We started at 9:00a.m.(点明出发时间) It was sunny and we could see the blue sky and white clouds.(点明天气状况)We also saw lots of beautiful flowers along the way. We played in the water and sang loudly with the birds. After three hours, we got to the top. The city looked really wonderful from the top and we took quite a few photos.(表达灵活,描述要点三的过程中自然地提及要点四;描述了要点三的全部活动内容,表达流畅、有条理;有适当的细节发挥)We all felt very tired, but it was really a relaxing and interesting trip.(描述活动感受)