【分析】
这是一篇校园安全主题的英语演讲稿写作题,解题思路如下:
1. 明确文体:演讲稿需语气正式、有号召力,贴合师生听众的身份。
2. 紧扣给定要点:
第一步,围绕“What we shouldn’t do at school”,列举违反校园安全的行为,比如携带刀具、打闹等,同时点明要遵守校规。
第二步,针对“What we should do when feeling stressed”,给出具体的放松方式,比如听音乐、做运动。
第三步,补充“What else we should pay attention to”,比如遇到困难求助老师、张贴安全宣传海报等内容。
3. 注意字数要求,不少于90词,结尾要礼貌致谢,完成演讲稿的完整结构。
【解析】
1. 承接开头:先用“We should follow the school rules to protect ourselves.”点明遵守校规的重要性,引出校园禁止行为。
2. 展开禁止行为:列举“Carrying something dangerous, like knives, is not allowed in school. After class, we shouldn't run after or fight with each other.”,清晰说明校园里不能做的事。
3. 应对压力部分:用“Sometimes we may feel stressed.”过渡,给出“Listening to music and doing some sports will make it easier for us to relax.”的具体方法。
4. 补充其他注意事项:提出“When we are in trouble, we can always ask our teachers for help. Moreover, posters can be put up to help students know more about how to keep safe at school.”,完善安全相关的其他要点。
5. 结尾:用“That's all for my speech. Thanks a lot.”礼貌收尾,符合演讲稿的规范。
【答案】
Hello, teachers and schoolmates. It's my honour to be here and talk about how to keep
safe at school.
We should follow the school rules to protect ourselves. Carrying something dangerous, like
knives, is not allowed in school. After class, we shouldn't run after or fight with each other.
Sometimes we may feel stressed. Listening to music and doing some sports will make
it easier for us to relax.
When we are in trouble, we can always ask our teachers for help. Moreover, posters
can be put up to help students know more about how to keep safe at school.
That's all for my speech. Thanks a lot.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、校园安全话题表达、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“校园安全”主题,结构清晰,完整覆盖了题目给出的三个要点,语言表达通顺自然,符合演讲稿的正式语气,能够有效向师生传递校园安全及心理健康的相关理念,字数达标,是一篇规范的英语演讲稿。
【难度系数】
0.7