[经典例题]
“读万卷书，行万里路。”暑假将至，成都某中学计划组织学生来大美凉山开展研学之旅。假如你是李华，请根据以下内容提示，以“Welcome to Liangshan”为主题，写一篇英语短文，向即将到来的成都同学介绍一下你的家乡凉山。
要求：1. 文章应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3. 词数80左右，已给出部分（画直线部分）不计入总词数。
“读万卷书，行万里路。”暑假将至，成都某中学计划组织学生来大美凉山开展研学之旅。假如你是李华，请根据以下内容提示，以“Welcome to Liangshan”为主题，写一篇英语短文，向即将到来的成都同学介绍一下你的家乡凉山。
要求：1. 文章应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3. 词数80左右，已给出部分（画直线部分）不计入总词数。
答案：[高分范文]
Welcome to Liangshan, a place that you will never want to leave once you come. Let me tell you something about it.
It is in the southwest of China. The weather here is warm. You can wear T-shirts or skirts. People are friendly and kind. There are many places of interest, such as Lushan Mountain and Lugu Lake. You can taste a lot of delicious local food like tuotuo meat and barbecue.
One of the most popular festivals is the Torch Festival. You can roast a whole lamb. Also, you can sing and dance happily around the torch.
I hope it will be an unforgettable experience. I hope all of you can enjoy yourselves in Liangshan.
[名师点评]
作者根据思维导图描述了自己的家乡，让人们对自己的家乡有一个全面的了解。
① 开篇点题介绍自己的家乡；
② 使用了 such as、also 等词，使文章层次分明，内容连贯；
③ 使用“one of the + 最高级 + 可数名词复数”结构说明了火把节的受欢迎程度；
④ 宾语从句的使用彰显作者扎实的作文功底。
Welcome to Liangshan, a place that you will never want to leave once you come. Let me tell you something about it.
It is in the southwest of China. The weather here is warm. You can wear T-shirts or skirts. People are friendly and kind. There are many places of interest, such as Lushan Mountain and Lugu Lake. You can taste a lot of delicious local food like tuotuo meat and barbecue.
One of the most popular festivals is the Torch Festival. You can roast a whole lamb. Also, you can sing and dance happily around the torch.
I hope it will be an unforgettable experience. I hope all of you can enjoy yourselves in Liangshan.
[名师点评]
作者根据思维导图描述了自己的家乡，让人们对自己的家乡有一个全面的了解。
① 开篇点题介绍自己的家乡；
② 使用了 such as、also 等词，使文章层次分明，内容连贯；
③ 使用“one of the + 最高级 + 可数名词复数”结构说明了火把节的受欢迎程度；
④ 宾语从句的使用彰显作者扎实的作文功底。
[小试身手]
(2025·苏州市吴中区期中) 随着网络和人工智能的不断进步，如今旅游有了两种热门选择：“云游 Online tours”和“亲历 In-person travel”。“云游”借助网络，让我们足不出户就能饱览世界各地的美景；而“亲历”则是亲身前往心仪之地，感受当地的风土人情。这两种方式各有魅力，你更倾向于哪一种呢？请以“My way of travelling”为题，写一篇英语短文。
写作要点：1. 陈述你的选择并说明原因（至少两点）；2. 分享一次令你印象深刻的相关旅行；3. 谈谈你的感悟。
注意事项：1. 词数100左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；2. 短文须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥；3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
[思路点拨]
本文描述旅行方式，从自身选择、相关原因、旅行举例和感悟等方面进行阐述。时态为一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
My way of travelling
Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose
(2025·苏州市吴中区期中) 随着网络和人工智能的不断进步，如今旅游有了两种热门选择：“云游 Online tours”和“亲历 In-person travel”。“云游”借助网络，让我们足不出户就能饱览世界各地的美景；而“亲历”则是亲身前往心仪之地，感受当地的风土人情。这两种方式各有魅力，你更倾向于哪一种呢？请以“My way of travelling”为题，写一篇英语短文。
写作要点：1. 陈述你的选择并说明原因（至少两点）；2. 分享一次令你印象深刻的相关旅行；3. 谈谈你的感悟。
注意事项：1. 词数100左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；2. 短文须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥；3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
[思路点拨]
本文描述旅行方式，从自身选择、相关原因、旅行举例和感悟等方面进行阐述。时态为一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
My way of travelling
Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose
"in-person travel" because it allows me to experience cultures deeply and create unforgettable memories.
答案：One possible version:
My way of travelling
Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose "in-person travel" because it allows me to experience cultures deeply and create unforgettable memories.
Travelling in person lets me feel the local atmosphere. For example, last summer I visited Beijing. Walking through the ancient hutongs, tasting street food, and talking with the locals made me understand Chinese traditions better. What's more, it's a chance to escape daily routines. Climbing the Great Wall taught me perseverance and rewarded me with breathtaking views.
Although "online tours" are convenient, nothing compares to the real adventure. Travelling is not just about seeing; it's about living in the moment.
My way of travelling
Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose "in-person travel" because it allows me to experience cultures deeply and create unforgettable memories.
Travelling in person lets me feel the local atmosphere. For example, last summer I visited Beijing. Walking through the ancient hutongs, tasting street food, and talking with the locals made me understand Chinese traditions better. What's more, it's a chance to escape daily routines. Climbing the Great Wall taught me perseverance and rewarded me with breathtaking views.
Although "online tours" are convenient, nothing compares to the real adventure. Travelling is not just about seeing; it's about living in the moment.