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十二、书面表达。(共10分)
假设你是赵林,明天是星期日,也是你爷爷的生日。你想给爷爷制作一张漂亮的贺卡,为此你每晚练习绘画技巧。昨天你终于做好了贺卡。你想要明天去看望爷爷并为他打扫房间、唱生日歌。请根据以上提示写一篇不少于7句话的英语短文。




答案:One possible version:
Tomorrow is Sunday and it's my grandpa's birthday. I want to make a beautiful card for him. I practised painting skills every night. I finished it yesterday. I want to visit my grandpa tomorrow. I want to help him clean his room and sing a birthday song for him. I love my grandpa so much!
解析:
【分析】
这是一道英语书面表达题,要求根据给定提示完成短文写作。解题思路为:1. 明确写作身份(赵林)与核心事件(爷爷生日的相关安排);2. 梳理所有提示要点:周日是爷爷生日、想制作贺卡、每晚练习绘画、昨天完成贺卡、明天看望爷爷、打扫房间、唱生日歌;3. 确定时态:描述过去动作(练绘画、完成贺卡)用一般过去时,描述当前想法和未来计划用一般现在时;4. 将要点串联成通顺的英语句子,确保不少于7句,符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
写作时需紧扣提示要点,正确运用时态,具体步骤:① 开篇点明时间(周日)和核心事件(爷爷生日);② 说明制作贺卡的原因及准备过程(每晚练绘画,昨天完成);③ 阐述明天的计划(看望爷爷、打扫房间、唱生日歌);④ 补充表达对爷爷的爱,使内容完整。示例短文如下:
One possible version:
Tomorrow is Sunday and it's my grandpa's birthday. I want to make a beautiful card for him. I practised painting skills every night. I finished it yesterday. I want to visit my grandpa tomorrow. I want to help him clean his room and sing a birthday song for him. I love my grandpa so much!
【答案】
One possible version:
Tomorrow is Sunday and it's my grandpa's birthday. I want to make a beautiful card for him. I practised painting skills every night. I finished it yesterday. I want to visit my grandpa tomorrow. I want to help him clean his room and sing a birthday song for him. I love my grandpa so much!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般过去时、一般现在时
【点评】
本题为基础英语书面表达题,贴近学生日常生活,提示信息明确,要求清晰,主要考察学生对时态的运用能力和信息整合能力,只要掌握基本英语表达和给定要点即可完成,适合初中阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.6
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