经典例题
你的学校将举办一场时装设计比赛,请根据表格中提供的信息,以“My fashion design”为题,写一篇短文。词数70左右。

你的学校将举办一场时装设计比赛,请根据表格中提供的信息,以“My fashion design”为题,写一篇短文。词数70左右。
答案:My fashion design
I want to design a set of fashionable clothes for girls. First, the red blouse is made of cotton. It looks bright and feels soft, perfect for summer. Then the black skirt is fine and comfortable. It is made of silk and matches the blouse well. Finally, the grey leather boots are modern and light. The whole design looks very nice.
I want to design a set of fashionable clothes for girls. First, the red blouse is made of cotton. It looks bright and feels soft, perfect for summer. Then the black skirt is fine and comfortable. It is made of silk and matches the blouse well. Finally, the grey leather boots are modern and light. The whole design looks very nice.
解析:
这是七年级的命题写作题,写作可按以下步骤完成:
1. 开篇点明主题,说明自己要设计一套适合女生的时尚穿搭;
2. 结合表格给出的信息依次介绍三件单品:补充表格省略的内容,给女式衬衫添加“清爽亮眼、适合夏季”的特点,给短裙补充材质为丝绸,给靴子添加“时髦轻便”的特点,符合七年级词汇难度;
3. 最后简单评价整套搭配,控制总词数在70左右,保证语句通顺连贯。
1. 开篇点明主题,说明自己要设计一套适合女生的时尚穿搭;
2. 结合表格给出的信息依次介绍三件单品:补充表格省略的内容,给女式衬衫添加“清爽亮眼、适合夏季”的特点,给短裙补充材质为丝绸,给靴子添加“时髦轻便”的特点,符合七年级词汇难度;
3. 最后简单评价整套搭配,控制总词数在70左右,保证语句通顺连贯。