“一只小鸟渴了,要喝瓶子里的水。瓶颈太长了,小鸟喝不到水。于是……”根据提示,展开你想象的翅膀,编写一个小故事。
要求:用一般过去时讲述;书写规范,不少于 50 个单词。
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要求:用一般过去时讲述;书写规范,不少于 50 个单词。
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Long long ago,there was a bird. He was very thirsty. He wanted to drink some water. He found a bottle,but there wasn't much water in it. He couldn't drink the water. He thought hard,but he still had no idea. Suddenly,he saw a boy. The boy was drinking the milk with a straw. The bird went to look for a straw. Then he put the straw in the bottle. And he could drink the water now. He was clever.
答案:主题写作提优
Long long ago,there was a bird. He was very thirsty. He wanted to drink some water.
He found a bottle,but there wasn't much water in it. He couldn't drink the water. He thought hard,but he still had no idea. Suddenly(突然),he saw a boy. The boy was drinking the milk with a straw. The bird went to look for a straw. Then he put the straw in the bottle. And he could drink the water now. He is clever.(仅供参考)
写作指导
写故事
主体:按照文字提示叙述故事,注意动词的时态。可以适当加入表达心理活动的句子。
注意点:在描写故事的时候,可以用一般现在时也可以用一般过去时。
Long long ago,there was a bird. He was very thirsty. He wanted to drink some water.
He found a bottle,but there wasn't much water in it. He couldn't drink the water. He thought hard,but he still had no idea. Suddenly(突然),he saw a boy. The boy was drinking the milk with a straw. The bird went to look for a straw. Then he put the straw in the bottle. And he could drink the water now. He is clever.(仅供参考)
写作指导
写故事
主体:按照文字提示叙述故事,注意动词的时态。可以适当加入表达心理活动的句子。
注意点:在描写故事的时候,可以用一般现在时也可以用一般过去时。