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十四、书面表达。(10 分)
Alan 感觉冷而且头疼。他请假去看医生,同学 Amy 告诉了他去医院的路线。在医院,医生检查过后告诉 Alan,他只是感冒,暂时不需要吃药。请你发挥想象,根据提示编写一段对话。

要求:1. 条理清晰、意思连贯,包含提示中的所有要点;2. 语句通顺、无语错误;3. 不少于 40 词,已给内容不计入总词数。
(At school...)
Alan:Amy, can you tell me
the way to the hospital/how to get to the hospital
?
Amy:Well,
after coming out from our school, go along the street. Then turn left at the third crossing, and you can find the hospital on your left.

(In the hospital...)
Doctor:
What's wrong/the matter with you?

Alan:
I feel cold and have a headache.

Doctor:
Let me check ... You just have a cold.

Alan:
Then what should I do? Should I take some medicine?

Doctor:
No. Just have a rest and drink more water. If you still feel bad two days later, come to me again.

Alan:OK, I get it. Thank you.
答案:示例:
(At school ...)
Alan: Amy, can you tell me the way to the hospital/how to get to the hospital?
Amy: Well, after coming out from our school, go along the street. Then turn left at the third crossing, and you can find the hospital on your left.
(In the hospital ...)
Doctor: What's wrong/the matter with you?
Alan: I feel cold and have a headache.
Doctor: Let me check ... You just have a cold.
Alan: Then what should I do? Should I take some medicine?
Doctor: No. Just have a rest and drink more water. If you still feel bad two days later, come to me again.
Alan: OK, I get it. Thank you.
解析:
【分析】
首先梳理本题的解题思路:第一步先明确题干给出的所有核心信息点:Alan发冷头疼要去看医生、Amy要结合地图指引去医院的路线、医生诊断Alan只是感冒且暂时不需要吃药,所有要点都要完整覆盖到对话中。第二步顺着场景逻辑依次补全内容:学校场景下,Alan要向Amy求助,自然是询问去医院的路线,填入问路的常用表达;Amy结合图示地图描述清晰的行进路线,符合图中学校和医院的位置关系。第三步切换到医院场景,按照就医的常规对话逻辑推进:医生先问诊询问身体状况,Alan说出自己发冷头疼的症状,医生检查后告知只是普通感冒,Alan顺势询问是否需要服药,医生回应暂时不用吃药并给出合理的休养建议,完成对话收尾,全程保证语句通顺符合口语逻辑,没有语法错误,满足字数要求。
【解析】
1. Alan的第一空:结合Alan要去看医生的需求,此处是询问去医院的路线,填写问路的常用表达the way to the hospital / how to get to the hospital即可。
2. Amy的回答:结合图示地图,从学校出发沿街直行,在第三个路口左转,医院就在左手边,清晰描述路线,完全符合图示的道路布局。
3. 医生的第一句:就医场景下医生常规问诊,使用常用表达What's wrong / the matter with you? 询问对方的身体不适情况。
4. Alan的第一句医院场景回答:对应题干给出的症状,表述自己发冷、头疼,完全符合设定的人物状态。
5. 医生的第二句:说明完成检查后,告知Alan只是得了普通感冒,符合情节设定。
6. Alan的第二句医院场景回答:顺着对话逻辑,自然询问自己是否需要服药,推动情节发展。
7. 医生的第三句:对应题干要求的“暂时不需要吃药”,给出多休息、多喝水的合理休养建议,符合生活常识。
整体对话逻辑连贯,所有题干要求的要点全部覆盖,没有语法错误。
【答案】
示例:
(At school ...)
Alan: Amy, can you tell me the way to the hospital/how to get to the hospital?
Amy: Well, after coming out from our school, go along the street. Then turn left at the third crossing, and you can find the hospital on your left.
(In the hospital ...)
Doctor: What's wrong/the matter with you?
Alan: I feel cold and have a headache.
Doctor: Let me check ... You just have a cold.
Alan: Then what should I do? Should I take some medicine?
Doctor: No. Just have a rest and drink more water. If you still feel bad two days later, come to me again.
Alan: OK, I get it. Thank you.
【知识点】
情景交际对话,问路常用表达,就医日常用语
【点评】
本题属于情景补全对话类写作,需要结合题干给出的情节提示和配套地图信息,按照日常交流的逻辑推进对话,既考察了问路、就医场景的常用英语固定表达的掌握,也要求学生能把所有给定的情节要点自然融入对话中,保证语句通顺连贯,符合口语表达习惯。
【难度系数】
0.6
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