Dear Suzy,
Glad to hear from you. I'm so happy that you will come to China and visit Hangzhou. Here is my advice.
When you arrive in Hangzhou by plane, you can choose to live in a hotel by the West Lake so that it's easy for you to enjoy the beauty of the West Lake on the first day. You can visit some places of interest and take some photos. On the second day, you can listen to Yue opera. It's a good way to enjoy Chinese culture. On the third day, I advise you to taste the delicious local food. You can also buy some silk as a present for your relatives and friends.
Hope you can have a good time in Hangzhou. Yours sincerely,
Mary
句型/短语积累:
① hear from 收到某人的来信
② arrive in 到达 (某个大的地方)
③ by plane 乘飞机
④ enjoy the beauty of the West Lake 欣赏西湖的美景
⑤ places of interest 名胜古迹
⑥ take photos 拍照
⑦ enjoy Chinese Culture 欣赏中国文化
⑧ advise sb. to do sth. 建议某人做某事
⑨ buy sth. for sb. 给某人买某物
⑩ have a good time 玩得开心,过得愉快
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