任务六 书面表达
(一)写作任务
家是我们感受爱和幸福的地方。请你根据以下提示,以“My favourite room”为题写一篇短文,与大家分享一下你最喜欢的房间。
1. 你最喜欢的房间以及喜欢的原因;
2. 房间里物品的位置以及摆放的原因;
3. 在这个房间里的活动以及你的感受。
(二)写作语料
1. My favourite room is the study(书房).
2. I love my bedroom most.
3. I like staying in my bedroom because I can relax in it.
4. The living room is like a small garden with flowers and plants.
5. I usually put my schoolbag on the chair.
6. A large bookcase(书柜) is next to the sofa.
7. There is a chair in front of the desk.
8. I like reading on the sofa, so there is a small bookcase next to it.
9. My bed is below the big window so that I can enjoy more natural light.
10. My bedroom is not big but very comfortable.
(三)谋篇布局
Part 1:介绍最喜欢的房间以及喜欢的原因
I love my bedroom most because I feel relaxed there.
Part 2:谈论房间里物品的位置以及摆放的原因
I put my alarm clock beside my pillow so that it can wake me up on time in the morning.
Part 3:谈论自己在这个房间里的活动以及感受
I enjoy reading quietly in my bedroom. I feel relaxed and happy there.
(四)习作欣赏
My favourite room is my bedroom. It is not big but very tidy. I feel relaxed in it.
My bed is below the window. My alarm clock is beside my pillow. I put it there so that it can wake me up on time in the morning. To the right of the bed, there is a big desk. Some books and a computer are on it. I always do my homework there. Above the desk, there is a map of the world on the wall. It helps me with my study. To the left of the bed, there is a blue wardrobe(衣柜). I can get dressed quickly.
My bedroom is small but cozy(温暖舒适的). In this room, I can read, think and relax. How nice it is!
(五)我的习作
(一)写作任务
家是我们感受爱和幸福的地方。请你根据以下提示,以“My favourite room”为题写一篇短文,与大家分享一下你最喜欢的房间。
1. 你最喜欢的房间以及喜欢的原因;
2. 房间里物品的位置以及摆放的原因;
3. 在这个房间里的活动以及你的感受。
(二)写作语料
1. My favourite room is the study(书房).
2. I love my bedroom most.
3. I like staying in my bedroom because I can relax in it.
4. The living room is like a small garden with flowers and plants.
5. I usually put my schoolbag on the chair.
6. A large bookcase(书柜) is next to the sofa.
7. There is a chair in front of the desk.
8. I like reading on the sofa, so there is a small bookcase next to it.
9. My bed is below the big window so that I can enjoy more natural light.
10. My bedroom is not big but very comfortable.
(三)谋篇布局
Part 1:介绍最喜欢的房间以及喜欢的原因
I love my bedroom most because I feel relaxed there.
Part 2:谈论房间里物品的位置以及摆放的原因
I put my alarm clock beside my pillow so that it can wake me up on time in the morning.
Part 3:谈论自己在这个房间里的活动以及感受
I enjoy reading quietly in my bedroom. I feel relaxed and happy there.
(四)习作欣赏
My favourite room is my bedroom. It is not big but very tidy. I feel relaxed in it.
My bed is below the window. My alarm clock is beside my pillow. I put it there so that it can wake me up on time in the morning. To the right of the bed, there is a big desk. Some books and a computer are on it. I always do my homework there. Above the desk, there is a map of the world on the wall. It helps me with my study. To the left of the bed, there is a blue wardrobe(衣柜). I can get dressed quickly.
My bedroom is small but cozy(温暖舒适的). In this room, I can read, think and relax. How nice it is!
(五)我的习作
答案:My favourite room
My favourite room is my study. It is not big but very clean and quiet, I love it most because I can enjoy my own time freely here.
My desk is below the big window, so I can get enough natural light when I do my homework. There is a big bookcase next to the desk, I put all my textbooks and storybooks in it so that I can take any book I want easily. A soft sofa is on the right of the bookcase, and there is a small bookcase beside the sofa, I put my favourite storybooks there because I love reading on the sofa to relax myself.
In this study, I can not only finish my homework carefully, but also read all kinds of interesting books. I always feel happy and relaxed in this little warm room.
My favourite room is my study. It is not big but very clean and quiet, I love it most because I can enjoy my own time freely here.
My desk is below the big window, so I can get enough natural light when I do my homework. There is a big bookcase next to the desk, I put all my textbooks and storybooks in it so that I can take any book I want easily. A soft sofa is on the right of the bookcase, and there is a small bookcase beside the sofa, I put my favourite storybooks there because I love reading on the sofa to relax myself.
In this study, I can not only finish my homework carefully, but also read all kinds of interesting books. I always feel happy and relaxed in this little warm room.
解析:
本题为译林版七年级上册命题书面表达题,写作需覆盖全部三个提示要点:①明确指出自己最喜欢的房间,说明喜爱它的原因;②使用七年级已学的方位介词(如next to, below, in front of等)和there be句型介绍房间内物品的位置,同时说明摆放的理由;③描述自己在该房间的日常活动,抒发真实感受。写作时注意语句通顺,语法正确,词数符合七年级写作要求即可。