图图经常帮助父母做家务,爸爸奖励给图图一个新相机。图图用自己做家务得到的奖励拍摄了公园的景色。请根据以下提示,用现在进行时描述一下公园里的人们正在做的事情。要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,可适当发挥;2. 不少于5句话。
提示:今天是一个晴朗多风的日子。公园里有许多人。海伦和她的父母正在树下野餐。蒂姆和李老师正在草地(grass)上放风筝。迈克、王兵和刘涛在踢足球。苏海和南希在骑自行车。他们是多么开心啊!

In the park
提示:今天是一个晴朗多风的日子。公园里有许多人。海伦和她的父母正在树下野餐。蒂姆和李老师正在草地(grass)上放风筝。迈克、王兵和刘涛在踢足球。苏海和南希在骑自行车。他们是多么开心啊!
In the park
It's a sunny and windy day. There are a lot of people in the park. Look! Helen is having a picnic with her parents under a big tree. She and her mother are putting food on the picnic cloth. Her father is carrying things to them.
Tim is flying a kite happily on the grass with Miss Li.
The three boys, Mike, Wang Bing and Liu Tao, are playing football nearby.
What about Su Hai and Nancy? Oh, they are riding bikes around the park.
How happy they are!
答案:主题写作提优
示例:
In the park
It's a sunny and windy day. There are a lot of people in the park. Look! Helen is having a picnic with her parents under a big tree. She and her mother are putting food on the picnic cloth. Her father is carrying things to them. Tim is flying a kite happily on the grass with Miss Li. The three boys, Mike, Wang Bing and Liu Tao, are playing football nearby. What about Su Hai and Nancy? Oh, they are riding bikes around the park. How happy they are!
示例:
In the park
It's a sunny and windy day. There are a lot of people in the park. Look! Helen is having a picnic with her parents under a big tree. She and her mother are putting food on the picnic cloth. Her father is carrying things to them. Tim is flying a kite happily on the grass with Miss Li. The three boys, Mike, Wang Bing and Liu Tao, are playing football nearby. What about Su Hai and Nancy? Oh, they are riding bikes around the park. How happy they are!
解析:
【分析】
首先,我们需要紧扣题目要求,用现在进行时完成公园场景的描述。第一步先点明天气与公园整体状况,引出写作主题;第二步按照提示的人物分组,依次用“be动词+动词现在分词”的现在进行时结构,描述每个群体的活动,还可适当添加细节让内容更饱满;最后用感叹句收尾,凸显人们的愉悦心情。要保证语句通顺连贯,满足不少于5句话的要求,同时严格遵循现在进行时的语法规则。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入:先交代天气情况,说明公园里的人员状态,构建整体场景。
It's a sunny and windy day. There are a lot of people in the park.
2. 描述海伦一家的活动:结合提示,用现在进行时展现野餐的细节,补充相关动作让场景更生动。
Look! Helen is having a picnic with her parents under a big tree. She and her mother are putting delicious food on the picnic cloth, and her father is carrying a basket to them.
3. 描述蒂姆和李老师的活动:体现放风筝的欢快状态,增添细节丰富画面。
Tim is flying a kite happily on the grass with Miss Li. The kite is flying high in the sky.
4. 描述男孩们的足球活动:展现他们运动时的投入状态。
Mike, Wang Bing and Liu Tao are playing football nearby. They are running fast and shouting excitedly.
5. 描述女孩们的骑车活动:补充她们的愉悦状态。
Su Hai and Nancy are riding bikes around the park. They are enjoying the beautiful views in the park.
6. 收尾感叹:用感叹句总结,强化整体的欢快氛围。
How happy they are!
将以上内容连贯整合,即可形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】
In the park
It's a sunny and windy day. There are a lot of people in the park. Look! Helen is having a picnic with her parents under a big tree. She and her mother are putting food on the picnic cloth. Her father is carrying things to them. Tim is flying a kite happily on the grass with Miss Li. The three boys, Mike, Wang Bing and Liu Tao, are playing football nearby. What about Su Hai and Nancy? Oh, they are riding bikes around the park. How happy they are!
【知识点】
现在进行时运用,情景英语写作,语句连贯表达
【点评】
这道题聚焦现在进行时在情景写作中的实际运用,要求学生结合提示与图片,准确用现在进行时描述不同人物的活动,既锻炼了学生对时态的掌握能力,也提升了其语言组织与内容拓展的写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先,我们需要紧扣题目要求,用现在进行时完成公园场景的描述。第一步先点明天气与公园整体状况,引出写作主题;第二步按照提示的人物分组,依次用“be动词+动词现在分词”的现在进行时结构,描述每个群体的活动,还可适当添加细节让内容更饱满;最后用感叹句收尾,凸显人们的愉悦心情。要保证语句通顺连贯,满足不少于5句话的要求,同时严格遵循现在进行时的语法规则。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入:先交代天气情况,说明公园里的人员状态,构建整体场景。
It's a sunny and windy day. There are a lot of people in the park.
2. 描述海伦一家的活动:结合提示,用现在进行时展现野餐的细节,补充相关动作让场景更生动。
Look! Helen is having a picnic with her parents under a big tree. She and her mother are putting delicious food on the picnic cloth, and her father is carrying a basket to them.
3. 描述蒂姆和李老师的活动:体现放风筝的欢快状态,增添细节丰富画面。
Tim is flying a kite happily on the grass with Miss Li. The kite is flying high in the sky.
4. 描述男孩们的足球活动:展现他们运动时的投入状态。
Mike, Wang Bing and Liu Tao are playing football nearby. They are running fast and shouting excitedly.
5. 描述女孩们的骑车活动:补充她们的愉悦状态。
Su Hai and Nancy are riding bikes around the park. They are enjoying the beautiful views in the park.
6. 收尾感叹:用感叹句总结,强化整体的欢快氛围。
How happy they are!
将以上内容连贯整合,即可形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】
In the park
It's a sunny and windy day. There are a lot of people in the park. Look! Helen is having a picnic with her parents under a big tree. She and her mother are putting food on the picnic cloth. Her father is carrying things to them. Tim is flying a kite happily on the grass with Miss Li. The three boys, Mike, Wang Bing and Liu Tao, are playing football nearby. What about Su Hai and Nancy? Oh, they are riding bikes around the park. How happy they are!
【知识点】
现在进行时运用,情景英语写作,语句连贯表达
【点评】
这道题聚焦现在进行时在情景写作中的实际运用,要求学生结合提示与图片,准确用现在进行时描述不同人物的活动,既锻炼了学生对时态的掌握能力,也提升了其语言组织与内容拓展的写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.7