做完作业后,亮亮也加入准备晚餐的队伍中。根据所给思维导图提示,写一篇英语短文描述一下亮亮及其家人正在厨房里做的事情。不少于 5 句话。

主题写作提优
示例:
It's seven o'clock in the evening. Liangliang finishes his homework. His family are busy in the kitchen.
Liangliang has eaten a fruit salad, but he's still hungry. He wants to eat a sandwich, but there are no sandwiches in the fridge. There's only some milk, raw (生的) meat and many
fresh vegetables in it. Grandma says, "We are cooking dinner now. Dinner is almost ready. Wait a moment (等一会儿)." She is washing some vegetables with Grandpa. Liangliang's mother is washing the pots and pans. His father is a great cook. He is cooking beef with
potatoes. He is also cooking some tomato soup. Liangliang is helping him too. He's watching if the rice is OK.
It's half past seven now. Dinner is ready! All the food smells nice. Liangliang can't wait!
示例:
It's seven o'clock in the evening. Liangliang finishes his homework. His family are busy in the kitchen.
Liangliang has eaten a fruit salad, but he's still hungry. He wants to eat a sandwich, but there are no sandwiches in the fridge. There's only some milk, raw (生的) meat and many
fresh vegetables in it. Grandma says, "We are cooking dinner now. Dinner is almost ready. Wait a moment (等一会儿)." She is washing some vegetables with Grandpa. Liangliang's mother is washing the pots and pans. His father is a great cook. He is cooking beef with
potatoes. He is also cooking some tomato soup. Liangliang is helping him too. He's watching if the rice is OK.
It's half past seven now. Dinner is ready! All the food smells nice. Liangliang can't wait!
答案:主题写作提优
示例:
It's seven o'clock in the evening. Liangliang finishes his homework. His family are busy in the kitchen.
Liangliang has eaten a fruit salad, but he's still hungry. He wants to eat a sandwich, but there are no sandwiches in the fridge. There's only some milk, raw (生的) meat and many
fresh vegetables in it. Grandma says, "We are cooking dinner now. Dinner is almost ready. Wait a moment (等一会儿)." She is washing some vegetables with Grandpa. Liangliang's mother is washing the pots and pans. His father is a great cook. He is cooking beef with
potatoes. He is also cooking some tomato soup. Liangliang is helping him too. He's watching if the rice is OK.
It's half past seven now. Dinner is ready! All the food smells nice. Liangliang can't wait!
示例:
It's seven o'clock in the evening. Liangliang finishes his homework. His family are busy in the kitchen.
Liangliang has eaten a fruit salad, but he's still hungry. He wants to eat a sandwich, but there are no sandwiches in the fridge. There's only some milk, raw (生的) meat and many
fresh vegetables in it. Grandma says, "We are cooking dinner now. Dinner is almost ready. Wait a moment (等一会儿)." She is washing some vegetables with Grandpa. Liangliang's mother is washing the pots and pans. His father is a great cook. He is cooking beef with
potatoes. He is also cooking some tomato soup. Liangliang is helping him too. He's watching if the rice is OK.
It's half past seven now. Dinner is ready! All the food smells nice. Liangliang can't wait!
解析:
【分析】
本题是英语情景写作题,需结合思维导图提示完成短文创作,解题思路如下:
1. 提取核心信息:从思维导图中明确时间(晚上)、家庭成员的活动、个人感受三大板块内容;
2. 确定时态:描述正在进行的动作,需使用现在进行时(be+动词现在分词形式);
3. 构建文章结构:开篇点明时间与整体场景,接着分别介绍祖父母、父母、亮亮的具体活动,最后补充感受部分,可适当添加合理细节(如亮亮完成作业、食物即将做好等)让文章更连贯生动,同时满足不少于5句话的要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入:先点明时间,交代亮亮做完作业后加入准备晚餐的场景,自然引出家庭厨房的忙碌画面;
2. 分角色描述活动:按照祖父母、父母、亮亮的顺序,将思维导图中的活动内容转化为符合现在进行时的完整句子,准确还原每个家庭成员的动作;
3. 补充细节与感受:结合思维导图的感受部分,可适当补充过渡细节(如时间推进、小插曲等),最后点明食物香气与亮亮的期待,让文章结构完整、逻辑连贯。
【答案】
It's seven o'clock in the evening. Liangliang finishes his homework. His family are busy in the kitchen.
Liangliang has eaten a fruit salad, but he's still hungry. He wants to eat a sandwich, but there are no sandwiches in the fridge. There's only some milk, raw (生的) meat and many fresh vegetables in it. Grandma says, "We are cooking dinner now. Dinner is almost ready. Wait a moment (等一会儿)." She is washing some vegetables with Grandpa. Liangliang's mother is washing the pots and pans. His father is a great cook. He is cooking beef with potatoes. He is also cooking some tomato soup. Liangliang is helping him too. He's watching if the rice is OK.
It's half past seven now. Dinner is ready! All the food smells nice. Liangliang can't wait!
【知识点】
1. 现在进行时的用法
2. 英语情景写作
3. 家庭成员相关词汇
【点评】
本题贴近家庭生活场景,既考查学生对现在进行时的实际运用能力,也考查学生的信息整合与语言组织能力。学生需准确提取思维导图的关键信息,还可通过补充合理细节丰富文章内容,提升短文的连贯性与生动性。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题是英语情景写作题,需结合思维导图提示完成短文创作,解题思路如下:
1. 提取核心信息:从思维导图中明确时间(晚上)、家庭成员的活动、个人感受三大板块内容;
2. 确定时态:描述正在进行的动作,需使用现在进行时(be+动词现在分词形式);
3. 构建文章结构:开篇点明时间与整体场景,接着分别介绍祖父母、父母、亮亮的具体活动,最后补充感受部分,可适当添加合理细节(如亮亮完成作业、食物即将做好等)让文章更连贯生动,同时满足不少于5句话的要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入:先点明时间,交代亮亮做完作业后加入准备晚餐的场景,自然引出家庭厨房的忙碌画面;
2. 分角色描述活动:按照祖父母、父母、亮亮的顺序,将思维导图中的活动内容转化为符合现在进行时的完整句子,准确还原每个家庭成员的动作;
3. 补充细节与感受:结合思维导图的感受部分,可适当补充过渡细节(如时间推进、小插曲等),最后点明食物香气与亮亮的期待,让文章结构完整、逻辑连贯。
【答案】
It's seven o'clock in the evening. Liangliang finishes his homework. His family are busy in the kitchen.
Liangliang has eaten a fruit salad, but he's still hungry. He wants to eat a sandwich, but there are no sandwiches in the fridge. There's only some milk, raw (生的) meat and many fresh vegetables in it. Grandma says, "We are cooking dinner now. Dinner is almost ready. Wait a moment (等一会儿)." She is washing some vegetables with Grandpa. Liangliang's mother is washing the pots and pans. His father is a great cook. He is cooking beef with potatoes. He is also cooking some tomato soup. Liangliang is helping him too. He's watching if the rice is OK.
It's half past seven now. Dinner is ready! All the food smells nice. Liangliang can't wait!
【知识点】
1. 现在进行时的用法
2. 英语情景写作
3. 家庭成员相关词汇
【点评】
本题贴近家庭生活场景,既考查学生对现在进行时的实际运用能力,也考查学生的信息整合与语言组织能力。学生需准确提取思维导图的关键信息,还可通过补充合理细节丰富文章内容,提升短文的连贯性与生动性。
【难度系数】
0.7