grandpa's eightieth birthday. We had a big party for Grandpa at home. All my family members came to the party. Before the party, we prepared a lot of gifts. Jack and his parents bought a new smartphone and a new TV for Grandpa. As for me, I chose the birthday peach for my grandpa. At the party, Ruby and Lucy gave a performance. Lucy sang the beautiful song Jasmine Flower and Ruby played the piano. Cathy was great too. She cared about Grandpa's health. She cooked delicious and healthy dishes for Grandpa.
Grandpa was happy on his birthday. And we all had a great time together.
Grandpa was happy on his birthday. And we all had a great time together.
解析：
【分析】
本题要求结合图片与提示内容，撰写一篇记录祖父80岁寿诞活动的英文短文。需先明确时间（6月13日，上周六）、核心事件（寿宴）、参与人物及具体活动（送礼物、表演、准备菜肴），将提示要点与图片元素对应，用连贯的英文表达，确保要点齐全、字数达标。
【解析】
1. 开头点明时间与事件：Last Saturday was June 13th, my grandpa's 80th birthday. We held a big party for him at home.
2. 介绍礼物准备：Jack and his parents bought a new smartphone and a TV for Grandpa. I prepared the traditional birthday peach as a gift.
3. 描述寿宴表演：Lucy sang the song *Jasmine Flower* and Ruby played the piano to accompany her.
4. 说明菜肴：Cathy cooked delicious and healthy dishes for Grandpa.
5. 结尾表达感受：Grandpa was happy, and we all had a great time.
【答案】
Last Saturday was the thirteenth of June. It was my grandpa's eightieth birthday. We had a big party for Grandpa at home. All my family members came to the party. Before the party, we prepared a lot of gifts. Jack and his parents bought a new smartphone and a new TV for Grandpa. As for me, I chose the birthday peach for my grandpa. At the party, Ruby and Lucy gave a performance. Lucy sang the beautiful song Jasmine Flower and Ruby played the piano. Cathy was great too. She cared about Grandpa's health. She cooked delicious and healthy dishes for Grandpa.
Grandpa was happy on his birthday. And we all had a great time together.
【知识点】
英文记叙文写作，生日主题表达
【点评】
短文准确结合图片信息与提示内容，涵盖所有要求要点，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合英文写作规范，字数达标。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求结合图片与提示内容，撰写一篇记录祖父80岁寿诞活动的英文短文。需先明确时间（6月13日，上周六）、核心事件（寿宴）、参与人物及具体活动（送礼物、表演、准备菜肴），将提示要点与图片元素对应，用连贯的英文表达，确保要点齐全、字数达标。
【解析】
1. 开头点明时间与事件：Last Saturday was June 13th, my grandpa's 80th birthday. We held a big party for him at home.
2. 介绍礼物准备：Jack and his parents bought a new smartphone and a TV for Grandpa. I prepared the traditional birthday peach as a gift.
3. 描述寿宴表演：Lucy sang the song *Jasmine Flower* and Ruby played the piano to accompany her.
4. 说明菜肴：Cathy cooked delicious and healthy dishes for Grandpa.
5. 结尾表达感受：Grandpa was happy, and we all had a great time.
【答案】
Last Saturday was the thirteenth of June. It was my grandpa's eightieth birthday. We had a big party for Grandpa at home. All my family members came to the party. Before the party, we prepared a lot of gifts. Jack and his parents bought a new smartphone and a new TV for Grandpa. As for me, I chose the birthday peach for my grandpa. At the party, Ruby and Lucy gave a performance. Lucy sang the beautiful song Jasmine Flower and Ruby played the piano. Cathy was great too. She cared about Grandpa's health. She cooked delicious and healthy dishes for Grandpa.
Grandpa was happy on his birthday. And we all had a great time together.
【知识点】
英文记叙文写作，生日主题表达
【点评】
短文准确结合图片信息与提示内容，涵盖所有要求要点，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合英文写作规范，字数达标。
【难度系数】
0.5