My hometown is a small town with a long history. Many changes have taken place here over the years. In the past, there was a blue sky with white clouds. The lakes were clean and beautiful. The buildings were low and old. People lived a poor life. And it was difficult for people to travel around.
Now the situation has changed a lot. People often take the underground and many even drive their own cars to work. However, there is more air and water pollution. People's life has improved but they are not as healthy as before.
In my opinion, we should pay more attention to protecting the environment. Action must be taken to prevent some factories from polluting the river. I hope we will live a better life in the future.
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短语/词组/句式积累:
① take place 发生
② in the past 在过去
③ live a poor life 过着贫穷的生活
④ take the underground 乘坐地铁
⑤ air and water pollution 空气污染和水污染
⑥ not as healthy as 没有……那么健康
⑦ in my opinion 在我看来
⑧ pay attention to… 关注……
⑨ prevent …from… 阻止……
⑩ in the future 在将来
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文章按照写作要求,分别写了常州的过去、现在和自己的看法。按照一定的逻辑关系将要点串联起来。文章包含了所有的要点、内容完整、句意通顺,层次清晰。