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A Fantastic City
Xiamen, a beautiful coastal city in Fujian Province, to all young 
explorers around the world.
         As a famous tourist city with both natural beauty and modern charm, Xiamen offers colorful 
activities for visitors. You can walk along the clean Gulangyu Island, a car-free place with 
European-style buildings, and enjoy the sound of piano music everywhere. You can also cycle on the seaside road of Huandao and watch the sunrise over the East China Sea.
What makes Xiamen special is its unique culture and delicious food. The local people are warm and friendly, and you must try the tasty seafood and peanut soup. Xiamen is truly a perfect place to relax and experience the beauty of southern China. I believe you will fall in love with it!
【解析】
这篇征文需紧扣“Amazing China”主题,推荐一处非教材出现的中国旅游胜地,要涵盖图示的Place(地点)、Type(类型)、Activities(活动)、Special things(特色事物)等要点。首先确定推荐地点为福建厦门,点明其滨海旅游城市的类型;接着列举漫步鼓浪屿、环岛路骑行看日出等特色活动;最后介绍厦门独特的人文氛围和美食等特色内容,组织语言时注意句式多样,语言流畅,满足词数要求。
【答案】
A Fantastic City
Xiamen, a beautiful coastal city in Fujian Province, to all young explorers around the world.
As a famous tourist city with both natural beauty and modern charm, Xiamen offers colorful activities for visitors. You can walk along the clean Gulangyu Island, a car-free place with European-style buildings, and enjoy the sound of piano music everywhere. You can also cycle on the seaside road of Huandao and watch the sunrise over the East China Sea.
What makes Xiamen special is its unique culture and delicious food. The local people are warm and friendly, and you must try the tasty seafood and peanut soup. Xiamen is truly a perfect place to relax and experience the beauty of southern China. I believe you will fall in love with it!
【知识点】
英语书面表达,游记类写作,要点整合写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“Amazing China”主题,完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点,地点明确,活动介绍具体,特色事物描写生动,语言表达流畅自然,句式丰富,符合征文的语言风格和内容要求,能很好地向世界展现中国城市的魅力。
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