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假如你是Mark,请根据图片提示,以"How do we go to school?"为题写出你和朋友们的上学方式。
要求:1. 语句通顺,书写规范。 2. 不少于40个单词,开头已给出,不计数。
信息解读
要点点拨
·参考词汇: by bus、on foot、by car、by metro。
·参考句型: 1. He goes to school on foot.
2. She goes to school by car.
实战整篇
How do we go to school?
My name is Mark.
假如你是Mark,请根据图片提示,以"How do we go to school?"为题写出你和朋友们的上学方式。
要求:1. 语句通顺,书写规范。 2. 不少于40个单词,开头已给出,不计数。
信息解读
要点点拨
·参考词汇: by bus、on foot、by car、by metro。
·参考句型: 1. He goes to school on foot.
2. She goes to school by car.
实战整篇
How do we go to school?
My name is Mark.
I'm a student. I live on
Nanshan Street. It's far from my school. I go to
school by bus. My friend Peter lives near school.
He goes to school on foot. Lily's father is a
teacher. He teaches us Chinese. Lily goes to
school in her father's car every day. Tim lives far
from school. So he goes to school by metro. We
go to school in different ways. What about you?
Nanshan Street. It's far from my school. I go to
school by bus. My friend Peter lives near school.
He goes to school on foot. Lily's father is a
teacher. He teaches us Chinese. Lily goes to
school in her father's car every day. Tim lives far
from school. So he goes to school by metro. We
go to school in different ways. What about you?
答案：范文:
How do we go to school?
My name is Mark. I'm a student. I live on
Nanshan Street. It's far from my school. I go to
school by bus. My friend Peter lives near school.
He goes to school on foot. Lily's father is a
teacher. He teaches us Chinese. Lily goes to
school in her father's car every day. Tim lives far
from school. So he goes to school by metro. We
go to school in different ways. What about you?
How do we go to school?
My name is Mark. I'm a student. I live on
Nanshan Street. It's far from my school. I go to
school by bus. My friend Peter lives near school.
He goes to school on foot. Lily's father is a
teacher. He teaches us Chinese. Lily goes to
school in her father's car every day. Tim lives far
from school. So he goes to school by metro. We
go to school in different ways. What about you?
解析：
【分析】
首先拿到这道题先明确写作要求：以Mark的视角，介绍自己和朋友们的上学出行方式，需要用到题干给出的4种交通方式短语，语句通顺不少于40词。解题思路可以按三步走：第一步，承接给定的开头，先补充自己的基本情况，说明住址和学校的距离，顺理成章引出自己的上学交通方式；第二步，依次给剩下的3种交通方式对应不同的朋友，每介绍一位朋友都可以先铺垫他家和学校的距离，再引出对应的出行方式，用上题干给出的参考句型，保证逻辑合理；第三步，最后加一句总结句，点明大家上学的方式各不相同，收尾让文章结构完整，最后检查字数和语句通顺度，确认符合所有要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头补充自身信息：先说明自己是学生，住在南山街，家离学校很远，引出自己坐公交上学，用上参考短语by bus。
2. 介绍第一位朋友Peter：设定他家住在学校附近，对应步行上学，套用参考句型He goes to school on foot。
3. 介绍第二位朋友Lily：补充小细节说明她的爸爸是我们的语文老师，每天开车送她上学，用上参考短语by car，符合参考句型的表达逻辑。
4. 介绍第三位朋友Tim：设定他家距离学校很远，选择坐地铁上学，用上参考短语by metro。
5. 最后补充总结句，说明我们用不同的方式上学，还可以用反问句询问对方的情况，让文章更自然，整体内容连贯，字数远超要求的40词，完全符合题目要求。
【答案】
How do we go to school?
My name is Mark. I'm a student. I live on Nanshan Street. It's far from my school. I go to school by bus. My friend Peter lives near school. He goes to school on foot. Lily's father is a teacher. He teaches us Chinese. Lily goes to school in her father's car every day. Tim lives far from school. So he goes to school by metro. We go to school in different ways. What about you?
【知识点】
出行方式英语表达，一般现在时用法，提示类英语写作
【点评】
本题属于小学英语基础提示写作题，题干已经给出了所有需要用到的核心词汇和参考句型，不需要学生额外拓展复杂内容，只需要按照“介绍自身出行-依次介绍不同朋友的出行-总结”的逻辑串联内容，适当补充少量合理细节让行文更通顺饱满，就可以轻松达到题目的各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道题先明确写作要求：以Mark的视角，介绍自己和朋友们的上学出行方式，需要用到题干给出的4种交通方式短语，语句通顺不少于40词。解题思路可以按三步走：第一步，承接给定的开头，先补充自己的基本情况，说明住址和学校的距离，顺理成章引出自己的上学交通方式；第二步，依次给剩下的3种交通方式对应不同的朋友，每介绍一位朋友都可以先铺垫他家和学校的距离，再引出对应的出行方式，用上题干给出的参考句型，保证逻辑合理；第三步，最后加一句总结句，点明大家上学的方式各不相同，收尾让文章结构完整，最后检查字数和语句通顺度，确认符合所有要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头补充自身信息：先说明自己是学生，住在南山街，家离学校很远，引出自己坐公交上学，用上参考短语by bus。
2. 介绍第一位朋友Peter：设定他家住在学校附近，对应步行上学，套用参考句型He goes to school on foot。
3. 介绍第二位朋友Lily：补充小细节说明她的爸爸是我们的语文老师，每天开车送她上学，用上参考短语by car，符合参考句型的表达逻辑。
4. 介绍第三位朋友Tim：设定他家距离学校很远，选择坐地铁上学，用上参考短语by metro。
5. 最后补充总结句，说明我们用不同的方式上学，还可以用反问句询问对方的情况，让文章更自然，整体内容连贯，字数远超要求的40词，完全符合题目要求。
【答案】
How do we go to school?
My name is Mark. I'm a student. I live on Nanshan Street. It's far from my school. I go to school by bus. My friend Peter lives near school. He goes to school on foot. Lily's father is a teacher. He teaches us Chinese. Lily goes to school in her father's car every day. Tim lives far from school. So he goes to school by metro. We go to school in different ways. What about you?
【知识点】
出行方式英语表达，一般现在时用法，提示类英语写作
【点评】
本题属于小学英语基础提示写作题，题干已经给出了所有需要用到的核心词汇和参考句型，不需要学生额外拓展复杂内容，只需要按照“介绍自身出行-依次介绍不同朋友的出行-总结”的逻辑串联内容，适当补充少量合理细节让行文更通顺饱满，就可以轻松达到题目的各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.7