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八、书面表达(30分)
假如你是李华,你的绘画作品在学校举办的文化节评选中获奖。美国笔友埃迪对你的作品很感兴趣,请你给他写一封100词左右的电子邮件,介绍你的作品风格、使用的工具、蕴含的元素(花卉/山水/动物/图形等)以及你想传达的美好理念。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Eddie,
I'm so glad that you're interested in my painting at the School Cultural Festival.







I take great pleasure in painting. I hope you can feel the beauty in my work.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案:My work is created in the traditional Chinese painting style. I used special painting brushes, ink and paper to finish it, which are classic tools for this art form. In the painting, there is a green tree and some lovely birds resting on its branches. In addition, I added running water beside the tree to make the whole picture lively.
These natural scenes carry special meanings. I hope to show the peaceful beauty of nature and tell people to value our natural environment. Living in peace with nature brings us joy, and that's the main idea I want to share through this painting.
解析:
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,要求以李华的身份给美国笔友埃迪写电子邮件,介绍获奖绘画作品,需涵盖作品风格、使用工具、蕴含元素及传达的美好理念,开头结尾已给出,字数约100词。解题思路:先明确核心内容模块,依次对应传统中国画风格、毛笔/墨/宣纸等工具、绿树/飞鸟/流水等自然元素、自然之美与爱护自然的理念,再用通顺的英语衔接各部分,符合邮件友好语气并控制字数。
【解析】My work is created in the traditional Chinese painting style. I used special painting brushes, ink and paper to finish it, which are classic tools for this art form. In the painting, there is a green tree and some lovely birds resting on its branches. In addition, I added running water beside the tree to make the whole picture lively. These natural scenes carry special meanings. I hope to show the peaceful beauty of nature and tell people to value our natural environment. Living in peace with nature brings us joy, and that's the main idea I want to share through this painting.
【答案】My work is created in the traditional Chinese painting style. I used special painting brushes, ink and paper to finish it, which are classic tools for this art form. In the painting, there is a green tree and some lovely birds resting on its branches. In addition, I added running water beside the tree to make the whole picture lively.
These natural scenes carry special meanings. I hope to show the peaceful beauty of nature and tell people to value our natural environment. Living in peace with nature brings us joy, and that's the main idea I want to share through this painting.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、传统文化表达、英语书面表达
【点评】本题为英语应用文写作题,贴近学生日常交际场景,明确要求涵盖多个写作要点,既考察英语语言运用能力,又引导学生关注传统文化与环保理念,符合课标写作要求。
【难度系数】0.5
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