五、书面表达
假如你是九年级(8)班的李华，学校广播站面向全校同学征集下周音乐栏目播放的音乐曲目。请根据要点提示，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，推荐一首你最喜爱的歌曲或音乐作品，并阐述推荐理由。文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
要点提示:1. What song or what piece of music would you like to recommend?
2. What type of song or music is it?
3. What are your reasons for recommending it?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua from Class Eight, Grade Nine. I’m writing to recommend
I sincerely hope you will include this work in next week’s programme. Thank you!
假如你是九年级(8)班的李华，学校广播站面向全校同学征集下周音乐栏目播放的音乐曲目。请根据要点提示，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，推荐一首你最喜爱的歌曲或音乐作品，并阐述推荐理由。文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
要点提示:1. What song or what piece of music would you like to recommend?
2. What type of song or music is it?
3. What are your reasons for recommending it?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua from Class Eight, Grade Nine. I’m writing to recommend
I sincerely hope you will include this work in next week’s programme. Thank you!
答案：Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua from Class Eight, Grade Nine. I'm writing to recommend the song "Jasmine Flower" to our school radio station.
"Jasmine Flower" is a traditional Chinese folk song and it enjoys great popularity around the whole world. Its soft sound always reminds me of beauty and peace.
I have several reasons for my choice. First, the song can calm our minds after long and busy study. Whenever we feel tired or stressed, it makes us feel peaceful and comfortable.
Second, this song allows us to know more about Chinese folk culture. It also helps us feel the unique style of traditional Chinese music. Third, this classic song is easy to understand and suitable for all teachers and students to enjoy in our spare time.
I sincerely hope you will include this work in next week's programme. Thank you!
I'm Li Hua from Class Eight, Grade Nine. I'm writing to recommend the song "Jasmine Flower" to our school radio station.
"Jasmine Flower" is a traditional Chinese folk song and it enjoys great popularity around the whole world. Its soft sound always reminds me of beauty and peace.
I have several reasons for my choice. First, the song can calm our minds after long and busy study. Whenever we feel tired or stressed, it makes us feel peaceful and comfortable.
Second, this song allows us to know more about Chinese folk culture. It also helps us feel the unique style of traditional Chinese music. Third, this classic song is easy to understand and suitable for all teachers and students to enjoy in our spare time.
I sincerely hope you will include this work in next week's programme. Thank you!
解析：
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以九年级8班李华的身份，向学校广播站推荐一首歌曲，需覆盖三个核心要点：推荐的歌曲名称、歌曲类型、推荐理由，且要衔接已给出的开头结尾，控制词数。解题思路：1. 选取经典且易阐述理由的歌曲（如《茉莉花》）；2. 明确歌曲类型为中国传统民歌；3. 从缓解学习压力、了解中国民间文化、适合师生欣赏三个角度阐述推荐理由；4. 确保语句通顺，符合九年级英语表达水平。
【解析】写作时先点明推荐的歌曲，再说明歌曲类型，最后分点阐述理由，结构清晰，紧扣所有要点，语言自然流畅，符合题目要求。具体内容如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua from Class Eight, Grade Nine. I'm writing to recommend the song "Jasmine Flower" to our school radio station.
"Jasmine Flower" is a traditional Chinese folk song and it enjoys great popularity around the whole world. Its soft sound always reminds me of beauty and peace.
I have several reasons for my choice. First, the song can calm our minds after long and busy study. Whenever we feel tired or stressed, it makes us feel peaceful and comfortable.
Second, this song allows us to know more about Chinese folk culture. It also helps us feel the unique style of traditional Chinese music. Third, this classic song is easy to understand and suitable for all teachers and students to enjoy in our spare time.
I sincerely hope you will include this work in next week's programme. Thank you!
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua from Class Eight, Grade Nine. I'm writing to recommend the song "Jasmine Flower" to our school radio station.
"Jasmine Flower" is a traditional Chinese folk song and it enjoys great popularity around the whole world. Its soft sound always reminds me of beauty and peace.
I have several reasons for my choice. First, the song can calm our minds after long and busy study. Whenever we feel tired or stressed, it makes us feel peaceful and comfortable.
Second, this song allows us to know more about Chinese folk culture. It also helps us feel the unique style of traditional Chinese music. Third, this classic song is easy to understand and suitable for all teachers and students to enjoy in our spare time.
I sincerely hope you will include this work in next week's programme. Thank you!
【知识点】英语应用文写作；英语推荐类作文；英语书面表达
【点评】本文紧扣题目所有要点，结构清晰，理由充分，语言流畅，符合九年级学生的写作要求，成功完成了推荐任务。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】写作时先点明推荐的歌曲，再说明歌曲类型，最后分点阐述理由，结构清晰，紧扣所有要点，语言自然流畅，符合题目要求。具体内容如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua from Class Eight, Grade Nine. I'm writing to recommend the song "Jasmine Flower" to our school radio station.
"Jasmine Flower" is a traditional Chinese folk song and it enjoys great popularity around the whole world. Its soft sound always reminds me of beauty and peace.
I have several reasons for my choice. First, the song can calm our minds after long and busy study. Whenever we feel tired or stressed, it makes us feel peaceful and comfortable.
Second, this song allows us to know more about Chinese folk culture. It also helps us feel the unique style of traditional Chinese music. Third, this classic song is easy to understand and suitable for all teachers and students to enjoy in our spare time.
I sincerely hope you will include this work in next week's programme. Thank you!
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua from Class Eight, Grade Nine. I'm writing to recommend the song "Jasmine Flower" to our school radio station.
"Jasmine Flower" is a traditional Chinese folk song and it enjoys great popularity around the whole world. Its soft sound always reminds me of beauty and peace.
I have several reasons for my choice. First, the song can calm our minds after long and busy study. Whenever we feel tired or stressed, it makes us feel peaceful and comfortable.
Second, this song allows us to know more about Chinese folk culture. It also helps us feel the unique style of traditional Chinese music. Third, this classic song is easy to understand and suitable for all teachers and students to enjoy in our spare time.
I sincerely hope you will include this work in next week's programme. Thank you!
【知识点】英语应用文写作；英语推荐类作文；英语书面表达
【点评】本文紧扣题目所有要点，结构清晰，理由充分，语言流畅，符合九年级学生的写作要求，成功完成了推荐任务。
【难度系数】0.7