Dear Suzy,
Glad to hear from❶ you. I'm so happy that you will come to China and visit Hangzhou. Here is my advice.
When you arrive in❷ Hangzhou by plane❸, you can choose to live in a hotel by the West Lake so that it's easy for you to enjoy the beauty of the West Lake❹ on the first day. You can visit some places of interest❺ and take some photos❻. On the second day, you can listen to Yue opera. It's a good way to enjoy Chinese culture❼. On the third day, I advise you to taste the delicious local food❽. You can also buy some silk as a present for your relatives and friends❾.
Hope you can have a good time❿ in Hangzhou. Yours sincerely,
Mary
句型/短语积累:
① hear from 收到某人的来信
② arrive in 到达 (某个大的地方)
③ by plane 乘飞机
④ enjoy the beauty of the West Lake 欣赏西湖的美景
⑤ places of interest 名胜古迹
⑥ take photos 拍照
⑦ enjoy Chinese Culture 欣赏中国文化
⑧ advise sb. to do sth. 建议某人做某事
⑨ buy sth. for sb. 给某人买某物
⑩ have a good time 玩得开心,过得愉快
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