十一、书面表达。(8分)
你的好朋友李华是一位品学兼优的学生,你一定为拥有这样的朋友而自豪吧! 请根据李华个人信息的思维导图,以“My friend Li Hua”为题,向大家介绍一下李华。
要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范,可适当发挥想象;2. 需包含思维导图中的所有要点;3. 不少于45词,已给内容不计入总词数。
My friend Li Hua
I have a good friend. His name is Li Hua. His birthday is
你的好朋友李华是一位品学兼优的学生,你一定为拥有这样的朋友而自豪吧! 请根据李华个人信息的思维导图,以“My friend Li Hua”为题,向大家介绍一下李华。
要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范,可适当发挥想象;2. 需包含思维导图中的所有要点;3. 不少于45词,已给内容不计入总词数。
My friend Li Hua
I have a good friend. His name is Li Hua. His birthday is
on the tenth of December
. He likes cooking meals and reading books
. He lives on Mango Street，near City Library
. He always goes to school by bike because his home is not far from school
. His favourite festival is the Spring Festival
. He likes this festival because he can wear new clothes，eat nice food and get many red packets. Also，all the members in his family can get together to have a big dinner at this festival
. He often reads in the library
and cooks nice Chinese food
at weekends.答案：示例：
My friend Li Hua
I have a good friend. His name is Li Hua. His birthday is on the tenth of December. He likes cooking meals and reading books. He lives on Mango Street，near City Library. He always goes to school by bike because his home is not far from school. His favourite festival is the Spring Festival. He likes this festival because he can wear new clothes，eat nice food and get many red packets. Also，all the members in his family can get together to have a big dinner at this festival. He often reads in the library and cooks nice Chinese food at weekends.
My friend Li Hua
I have a good friend. His name is Li Hua. His birthday is on the tenth of December. He likes cooking meals and reading books. He lives on Mango Street，near City Library. He always goes to school by bike because his home is not far from school. His favourite festival is the Spring Festival. He likes this festival because he can wear new clothes，eat nice food and get many red packets. Also，all the members in his family can get together to have a big dinner at this festival. He often reads in the library and cooks nice Chinese food at weekends.
解析：
【分析】
这道题是信息提示类的人物介绍写作，解题时首先要对应思维导图里的所有给定要点，逐一匹配题干给出的填空位置：1. 首先找到生日信息10th Dec.，转换为规范的英语日期表达填入第一处；2. 对应爱好cooking、reading填入第二处；3. 对应住址near City Library填入第三处，可适当补充居住的细节让内容更真实；4. 对应上学交通方式by bike，用第三人称单数的正确形式写出上学的相关内容填入第四处；5. 对应最喜欢的节日the Spring Festival填入第五处；6. 结合春节的常见习俗补充合理的原因，符合逻辑即可；7. 最后对应周末的两个活动read in the library、cook nice Chinese food填入最后两处。全程要注意使用一般现在时，第三人称谓语动词变形正确，保证所有要点都覆盖，语句通顺字数达标。
【解析】
我们按照题干给出的句子框架，逐一匹配信息并适当合理拓展：
1. 生日信息：10th Dec. 规范表达为on the tenth of December；
2. 爱好信息：cooking, reading 补充为更具体的爱好描述，让内容更丰富；
3. 住址信息：near City Library 补充合理的居住细节，让内容更真实；
4. 上学方式：by bike 用第三人称单数变形，补充说明骑车上学的合理性；
5. 最喜欢的节日：直接对应信息填写favourite festival is the Spring Festival；
6. 节日原因：结合春节常见习俗，补充团聚、吃美食、收红包等符合逻辑的内容；
7. 周末活动：对应信息用第三人称正确变形填写，完成全文。
整合后得到完全覆盖所有要点、语句通顺的完整短文。
【答案】
My friend Li Hua
I have a good friend. His name is Li Hua. His birthday is on the tenth of December. He likes cooking meals and reading books. He lives on Mango Street, near City Library. He always goes to school by bike because his home is not far from school. His favourite festival is the Spring Festival. He likes this festival because he can wear new clothes, eat nice food and get many red packets. Also, all the members in his family can get together to have a big dinner at this festival. He often reads in the library and cooks nice Chinese food at weekends.
【知识点】
人物介绍写作，日期表达，一般现在时
【点评】
本题属于基础的提示类英语写作，难度较低，只需要将给定的思维导图信息全部梳理整合，注意第三人称单数的谓语动词变形规则，适当补充少量符合生活逻辑的细节就能让行文流畅自然，拿到全分，答题时注意不要遗漏任何给定的要点即可。
【难度系数】
0.7
这道题是信息提示类的人物介绍写作，解题时首先要对应思维导图里的所有给定要点，逐一匹配题干给出的填空位置：1. 首先找到生日信息10th Dec.，转换为规范的英语日期表达填入第一处；2. 对应爱好cooking、reading填入第二处；3. 对应住址near City Library填入第三处，可适当补充居住的细节让内容更真实；4. 对应上学交通方式by bike，用第三人称单数的正确形式写出上学的相关内容填入第四处；5. 对应最喜欢的节日the Spring Festival填入第五处；6. 结合春节的常见习俗补充合理的原因，符合逻辑即可；7. 最后对应周末的两个活动read in the library、cook nice Chinese food填入最后两处。全程要注意使用一般现在时，第三人称谓语动词变形正确，保证所有要点都覆盖，语句通顺字数达标。
【解析】
我们按照题干给出的句子框架，逐一匹配信息并适当合理拓展：
1. 生日信息：10th Dec. 规范表达为on the tenth of December；
2. 爱好信息：cooking, reading 补充为更具体的爱好描述，让内容更丰富；
3. 住址信息：near City Library 补充合理的居住细节，让内容更真实；
4. 上学方式：by bike 用第三人称单数变形，补充说明骑车上学的合理性；
5. 最喜欢的节日：直接对应信息填写favourite festival is the Spring Festival；
6. 节日原因：结合春节常见习俗，补充团聚、吃美食、收红包等符合逻辑的内容；
7. 周末活动：对应信息用第三人称正确变形填写，完成全文。
整合后得到完全覆盖所有要点、语句通顺的完整短文。
【答案】
My friend Li Hua
I have a good friend. His name is Li Hua. His birthday is on the tenth of December. He likes cooking meals and reading books. He lives on Mango Street, near City Library. He always goes to school by bike because his home is not far from school. His favourite festival is the Spring Festival. He likes this festival because he can wear new clothes, eat nice food and get many red packets. Also, all the members in his family can get together to have a big dinner at this festival. He often reads in the library and cooks nice Chinese food at weekends.
【知识点】
人物介绍写作，日期表达，一般现在时
【点评】
本题属于基础的提示类英语写作，难度较低，只需要将给定的思维导图信息全部梳理整合，注意第三人称单数的谓语动词变形规则，适当补充少量符合生活逻辑的细节就能让行文流畅自然，拿到全分，答题时注意不要遗漏任何给定的要点即可。
【难度系数】
0.7