K Think and write(书面表达)
你参加过什么比赛?比赛前的练习与努力、比赛中的表现、比赛后的心情给你留下了什么印象?请根据思维导图提示,以“A competition”为题写一篇短文,50词左右。

A competition
你参加过什么比赛?比赛前的练习与努力、比赛中的表现、比赛后的心情给你留下了什么印象?请根据思维导图提示,以“A competition”为题写一篇短文,50词左右。
A competition
答案:A running competition
One day, there was a school running race. I was not very fast then, but I wanted to try my best. I practised running for half an hour every day after school.
First I was nervous in the competition. Then I tried my best to run as fast as I could.
I got the second prize at last. I felt so excited and really happy.
One day, there was a school running race. I was not very fast then, but I wanted to try my best. I practised running for half an hour every day after school.
First I was nervous in the competition. Then I tried my best to run as fast as I could.
I got the second prize at last. I felt so excited and really happy.
解析:
【分析】
首先根据思维导图补全题目,选择合适的比赛类型(如running);接着按照思维导图的三个分支(赛前、赛中、赛后)分别写作:赛前部分描述比赛前的情况和自己的努力,赛中部分写比赛中的心情与表现,赛后部分写比赛结果和感受,确保语句通顺、符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 补全题目:将“A ______ competition”补充为“A running competition”,选择常见的比赛类型;
2. 赛前写作:结合思维导图“Before the competition”的提示,写比赛前的背景和自己的准备,如“One day, there was a school running race. I was not very fast then, but I wanted to try my best. I practised running for half an hour every day after school.”;
3. 赛中写作:对应“In the competition”的提示,写比赛中的状态变化,如“First I was nervous in the competition. Then I tried my best to run as fast as I could.”;
4. 赛后写作:对应“After the competition”的提示,写比赛结果和个人感受,如“I got the second prize at last. I felt so excited and really happy.”;
5. 整体调整,保证内容连贯、符合50词左右的要求。
【答案】
A running competition
One day, there was a school running race. I was not very fast then, but I wanted to try my best. I practised running for half an hour every day after school.
First I was nervous in the competition. Then I tried my best to run as fast as I could.
I got the second prize at last. I felt so excited and really happy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、思维导图写作
【点评】
本题依托思维导图搭建写作框架,要求学生按赛前、赛中、赛后的顺序组织内容,结构清晰,语言简洁,符合初中英语书面表达的基础要求,能有效考查学生的写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先根据思维导图补全题目,选择合适的比赛类型(如running);接着按照思维导图的三个分支(赛前、赛中、赛后)分别写作:赛前部分描述比赛前的情况和自己的努力,赛中部分写比赛中的心情与表现,赛后部分写比赛结果和感受,确保语句通顺、符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 补全题目:将“A ______ competition”补充为“A running competition”,选择常见的比赛类型;
2. 赛前写作:结合思维导图“Before the competition”的提示,写比赛前的背景和自己的准备,如“One day, there was a school running race. I was not very fast then, but I wanted to try my best. I practised running for half an hour every day after school.”;
3. 赛中写作:对应“In the competition”的提示,写比赛中的状态变化,如“First I was nervous in the competition. Then I tried my best to run as fast as I could.”;
4. 赛后写作:对应“After the competition”的提示,写比赛结果和个人感受,如“I got the second prize at last. I felt so excited and really happy.”;
5. 整体调整,保证内容连贯、符合50词左右的要求。
【答案】
A running competition
One day, there was a school running race. I was not very fast then, but I wanted to try my best. I practised running for half an hour every day after school.
First I was nervous in the competition. Then I tried my best to run as fast as I could.
I got the second prize at last. I felt so excited and really happy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、思维导图写作
【点评】
本题依托思维导图搭建写作框架,要求学生按赛前、赛中、赛后的顺序组织内容,结构清晰,语言简洁,符合初中英语书面表达的基础要求,能有效考查学生的写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.6