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(一)写作任务
学校将组织英语沙龙主题活动,本期主题是描述一次自然灾害。请你提前写一篇短文描述自己知道的一次自然灾害。
(二)写作语料
1. An earthquake / A flood / A snowstorm /... hit...
2. I was doing... when...
3. ... because of the heavy rain/snow.
4. ... kept falling.
5. Suddenly, ...
6. ... had to walk slowly / pull oneself through...
7. ... was really terrible.
(三)谋篇布局
Part 1:时间、地点、人物
1. When did it happen?
2. Where did it happen?
Part 2:起因、经过、结果
1. What caused it?
2. How did people deal with it?
Part 3:感想
What was the result of it?
(四)习作欣赏
Last night, a terrible flood hit our village after three days' heavy rain.
When the flood came, my parents and I were sleeping. After we woke up and ran out, we found water was everywhere. We had to get to a higher place to keep safe. The flood washed away many houses. As a result, lots of people lost their homes. Luckily, some policemen and volunteers came. They saved my family and many other villagers at last.
The flood was really terrible, but we can beat it if we pull together and give love to one another.
(五)我的习作






答案:A terrible snowstorm hit our city last winter.
I was doing my homework at home when the wind started to blow hard. The snow kept falling for hours, and everything outside became white soon. Because of the heavy snow, the roads were all covered with deep snow. Suddenly, the power went out. It was really cold inside the house. My mother and I had to pull ourselves through the long cold night with thick quilts. The next day, many volunteers came to clear the snow on the streets. People walked slowly in the snow to help each other.
The snowstorm was really terrible, but we all felt warm when people tried their best to help one another. Soon everything returned to normal.
解析:
本次写作要求描述一次自然灾害,按照给定的三段式结构完成即可:1. 开篇点明灾害发生的时间、地点,可选用提示语料"A snowstorm hit..."这类表达开篇;2. 主体部分使用"I was doing...when..."等提示句型,交代灾害发生的场景、人们的应对过程,自然融入给出的所有语料,讲清灾害的起因和经过;3. 结尾部分写出灾害造成的影响和自身感想,使用符合八年级学段的词汇,保证语句通顺、逻辑清晰即可。
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