Changzhou is a city with a long history(有着悠久历史). It has many beautiful parks. It is not far from(离...很远) Shanghai. It takes only about an hour by train. Every year, lots of visitors come to visit this nice city and have a great time(玩得开心) here. You can enjoy all kinds of(各种各样的) delicious Chinese and Western food in the restaurants here. If you come to visit Changzhou, I'll show you around(四处参观) it.
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1.Changzhou is a city with a long history.
常州是一座历史悠久的城市。
(with“有着、伴有”,with a long history在句中作伴随状语)
2. If you come to visit Changzhou, I'll show you around it.如果你来常州,我会带你到处看看。
(if引导的条件状语从句,主语用一般将来时,从句用一般现在时表示将来。show sb. around “带某人四处参观”)