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You needn't worry too much. 
It's true that everyone makes mistakes.
      Take me for an example. One day. I spent so much time playing football with my friends 
that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found 
it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.
      It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct and 
learn from them. In this way, others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.
      I hope my experience can help you out.
⑴ a
句意:最近,浙江省对年轻人的心理健康状况进行了一个调查。
固定搭配 do a survey 做个调查
故填冠词a

⑵ biggest
句意:研究发现,浙江初中生在青少年中感受到的学习压力最大。
分析可知,本空是在修饰名词pressure(压力),故本空填形容词。
根据among teenagers(在青少年当中)可知本处为最高级,故填biggest

⑶ worried/worrying
句意:学生们担心什么?
两种理解:
一、固定搭配 be worried about 担心……
二、表示学生正在担心,用现在进行时 be worrying
故填worried/worrying

⑷ First
句意:第一,考试后的班级排名。
根据后面的Second,可知本处表示“第一”,故填First

⑸ unable
句意:第二,无法达到父母的期望,”《青年时报》报道。
此处表示的是担心的事 。因此本空为“不能”,用在be动词后,填形容词unable

⑹ has done
句意:美国心理协会最近做了一项类似的调查。
根据recently, 可知本处为现在完成时(have/has done),主语为某个协会,是单数,因此填has done

⑺ is
句意:对他们来说,压力的一大原因也是学业。
主句one of...意为……之一,表示单数概念,因此谓语用单数,本处为一般现在时,因此动词用is

⑻ hours'
句意:每天保证9到10个小时的睡眠,找个人每天和你一起锻炼,吃得好。
根据句意,可知本处指“……小时的”,因此要用所有格。9 to 10,说明要用名词复数的所有格,故现将hour变为复数hours,再变为所有格hours'

⑼ to exercise
句意:每天保证9到10个小时的睡眠,找个人每天和你一起锻炼,吃得好。
本处为不定式作后置定语,修饰someone,  故填不定式to exercise

⑽ If/When
句意:如果你花太多时间在它们身上/当你花太久在它们身上,你会更容易感到悲伤。
根据句意可知,本处为条件状语从句或时间状语从句,表示“当……时”或“如果”,因此填If/When都可以。
Dear Neil,
       I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. It's true that everyone makes mistakes. You needn't worry too much.
       Take me for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.
       It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct them and learn from them. In this way, others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.
       I hope my experience can help you out.
                                                              Yours,
                                                         Wang Hua
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短语/词组/句式积累:
⑴ make mistakes 犯错
⑵ needn't do sth.  不需要做某事
⑶ take sb. for example 以……为例
⑷ so…that… 如此……以至于……
⑸ forget to do sth. 忘记做某事
⑹ achieve a balance between A and B 在A和B之间取得平衡
⑺ in this way 用这种方法
⑻ help sb. out 帮助某人走出困境
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文章一开头表达了对“每个人都会犯错”这个观点 的肯定,然后举出了自己曾经犯的错以及自己是如何改正的,接着写自己从错误中学到了什么,最后表达自己希望能够帮助到Neil。文章包含了所有的要点、内容完整、句意通顺,层次清晰、有逻辑。文章用了大量地道的短语和句型,为文章增色不少。