五、书面表达
在成长道路上，我们总会遇见许多给予我们温暖、指引与力量的人。他们或许是名人榜样，如科学家、运动员；或是身边至亲好友，像父母、同窗挚友。请以“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”为题，结合自身经历与要点提示，写一篇100词左右的短文。
要点提示:1. Who has influenced you the most?
2. What are his/her qualities?
3. How did he/she influence you?
4. What changes has he/she brought to you?
The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
在成长道路上，我们总会遇见许多给予我们温暖、指引与力量的人。他们或许是名人榜样，如科学家、运动员；或是身边至亲好友，像父母、同窗挚友。请以“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”为题，结合自身经历与要点提示，写一篇100词左右的短文。
要点提示:1. Who has influenced you the most?
2. What are his/her qualities?
3. How did he/she influence you?
4. What changes has he/she brought to you?
The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
答案：The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
Among all the people I have met, my mother is the person who has influenced me most.
She is kind, hard-working and always full of courage. No matter how tough life is, she never gives up easily. She is also patient enough to listen to my problems and always encourages me to move forward.
When I was under a lot of stress and even wanted to drop out of school because of bad grades, she cheered me up and told me that success never came easy. She spent plenty of time helping me with my lessons.
With her help, I became more confident and braver. I no longer fear difficulties and keep working hard all the time. I truly thank her for all she has done for me.
Among all the people I have met, my mother is the person who has influenced me most.
She is kind, hard-working and always full of courage. No matter how tough life is, she never gives up easily. She is also patient enough to listen to my problems and always encourages me to move forward.
When I was under a lot of stress and even wanted to drop out of school because of bad grades, she cheered me up and told me that success never came easy. She spent plenty of time helping me with my lessons.
With her help, I became more confident and braver. I no longer fear difficulties and keep working hard all the time. I truly thank her for all she has done for me.
解析：
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“影响自己最大的人”展开写作，需覆盖四个要点：点明人物、描述其品质、说明影响的具体经历、阐述带来的改变。解题思路为：选择身边熟悉的人物（如母亲）更易结合真实事例，结构采用“开篇点人物→中间讲品质+事例→结尾说改变”的逻辑，确保要点齐全，语言通顺，词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开篇直接点明影响最大的人是母亲；2. 描述母亲的品质（善良、勤奋、有勇气、耐心）；3. 结合自身经历（成绩差想辍学，母亲鼓励并花时间辅导）；4. 总结母亲带来的改变（更自信勇敢，不再畏惧困难），注意控制词数在100左右，语法正确，用词恰当。
【答案】
The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
Among all the people I have met, my mother is the person who has influenced me most.
She is kind, hard-working and always full of courage. No matter how tough life is, she never gives up easily. She is also patient enough to listen to my problems and always encourages me to move forward.
When I was under a lot of stress and even wanted to drop out of school because of bad grades, she cheered me up and told me that success never came easy. She spent plenty of time helping me with my lessons.
With her help, I became more confident and braver. I no longer fear difficulties and keep working hard all the time. I truly thank her for all she has done for me.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，人物记叙文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，要点完整，结合真实事例，情感真挚，语言通顺，符合初中英语写作的标准，是一篇优秀的短文。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“影响自己最大的人”展开写作，需覆盖四个要点：点明人物、描述其品质、说明影响的具体经历、阐述带来的改变。解题思路为：选择身边熟悉的人物（如母亲）更易结合真实事例，结构采用“开篇点人物→中间讲品质+事例→结尾说改变”的逻辑，确保要点齐全，语言通顺，词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开篇直接点明影响最大的人是母亲；2. 描述母亲的品质（善良、勤奋、有勇气、耐心）；3. 结合自身经历（成绩差想辍学，母亲鼓励并花时间辅导）；4. 总结母亲带来的改变（更自信勇敢，不再畏惧困难），注意控制词数在100左右，语法正确，用词恰当。
【答案】
The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
Among all the people I have met, my mother is the person who has influenced me most.
She is kind, hard-working and always full of courage. No matter how tough life is, she never gives up easily. She is also patient enough to listen to my problems and always encourages me to move forward.
When I was under a lot of stress and even wanted to drop out of school because of bad grades, she cheered me up and told me that success never came easy. She spent plenty of time helping me with my lessons.
With her help, I became more confident and braver. I no longer fear difficulties and keep working hard all the time. I truly thank her for all she has done for me.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，人物记叙文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，要点完整，结合真实事例，情感真挚，语言通顺，符合初中英语写作的标准，是一篇优秀的短文。
【难度系数】
0.3