My Wonderful School Life
I'm Mike, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.______
I'm Mike, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.______
My school is big and beautiful with many tall buildings and green trees. There are twenty-four classes in our school and each class has about forty students. The students here are very helpful and all the teachers are kind to us. They try their best to make their lessons interesting. Among all my subjects,I like Geography best because I love travelling and I'd like to learn more about different places and cultures. After school,we do lots of after-school activities. I'm a member of the Reading Club,and I go there twice a week. I also play sports in the playground. It's great fun to play ball games with friends. At weekends,I often go swimming with my best friend Amy. My school life is really wonderful,and I always have a great time here.
答案:One possible version:
My Wonderful School Life
I'm Mike,a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.
My school is big and beautiful with many tall buildings and green trees. There are twenty-four classes in our school and each class has about forty students. The students here are very helpful and all the teachers are kind to us. They try their best to make their lessons interesting. Among all my subjects,I like Geography best because I love travelling and I'd like to learn more about different places and cultures.
After school,we do lots of after-school activities. I'm a member of the Reading Club,and I go there twice a week. I also play sports in the playground. It's great fun to play ball games with friends. At weekends,I often go swimming with my best friend Amy.
My school life is really wonderful,and I always have a great time here.
思路引导 [总体分析]①体裁:本文主要内容是介绍自己的校园生活,应是一篇记叙文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,写作时根据提示信息讲述你的校园生活,可适当增加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己,引出话题;
第二步,根据提示信息讲述你的校园生活;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点短语]
①try one's best to do sth 尽最大努力做某事 ②learn about 了解 ③lots of 许多 ④go swimming 去游泳 ⑤have a great time 玩得愉快
[高分句型]
①There are twenty-four classes in our school and each class has about forty students.(There be 句型)
②Among all my subjects,I like Geography best because I love travelling and I'd like to learn more about different places and cultures.(because 引导原因状语从句)
My Wonderful School Life
I'm Mike,a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.
My school is big and beautiful with many tall buildings and green trees. There are twenty-four classes in our school and each class has about forty students. The students here are very helpful and all the teachers are kind to us. They try their best to make their lessons interesting. Among all my subjects,I like Geography best because I love travelling and I'd like to learn more about different places and cultures.
After school,we do lots of after-school activities. I'm a member of the Reading Club,and I go there twice a week. I also play sports in the playground. It's great fun to play ball games with friends. At weekends,I often go swimming with my best friend Amy.
My school life is really wonderful,and I always have a great time here.
思路引导 [总体分析]①体裁:本文主要内容是介绍自己的校园生活,应是一篇记叙文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,写作时根据提示信息讲述你的校园生活,可适当增加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己,引出话题;
第二步,根据提示信息讲述你的校园生活;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点短语]
①try one's best to do sth 尽最大努力做某事 ②learn about 了解 ③lots of 许多 ④go swimming 去游泳 ⑤have a great time 玩得愉快
[高分句型]
①There are twenty-four classes in our school and each class has about forty students.(There be 句型)
②Among all my subjects,I like Geography best because I love travelling and I'd like to learn more about different places and cultures.(because 引导原因状语从句)