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It's sunny and warm in spring. There are a lot of people in the

park. Look! Helen is having a picnic with her parents under a big tree.

Tim and Miss Li are flying a kite on the grass. Mike, Wang Bing and

Liu Tao are playing football. Su Hai and Nancy are riding bikes by

the lake. How happy they are!

It's sunny and warm in spring. There are a lot of people in the park. Look! Helen is having a picnic with her parents under a big tree. Tim and Miss Li are flying a kite on the grass. Mike, Wang Bing and Liu Tao are playing football. Su Hai and Nancy are riding bikes by the lake. How happy they are!

文章主题：

本文要求写公园里人们的快乐时光，属于记叙文。

文章时态：

题目要求用现在进行时。

文章结构：

可先描述下天气和公园里的环境，再描写人们正在做的事情。

文章重点：

重点描写人们在公园里的活动，注意动词短语的使用和书写正确。

文章成文：

文章结构清晰后，需要注意正确表达要点，注意连接词的使用，适当使用一些亮点词汇短语和高分句型。

连接词：Besides；Also；What's more等。

文章检查：

完成全文后，注意检查单词拼写和语法问题，保证逻辑清晰，语句准确流畅。