九、短文写作。
仔细阅读黄文秀的信息卡,写一篇短文介绍她的事迹,不少于9句。

Huang Wenxiu was a great person.
We should learn from her.
仔细阅读黄文秀的信息卡,写一篇短文介绍她的事迹,不少于9句。
Huang Wenxiu was a great person.
We should learn from her.
答案:示例:Huang Wenxiu was a great person. She was born in 1989 in Guangxi. She studied at a university in Beijing. She gave up good jobs in big cities after graduation and went back to Guangxi. She worked in a poor mountain village. She tried her best to help the poor people there. She worked hard and people's lives became better. In 2019, there was a big flood. Sadly, she passed away in the flood.
We should learn from her. She was kind and helpful. Her kindness brought warmth to people around her.
We should learn from her. She was kind and helpful. Her kindness brought warmth to people around her.
解析:
【分析】本题要求根据黄文秀的信息卡写一篇介绍她事迹的英语短文,需衔接给定的开头和结尾,且不少于9句。解题思路:先提取信息卡中的关键信息(出生时间地点、求学经历、毕业后选择、工作地点、帮扶村民、去世情况),再将这些信息组织成连贯的句子,补充合理细节使内容完整,确保句子数量达标,同时衔接给出的开头与结尾。
【解析】写作时,先承接开头句“Hung Wenxiu was a great person.”,依次介绍她的出生信息(1989年生于广西)、在北京读大学、毕业后放弃大城市工作回广西、在贫困山村工作、尽力帮助村民、2019年在洪水中去世,最后补充合适内容衔接结尾句“We should learn from her.”,使短文连贯完整,满足句数要求。
【答案】Huang Wenxiu was a great person. She was born in 1989 in Guangxi. She studied at a university in Beijing. She gave up good jobs in big cities after graduation and went back to Guangxi. She worked in a poor mountain village. She tried her best to help the poor people there. She worked hard and people's lives became better. In 2019, there was a big flood. Sadly, she passed away in the flood.
We should learn from her. She was kind and helpful. Her kindness brought warmth to people around her.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、信息整合表达
【点评】本题考查学生提取信息并运用英语连贯表达人物事迹的能力,需准确梳理给定信息,合理组织语言,难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时,先承接开头句“Hung Wenxiu was a great person.”,依次介绍她的出生信息(1989年生于广西)、在北京读大学、毕业后放弃大城市工作回广西、在贫困山村工作、尽力帮助村民、2019年在洪水中去世,最后补充合适内容衔接结尾句“We should learn from her.”,使短文连贯完整,满足句数要求。
【答案】Huang Wenxiu was a great person. She was born in 1989 in Guangxi. She studied at a university in Beijing. She gave up good jobs in big cities after graduation and went back to Guangxi. She worked in a poor mountain village. She tried her best to help the poor people there. She worked hard and people's lives became better. In 2019, there was a big flood. Sadly, she passed away in the flood.
We should learn from her. She was kind and helpful. Her kindness brought warmth to people around her.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、信息整合表达
【点评】本题考查学生提取信息并运用英语连贯表达人物事迹的能力,需准确梳理给定信息,合理组织语言,难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5