九、短文写作。
假如你是孙颖,仔细阅读陈浩的来信,然后给他写一封回信,至少提供三条建议。

Dear Sun Ying,
I’m worried these days. I’ll take part in the speech competition next month. I have to remember a lot of words and that’s very difficult for me. I don’t know how to make the right movements with my hands. I’m afraid of speaking in front of many people. Also, I don’t have enough time to practise. What should I do? Should I give up? Can you give me some advice?
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Chen Hao

Dear Chen Hao,
I’m sorry to hear that you feel worried. Don’t give up easily! Here is my advice for you.
First,
I hope my ideas can help you. Wish you good luck!
Yours,
Sun Ying
假如你是孙颖,仔细阅读陈浩的来信,然后给他写一封回信,至少提供三条建议。
Dear Sun Ying,
I’m worried these days. I’ll take part in the speech competition next month. I have to remember a lot of words and that’s very difficult for me. I don’t know how to make the right movements with my hands. I’m afraid of speaking in front of many people. Also, I don’t have enough time to practise. What should I do? Should I give up? Can you give me some advice?
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Chen Hao
Dear Chen Hao,
I’m sorry to hear that you feel worried. Don’t give up easily! Here is my advice for you.
First,
practise with your family and friends. They can help you remember the words.
.Second, put the words into some parts. You can remember one part every day. That will be easy for you.
Third, you can also practise in front of a mirror.
Fourth, practise for half an hour from Monday to Friday. Spend more time practising at weekends.
Fifth, when you are in the speech competition, take a deep breath and calm down. Don’t be afraid.
I hope my ideas can help you. Wish you good luck!
Yours,
Sun Ying
答案:示例: Dear Chen Hao,
I'm sorry to hear that you feel worried. Don't give up easily! Here is my advice for you.
First, practise with your family and friends. They can help you remember the words. Second, put the words into some parts. You can remember one part every day. That will be easy for you. Third, you can also practise in front of a mirror. Fourth, practise for half an hour from Monday to Friday. Spend more time practising at weekends. Fifth, when you are in the speech competition, take a deep breath and calm down. Don't be afraid.
I hope my ideas can help you. Wish you good luck!
Yours,
Sun Ying
I'm sorry to hear that you feel worried. Don't give up easily! Here is my advice for you.
First, practise with your family and friends. They can help you remember the words. Second, put the words into some parts. You can remember one part every day. That will be easy for you. Third, you can also practise in front of a mirror. Fourth, practise for half an hour from Monday to Friday. Spend more time practising at weekends. Fifth, when you are in the speech competition, take a deep breath and calm down. Don't be afraid.
I hope my ideas can help you. Wish you good luck!
Yours,
Sun Ying
解析:
【分析】
首先明确写作任务:以孙颖的身份给陈浩写回信,针对他在演讲比赛中遇到的记单词困难、手部动作不熟练、害怕当众演讲、练习时间不足的问题,给出至少三条合理可行的建议,同时遵循英文书信的格式。思考时需紧扣陈浩的具体困扰,每条建议要对应解决相关问题,语言要委婉实用,符合朋友间的交流语气。
【解析】
按照英文书信格式,开头先安慰陈浩不要轻易放弃,再针对他的问题给出具体建议:第一,和家人朋友一起练习,借助他们的帮助记忆单词;第二,将单词分成若干部分,每天记忆一部分,降低记忆难度;第三,对着镜子练习,纠正手部动作;第四,合理安排练习时间,工作日每天练习半小时,周末增加练习时长;第五,比赛时深呼吸放松,缓解紧张情绪。最后表达祝愿,完成书信。
【答案】
Dear Chen Hao,
I'm sorry to hear that you feel worried. Don't give up easily! Here is my advice for you.
First, practise with your family and friends. They can help you remember the words. Second, put the words into some parts. You can remember one part every day. That will be easy for you. Third, you can also practise in front of a mirror. Fourth, practise for half an hour from Monday to Friday. Spend more time practising at weekends. Fifth, when you are in the speech competition, take a deep breath and calm down. Don't be afraid.
I hope my ideas can help you. Wish you good luck!
Yours,
Sun Ying
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议表达、实用问题解决
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语应用文写作能力,要求结合具体问题给出针对性建议,既考查语言运用能力,也考查解决实际问题的逻辑思维,符合英语交际的语境要求,能引导学生将英语学习与实际应用结合。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作任务:以孙颖的身份给陈浩写回信,针对他在演讲比赛中遇到的记单词困难、手部动作不熟练、害怕当众演讲、练习时间不足的问题,给出至少三条合理可行的建议,同时遵循英文书信的格式。思考时需紧扣陈浩的具体困扰,每条建议要对应解决相关问题,语言要委婉实用,符合朋友间的交流语气。
【解析】
按照英文书信格式,开头先安慰陈浩不要轻易放弃,再针对他的问题给出具体建议:第一,和家人朋友一起练习,借助他们的帮助记忆单词;第二,将单词分成若干部分,每天记忆一部分,降低记忆难度;第三,对着镜子练习,纠正手部动作;第四,合理安排练习时间,工作日每天练习半小时,周末增加练习时长;第五,比赛时深呼吸放松,缓解紧张情绪。最后表达祝愿,完成书信。
【答案】
Dear Chen Hao,
I'm sorry to hear that you feel worried. Don't give up easily! Here is my advice for you.
First, practise with your family and friends. They can help you remember the words. Second, put the words into some parts. You can remember one part every day. That will be easy for you. Third, you can also practise in front of a mirror. Fourth, practise for half an hour from Monday to Friday. Spend more time practising at weekends. Fifth, when you are in the speech competition, take a deep breath and calm down. Don't be afraid.
I hope my ideas can help you. Wish you good luck!
Yours,
Sun Ying
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议表达、实用问题解决
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语应用文写作能力,要求结合具体问题给出针对性建议,既考查语言运用能力,也考查解决实际问题的逻辑思维,符合英语交际的语境要求,能引导学生将英语学习与实际应用结合。
【难度系数】
0.5